My vaccine

Great piece, beautiful write
Lovely read
Love and light Ron xx

Thanks Ron, I am really happy you felt it was a lovely read. I needed to write something positive. :) I am wondering what T.K.P means. I will probably feel stupid once I know. lol 💉🩸💘

I took it off, its my secret identity lol
Love and light
Ron xx

"Your eyes chained my heart to yours"

The created visual on that line.   I enjoyed reading this.

I am really happy you were able to connect with imagery on and enjoyed this one Lj. :) 💉🩸💘 Thank you so much for the comment.

This was the ultimate. Maybe the best of DUP.

Wow! Thank you so much Adagio. That is such an incredible comment, you really made me feel good and I can definitely use that right now. 💉🩸💘

Dear Kristina, this is deeply romantic with equal parts melancholy. Ckever use of "vaccine." This is a wonderful passage to go along with the word,
"It absorbed somewhere in the region of the soul"
And this passage fascinates me,
"You are my ultimate, my dear executioner"
I'm sorry you're missing whomever you're missing
Bravissima, goddess BD❣❣

As usual you see the many aspects of it. Vaccine just came to mind but it is all over the news so I guess that's not to much a surprise. ;) Again you picked one of my favorite lines about the soul. The other line has a number of possibly meanings. Thank you so much for the comment, GW.  💉🩸💘

Nice originality with this ... like the vaccine metaphor ... nice flow ... gripping ... last line brings the poem home ...

I try to tie things off with the last lines so I am really happy you felt the last line brought things home; and liked the vaccine metaphor and flow. :) Thank you so much LDF! you are a poetry star and I love getting your thoughts. 💉🩸💘

This is a beautiful offering
I like when you reveal your heart
I've read a lot of your writing
Have I said miraculous lately ?
BIG LIKE

RL AWARD

Trying to keep my offerings going. Been a very hard and scary week but I like writing so it can take my mind off things sometimes. Lately, not sure but I really LOVE hearing it anytime. ;p Thank you so much for wonderful comment, BL and RL! 💉🩸💘

Only one injection of love is the perfect shot. To find yourself suddenly the one place high on a shelf waiting for that certain perfect someone. Super tight Lady

Ah, yes it is. Definitely showing your romantic side I_IS_ME. ;) Yes, the wait can certainly be hard though... Need someone tall to get me off that shelf. :p Thank you so much for the super tight, you know I love that. 💉🩸💘

We've found height is totally relevant to those two and their perception of love. The individual may actually be one of the little people.

I like this Kristina.  I enjoy the idea behind this.

Hey Remy! I am really happy you liked it and the idea behind it. Thank you so much for the comment. 💉🩸💘

Then your hearts become one.  Keep on writing.

That's the best when that happens, Francisco. 💕 Thank you so much for the comment. 💉🩸💘

That's an interesting metaphor and your vulnerability is palpable. Beautiful work.

Hey Daniel! It's always great to see you. Hopefully less vulnerability when getting the vaccine. ;) Thank you so much for the compliment. I really appreciate it your opinion always. 💉🩸💘

I am getting my vaccination early next week. Slowly but surely we overcome.

Oh, to be so in love you're immune to all others...lovely, very romantic piece! ❤

'immune to all others' - yes that's perfect. ;) Have to keep dosing with vaccine to keep that going. I am happy you found it very romantic. :) Thank you so much for the comment BT. 💉🩸💘

Dear K,

Wonderful poem! I thought this was such an original idea for the use of the word since it’s vaccine vaccine vaccine everywhere. And the spin you give has such a positive notion instead of being associated with an illness, that is a genius creative mind at work. To sick in love and get a shot of love to carry on in love is magical. This is my take away. Lovely switch up and well done. I know you’re probably going to tell me your formatting was a rush job but I do love the bolded text throughout in emphasizing certain words/phrases. Gives it that extra panache. Awesome. H🌷

Definitely vaccine everywhere; sure that's why it stuck in my mind and then this is what happened to that thought. :) I am happy you thought it was creative, my mind always takes stuff and does something with it. Not sure it always works but there is variety. ;) That shot of love helps you to endure anything and  stay healthy. You know me, yes it was an impatient rush job lol  but I always love when you say it worked and adds something. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment Honoria. xo 💉🩸💘

It's so difficult to write a love piece without sounding cheesy, I find. You've achieved it flawlessly.

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment, TQO. I am really happy you liked it and that it wasn't cheesy. :) I have written some you might consider cheesy but cheesy can be okay sometimes. lol :p 💉🩸💘

I love cheesy, to be honest, but I hate writing things that I consider cheesy. I don't know why

Edit: On reflection, I suppose it's the fact that cheesiness reflects this idea of perfect love that I don't think exists, at least not for me.

You have a very good point in regards to perfect love. Relationships always take work and pretty sure they are never perfect.

I like ringing the right bells, the fun and sexy ones. ;) And I LOVE coconut; so I am really happy to win one. Glad it wasn't strawberries or something like that. :p Really happy you liked it Wilber. 💉🩸💘

Somehow you made getting shot up sound sexy and sensual (lol).
But I do love the metaphor weaving throughout this piece especially with lines like "Your fingers branded me with their paints" vivid and eye opening.
Well done Kristina.

I can make anything sound sexy and sensual, even getting a jab. (that sounds dirty too lol). Really happy you liked the metaphor, I guess I had vaccines stuck in my mind. I am getting mine tomorrow. That is one of my favorite lines Wally. :) Thank you so much for the comment and compliment. 💉🩸💘