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Pacman; Ghosts of the past
Haven't the ghosts driven you crazy yet?
Their attitude is not encouraging
Life after life, is it the same as before?
So what is this zeal for? ...
Fighting ghosts, even after death,
Break on a visit, chase and break bones with
ethereal jaws, worn out mouths
On a completely virtual firmament
They feed on lives, and only live on that
You get stronger, but only for a while
You change roles, but again a blow to your crown
And even the end of the game is not the end,
the Credits lie
Always wandering around the maze
Closed marathon, equal to the sprint
You can never step down in pursuit
Time to collect stones and dots
Their attitude is not encouraging
Life after life, is it the same as before?
So what is this zeal for? ...
Fighting ghosts, even after death,
Break on a visit, chase and break bones with
ethereal jaws, worn out mouths
On a completely virtual firmament
They feed on lives, and only live on that
You get stronger, but only for a while
You change roles, but again a blow to your crown
And even the end of the game is not the end,
the Credits lie
Always wandering around the maze
Closed marathon, equal to the sprint
You can never step down in pursuit
Time to collect stones and dots
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Thank you Poetspeak for allowing me to use one of your incredible original digital art to compliment and enhance this.
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Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 9:04pm
Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 9:15pm
Oh, that's so true... A never ending venture that just leads to more dots. Trying to eat the ghosts so they don't haunt us. Thanks for the comment Adagio. 🕹️👾
Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 9:24pm
Ghosts often gather at the window of a soul departing. Be sure to connect the dots. I prefer the lemon and cherry dots.
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Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 9:26pm
They do indeed. I will take the lemon dots or key lime dots or dark chocolate. ;)
Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 9:07pm
Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 9:19pm
Yes, definitely. Although I think Pacman is always relevant. ;) I am really happy you liked it FeN. Thank you so much for the comment. 🕹️👾 Bless and love back at ya. :)
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Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 9:27pm
Thanks BP. I have to admit things were really hard last week but at least there is some normalcy setting in this week. Thank you so much for the comment. 🕹️👾
Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 9:26pm
Awesome using a retro game to describe life
Absolutely clever write
Love and light
Ron x
Absolutely clever write
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 9:45pm
Sometimes we get inspiration in interesting places and people. I am really happy you thought the retro game basis was clever Ron. Thank you so much for the comment. 🕹️👾
Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 10:31pm
So much truth mixed in with so many lies
We are someone else's lunch constantly
Dark, foreboding and scary
You pushed our buttons
In the video game of life and maybe survival
It was an honor to have you use my digital image
Wondrous Poem
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
We are someone else's lunch constantly
Dark, foreboding and scary
You pushed our buttons
In the video game of life and maybe survival
It was an honor to have you use my digital image
Wondrous Poem
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
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Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 10:44pm
It was an honor to use it; thank you. :) Also, thank you so much for the BIG LIKE and RL. :) So true that we are someone's lunch constantly but we still try to get those power pellets and eat the ghosts before they eat us. Constantly pushing buttons and playing with joy sticks. lol 🕹️👾
Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 11:00pm
Ah the eternal recurrence said Nietzsche...the constant escape of ennui.
Poignant and powerful, Kristina.
🙏 Harry
Poignant and powerful, Kristina.
🙏 Harry
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Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 11:08pm
Ah yes, definitely. I love that 'the constant escape of ennui' - ah there are so many things we do to escape and there are some I consider much more fun than video games. ;) Thank you so much for the comment Harry. Really happy you found it poignant and powerful. 🕹️👾
Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 11:13pm
You eat the ghost of your past and live your life to the fullest. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
30th Mar 2021 11:27pm
Always trying to get those power pellets so I can kill past trauma and live life to the fullest. Thank you so much for the encouragement Francisco. You are great. :) 🕹️👾
Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
31st Mar 2021 2:28am
Did you know that each ghost is programmed to only travel in a certain section of the maze, and that their movements are utterly predictable? It's fun to watch my son play Pacman, because he's cracked the code and knows exactly when it's safe & when it's not. I guess learning about our own ghosts in life is similar. Power pellets aren't the only solution. Watch & learn so you can tell when to be brave and when to turn tail and run...
Really awesome metaphor. Grabbed this Gen-Xer's heart! ❤
Really awesome metaphor. Grabbed this Gen-Xer's heart! ❤
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Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
31st Mar 2021 12:36pm
It would be nice if we all knew when it's safe and when it's not in life but our ghosts can be unpredictable or we ignore the patterns. That's so true; watch and learn - so often we repeat the same mistakes or gravitate to the same type of people. Power pellets, run or be brave. I am really glad you liked the metaphor and I love grabbing hearts. ;) Really great advice in your comment BT. Listening and observing more can definitely save a lot of time and problems.🕹️👾
Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
31st Mar 2021 5:04am
I love this. Yep, the ghosts have been winning in my life, but they mean no harm just floating around here in the dark...they're trying to figure out the maze too. ❤❤❤ at least I think that's what's up with my ghosts...😃
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Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
31st Mar 2021 12:39pm
We need as many power pellets as we can get. :) I think that's a great observation that many of our ghosts are just trying to figure out the maze too. Some can do a lot of damage in that quest though. Thank you so much for the comment Margo. 🕹️👾💖
Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
31st Mar 2021 6:57pm
As always you are unique in your poetic metaphors and subjects. Excellent. Hug and peace, oeal
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Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
31st Mar 2021 7:34pm
Thank you so much Oral, I am really happy you like the poetic metaphors and variety. :) And I really appreciate the compliment and comment. 🕹️👾
Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
Go ahead, mock my inability to play PacMan😄 This passage is to me a profound question about religious piety,
"Life after life, is it the same as before?
So what is this zeal for?"
Brava, goddess BD❣❣
"Life after life, is it the same as before?
So what is this zeal for?"
Brava, goddess BD❣❣
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Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
1st Apr 2021 1:27am
Haha, cmon GW I know you can play PacMan. I suppose I had not thought about it as much in the religious sense. More of a repeating the same mistakes and the constant trials and tribulations. Although most of what I write has multiple meanings, this is one reason I love getting feedback. Seeing what others think of when they read something. Thank you so much for the comment and feedback.
Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
5th Apr 2021 1:23am
Nice poem.
It can be deepened:
"Always wandering around the maze... " ... ... PAC: Parent-Adult-Child
"Time to collect stones and dots... " ... ... ... ... Time to collect our life
... ... ... ...
😍👍
It can be deepened:
"Always wandering around the maze... " ... ... PAC: Parent-Adult-Child
"Time to collect stones and dots... " ... ... ... ... Time to collect our life
... ... ... ...
😍👍
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Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
5th Apr 2021 1:03pm
Hey Marks! it's good to see you. Ah, the deepening... ;) I really like that last line. and your meaning for PAC as an abbreviation... Now we need to think of a abbreviation meaning for MAN to make it complete. ;) 🕹️👾
Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
5th Apr 2021 3:21pm
PAC: Parent-Adult-Child
The MAN (and/or WOMAN) alternates the roles of parent, adult and child all the time.
... ... ...
The MAN (and/or WOMAN) alternates the roles of parent, adult and child all the time.
... ... ...
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Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
5th Apr 2021 3:39pm
Ah yes, that's so true. Thanks Marks, I really enjoyed getting your feedback on this one. :)
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6th Apr 2021 00:56am
Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
12th Apr 2021 6:32pm
Great use of metaphor here Kristina. I can't help but wonder about those ghosts and how sometimes they linger for a while.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
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Re: Re. Pacman; Ghosts of the past
12th Apr 2021 7:11pm
I am really glad you like the metaphor. Those ghosts do tend to linger chasing us or emerging at unexpected times to remind us of the past and how many lives we lost there. Thank you so much for the comment and compliment Wally. 🕹️👾