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the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
a vivid dream
or could it be
the starved reality
of a parallel universe
correcting time and space...
where naked isn't sinful
it is Genesis itself.
Eden is burnt to ash.
before all creation
theirs is passion that first was
transgression never existed
definitions and meanings
are rewritten
in sweat, cum
and unholy need
a combustible ache
of understanding
accessing true love's molten epicenter
like Romeo and Juliet
or Anthony and Cleopatra
infused mythos and star crossed
forged by purest fervid strength
fused in moonlight and mystic matter
Loves own proof
that such luminous unmitigated desire
is fire born from proven legend
inspiring poets and playwrights
to ardent pen the written word,
eternal forever muses...
... of their own birthed sin
Author's Note
©Blu2020 along with AP56
Made possible because of AspergerPoet56~
where the heart of William Wallace beats under that cardboard robotic armor... ;)
Ty, C
🌹-xo
Made possible because of AspergerPoet56~
where the heart of William Wallace beats under that cardboard robotic armor... ;)
Ty, C
🌹-xo
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Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
22nd Jan 2021 8:30pm
To freaking tight to not comment of this, simply the merging of the two of your words without a break. Dang this is a beautiful piece with that freaking graphic, to tight, congrats you two
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Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
Me,
Thank you for reading and those comments, that kinda blow my mind.... lol....So appreciative of the kind words, as I am the world's worst collaborative partner, however I do try my hardest! ... AP is a generous and kind soul... to say the least.
We both send our gratitude...
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Thank you for reading and those comments, that kinda blow my mind.... lol....So appreciative of the kind words, as I am the world's worst collaborative partner, however I do try my hardest! ... AP is a generous and kind soul... to say the least.
We both send our gratitude...
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
22nd Jan 2021 8:35pm
Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
22nd Jan 2021 9:08pm
Dearest FeNyX.... we thank you for reading... your thoughtfulness is deeply appreciated!
Returned blessings and love,
🌹
Returned blessings and love,
🌹
Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
Splendid collab from two of my favs ... brilliant ... simply brilliant ...
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Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
22nd Jan 2021 9:15pm
Ty so much, LilD
glad you enjoyed it and couldn't have done it without Colin's generosity ... your comments and list add are so incredibly kind.
Much love,
🌹
xo
glad you enjoyed it and couldn't have done it without Colin's generosity ... your comments and list add are so incredibly kind.
Much love,
🌹
xo
Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
22nd Jan 2021 8:35pm
Wow you can’t even tell who is who, now that’s a great collaboration 👍🏻 excellent job you two bravo!
Pen hugs
Jackie ❣️🌹
Pen hugs
Jackie ❣️🌹
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Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
22nd Jan 2021 9:20pm
*hugs back..
Jackie
Your sentiments are beautiful and valued. Collab's are difficult for me and this one was only made possible because AP is a good dude!!
We thank you deeply for everything!
💜 🌹 💜
xo
B
Jackie
Your sentiments are beautiful and valued. Collab's are difficult for me and this one was only made possible because AP is a good dude!!
We thank you deeply for everything!
💜 🌹 💜
xo
B
Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
22nd Jan 2021 9:02pm
Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
22nd Jan 2021 9:16pm
lol... I happen to agree 💯 💯 💯 with you!
Thank you for reading and your thoughtful remarks, Francisco!
🌹
Thank you for reading and your thoughtful remarks, Francisco!
🌹
Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
22nd Jan 2021 9:26pm
Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
22nd Jan 2021 11:48pm
I think that sums AP and I up in one sentence...
... completely... ;)
💜
Tyvm, Tim
🌹
xo
... completely... ;)
💜
Tyvm, Tim
🌹
xo
Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
22nd Jan 2021 10:28pm
Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
🙇♀️
Hi Tallen!
it's so lovely seeing you and I hope you've been doing well... I'm glad you enjoyed our piece and to meld is to know someone through and through... lol....
Ty for reading, the list add and all your loveliness.
I'm grateful for you!
🌹
xo
B
Hi Tallen!
it's so lovely seeing you and I hope you've been doing well... I'm glad you enjoyed our piece and to meld is to know someone through and through... lol....
Ty for reading, the list add and all your loveliness.
I'm grateful for you!
🌹
xo
B
Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
22nd Jan 2021 11:47pm
"where naked isn't sinful
it is Genesis itself.
Eden is burnt to ash." makes me think of that Lennon quote where he says that we make love in the dark but partake in warfare in open daylight.
Before religion became this organised belief system there was love, no rules of who could love whom. It was our birth, we have become so because of love.
it is Genesis itself.
Eden is burnt to ash." makes me think of that Lennon quote where he says that we make love in the dark but partake in warfare in open daylight.
Before religion became this organised belief system there was love, no rules of who could love whom. It was our birth, we have become so because of love.
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Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
23rd Jan 2021 4:59am
Your observations about organized religion aren't lost on me... I have a bit of a an issue there.(so I leave that topic for now...) Your reading and list add are a highlight, tonight.. appreciated
I enjoyed reading your comments and thoughts.., Kieron, It's refreshing to get an idea of what's going on in another's head pertaining to a shared write... I thank you for such a privilege.. 🙏
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
I enjoyed reading your comments and thoughts.., Kieron, It's refreshing to get an idea of what's going on in another's head pertaining to a shared write... I thank you for such a privilege.. 🙏
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
23rd Jan 2021 12:57pm
You are most welcome. Hope I didn't over step my mark and insult you. I was going to to say last thing that I want to do, like, it's a at the bottom of a list... I never want to insult you at all
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Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
23rd Jan 2021 1:19pm
Ohh God no!
My issue is with organized religion.. ONLY... (fuckers).. You're brilliant and lovely ;) ... sorry for the confusion, I was replying and drinking an enormous beer last night!! Not much of a drinker, yet felt the hankering...
Ty for being so generously kind
🌹
Have a good afternoon
x
B
My issue is with organized religion.. ONLY... (fuckers).. You're brilliant and lovely ;) ... sorry for the confusion, I was replying and drinking an enormous beer last night!! Not much of a drinker, yet felt the hankering...
Ty for being so generously kind
🌹
Have a good afternoon
x
B
Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
23rd Jan 2021 2:14am
I love the ideA of an alternate reality where sensuality, sexual intimacy, and nakedness are not labeled as sinful or dirty but rather one of the most transcendent of human experiences. Tutti Bravissimo🌹❣❣
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Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
I'm right there with you, my dearest B!! I like the feeling that love and sexual attraction can feel so empowering and transformative that it crosses into a new version (feeling) of space and time... To feel unlike you've every felt... so much that it's even out of "God's" hands... in it's full powerful driving force!!! argggghhhhhh... To be so full of feeling and desire! The living embodiment of LUST.... Purrr...... lol! Thank you so much for reading, the list add and your genuine curiosity!
I'm extremely lucky!!
🌹
xo
B
I'm extremely lucky!!
🌹
xo
B
Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
23rd Jan 2021 5:17am
It can be frustrating needing passion and deep intimacy and not finding a kindred sensual soul. 💞
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Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
23rd Jan 2021 5:20am
"They" need to come up with a new word that's deeper and more meaningful than FRUSTRATING 😤... because then it would ALMOST cover it... (for me)... lmao... poor poor Blue ( everyone say it together:... Awwww)
🐻 💋 🐻 💋 🐻 💋 🐻
🐻 💋 🐻 💋 🐻 💋 🐻
Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
23rd Jan 2021 5:37am
Amen! It is to me an undefinable yearning, an insatiable hunger, an unquenchable thirst. 🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
23rd Jan 2021 5:25am
Masterful Collaboration! The ingenuity of your talents combined in poetry is sheer artistry on full display. BRAVO!!!
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Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
Ron,
So nice seeing you tonight... ;)
I'm glad you enjoyed our little poetic offering.
Your comments made me smile and chuckle... because I'm so hard on myself and collaboration is difficult, difficult, difficult.. for me.... so, (Ty
Ty for the RL add and being of such kindness . I always appreciate your visits!
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B
So nice seeing you tonight... ;)
I'm glad you enjoyed our little poetic offering.
Your comments made me smile and chuckle... because I'm so hard on myself and collaboration is difficult, difficult, difficult.. for me.... so, (Ty
Ty for the RL add and being of such kindness . I always appreciate your visits!
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B
Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
23rd Jan 2021 5:28am
Wow. Just...wow. This is really incredible. Congrats to you both; this is some fine work 💜.
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Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
Luna,
We both thank you for your awesome sentiments.
I'm so happy you enjoyed it... I'm not a naturally good collaborator, which is a challenge, but luckily, AP was ahhmazing. I'm lucky in his friendship.... without a doubt.
I appreciate the list add and your visits, so.
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
We both thank you for your awesome sentiments.
I'm so happy you enjoyed it... I'm not a naturally good collaborator, which is a challenge, but luckily, AP was ahhmazing. I'm lucky in his friendship.... without a doubt.
I appreciate the list add and your visits, so.
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
23rd Jan 2021 9:38am
Re: Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
23rd Jan 2021 6:42pm
Thank you for reading and your comments, my friend... You're very kind
🌹
xo
-B
🌹
xo
-B
Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
24th Jan 2021 9:48pm
Fuck this is fabulous poetry blue!!🔥🌹
You've captured the inspirations of the past... and made them present... you inspire us again to be real... and feel... just a lovely poetic creation with the passion of truth with the gift of imagination to make our dreams legends...⚡⚘
You've captured the inspirations of the past... and made them present... you inspire us again to be real... and feel... just a lovely poetic creation with the passion of truth with the gift of imagination to make our dreams legends...⚡⚘
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Re. the genesis of lust and moonlight. ~ w/AspergerPoet56
Anonymous
26th Jan 2021 10:11pm
Absolutely brilliant. Such an interesting perspective. Re-wiring reality and making it oh so more palatable.
Congratulations to you both.
Congratulations to you both.
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