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Sorry, maybe?
You asked my opinion
maybe didn't expect it...
intensity overwhelms you
moderation eludes me
Too much?
Now your silence...
Shit, I've done it again
maybe didn't expect it...
intensity overwhelms you
moderation eludes me
Too much?
Now your silence...
Shit, I've done it again
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Tearing down walls and burning bridges
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Re. Sorry, maybe?
25th Jan 2021 11:43pm
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26th Jan 2021 2:20am
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26th Jan 2021 2:22am
I love this comment. Subconsciously, I already know before I strike the match, but I do it anyway.... otherwise, everything is bullshit.
Thanks for getting it.
Thanks for getting it.
Re. Sorry, maybe?
26th Jan 2021 00:07am
I burn them all the time
Sometimes you have to burn them to blow out all the carbon and then start fresh again
Powerful flashpoint ink
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Sometimes you have to burn them to blow out all the carbon and then start fresh again
Powerful flashpoint ink
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Re: Re. Sorry, maybe?
26th Jan 2021 2:27am
My goal is usually tearing down walls... the bridges are collateral damage.
Thanks, Poet
Thanks, Poet
Re. Sorry, maybe?
26th Jan 2021 00:08am
My dad (jokingly) would say that I shouldn't let my my mouth overload my ass....
I can hear his reminder, sometimes.. lol
I feel this write, completely.
I can hear his reminder, sometimes.. lol
I feel this write, completely.
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26th Jan 2021 2:29am
LOL, great expression!
Never trying to hurt, but I get a little overzealous at times...
Thanks for the love!
Never trying to hurt, but I get a little overzealous at times...
Thanks for the love!
Re: Re. Sorry, maybe?
26th Jan 2021 2:39am
I get that! I'm self deprecating mostly but I get carried away, in moments... lmao!
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Hee hee hee
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Hee hee hee
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Re. Sorry, maybe?
26th Jan 2021 4:45am
Every experience holds a valuable lesson. I govern my behavior online with awareness gained by countless mistakes in twenty five years reaching out through this medium. Thankfully we carry the lesson into relationships that are always rising anew. "We are like newborn children, our power is the power to grow." Rabindranath Tagore 💖🙏
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Re: Re. Sorry, maybe?
27th Jan 2021 3:41am
Thankfully, I rarely have these foot-in-mouth experiences online... I don't type that fast! But in real life, I sometimes lose my filter...
Thanks, Daniel
Thanks, Daniel
Re. Sorry, maybe?
26th Jan 2021 6:38pm
Those who cannot accept you for being honest perhaps don't belong in your circle? Remember it's not on you; it's on them.
Well stated.
Well stated.
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27th Jan 2021 3:47am
Re. Sorry, maybe?
27th Jan 2021 4:58am
...hmmmm I always did like thought provoking pithy writes. Perhaps tearing down walls are healing revelations to what's inside those walls and only true friends care enough to tear them down in the first place. However be careful with burning bridges because those sorts of conflicts with friendships may require you to build New Bridges for your friends to ''Get Over It'!....Exhausting!.
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29th Jan 2021 1:28pm
I am very much in favour of burning down walls!! It's mostly good, but it means I sometimes struggle to know other people's boundaries. My true friends get it, but sometimes they go quiet for a while, and then my mind fills in the blanks with my own insecurities.... Fortunately I'm pretty good at rebuilding the bridges I've demolished!
Thanks for your thoughtful comments, Feet!
Thanks for your thoughtful comments, Feet!
Re. Sorry, maybe?
2nd Feb 2021 10:55pm
Oh god, I know this one all to well. lol At least I know I am in good company!!!! Absolutely perfect, BT. Maybe we both need a filter...
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21st Feb 2021 11:45pm
Thanks so much for the love and RL on this write! Just getting caught up...
Glad to know I'm not alone in this struggle.
Glad to know I'm not alone in this struggle.