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an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
they thought supposed unknown
with a trite hidden face
intended brutal stark malice
and pure dark hearted abhorrence
on full display
a misled wrath enraged,
inflamed to explosive ignited
'tis truer than-- and now an abundant disgrace
as bigot's evil desperately perpetrated
purposeful
down through to very bone, encouraged
riled to such gross severe,
belief of an uncommon pointless hate
all goodness and sense
left wilting to forsake
bloodied.
bullied.
beaten.
killed.
instigated by A singular
insipidly inside his own deepest inferior
realities liar
a blackest of unimaginable holes
where senseless lives and dwells
...only until...
common sense takes back her reigns of control
Author's Note
Common sense competition
pic via the web
epitome of no common sense.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11719/
©Blu2020
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epitome of no common sense.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11719/
©Blu2020
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Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
13th Jan 2021 7:34pm
Oh I hope the troubled times are over for you lot now, hopefully truth will prevail and you all can unite or at least accept your differences
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
13th Jan 2021 7:47pm
We still have a ways to go yet...
Thank you for reading, my friend
I'm appreciative 🙏
🌹
xo
B
Thank you for reading, my friend
I'm appreciative 🙏
🌹
xo
B
Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
13th Jan 2021 7:37pm
Nicely written telling the tale of terror perpetrated
by believers in an idiot who incited insurrection...
Now , I am hoping we are headed for two things...
Impeachment , and a backing down of the
violence some are still attempting to plan...
May common sense prevail !
by believers in an idiot who incited insurrection...
Now , I am hoping we are headed for two things...
Impeachment , and a backing down of the
violence some are still attempting to plan...
May common sense prevail !
1
Re: Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
13th Jan 2021 7:46pm
McConnell isn't going to bring the articles of impeachment to the senate in enough time, purposely holding them until AFTER trump is out of office (protecting him yet again) .. I just read the news article... what a colossal shame... he's truly as vile as *45 himself.....
smh
Thank you for reading!
I'm appreciative
💜
xoxo
smh
Thank you for reading!
I'm appreciative
💜
xoxo
Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
13th Jan 2021 7:42pm
We champion Blackwolf's comment, we couldn't had said it better or add anything to it, tight work Lady.
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Re: Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
13th Jan 2021 8:16pm
Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
13th Jan 2021 8:13pm
Re: Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
13th Jan 2021 8:18pm
Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
13th Jan 2021 8:24pm
Common sense is a myth, opioid for the masses, intended to provide the illusion of making sense out of the absurd or frightening.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
13th Jan 2021 8:29pm
it's a soothing sense of smoke and mirrors... lol However , I like to think that I have been fortunate enough to at least understand THAT, which gives those like us almost a leg up... (almost!)
Ty for reading, bk
Your thought provoking comments, always impress and make for an excellent visit...
Plus, I had to write SOMETHING for the comp.. hahahaha
Much love and returned furry hugs,
🌹
xo
B
Ty for reading, bk
Your thought provoking comments, always impress and make for an excellent visit...
Plus, I had to write SOMETHING for the comp.. hahahaha
Much love and returned furry hugs,
🌹
xo
B
Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
13th Jan 2021 11:05pm
Common sense is amazing, yet lacking in so many relationships, statements, and behaviors. Great sobering write. Thanks.Hugs, kisses, and peace. Oral
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Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
Anonymous
13th Jan 2021 11:50pm
You know that thing your Mother always said when you were a kid and you were in trouble because you did something your friends did?
“Well if [friend’s name here] told you to jump off a bridge, would you do it?”
... I guess the Trump supporters really answered that question huh. 😂
-M
“Well if [friend’s name here] told you to jump off a bridge, would you do it?”
... I guess the Trump supporters really answered that question huh. 😂
-M
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Re: Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
14th Jan 2021 00:07am
lol...💯 💯
it's that monkey see, monkey do 🙊🙈🙉 kind of mob mentality, for sure! ... This dude in my pic has been already arrested because he posted a picture of himself with mail he stole, online..... yeeeaaah.
There's some brilliance for ya! .... 😂.. doh!!
Ty for stopping by and taking a gander....
🌹
xo
-B
it's that monkey see, monkey do 🙊🙈🙉 kind of mob mentality, for sure! ... This dude in my pic has been already arrested because he posted a picture of himself with mail he stole, online..... yeeeaaah.
There's some brilliance for ya! .... 😂.. doh!!
Ty for stopping by and taking a gander....
🌹
xo
-B
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Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
14th Jan 2021 1:38am
Trouble has a way of finding us. We will be ready for the fight. Keep on writing
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Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
14th Jan 2021 4:20am
Re: Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
18th Jan 2021 3:25am
Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
14th Jan 2021 9:09am
Re: Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
18th Jan 2021 3:26am
Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
I gotta be honest, each line felt read like punches to the gut, left, right, left, right, left, right, pounding truth to the core and to the face to leave 'em just as nature intended. Now all we have to do is wait to witness justice and consequenes.
Excellent work.
Good luck in the comp.
Excellent work.
Good luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. an uncommon sense of destructive senselessness.
18th Jan 2021 3:29am
Walter,
Thank you for reading and your thoughtful comments. It's one of the saddest feelings I had writing, this poem was. Even with all the heartache and yearn I tend to spill....
I'm appreciative of the well wishes
Much love and respect,
🌹
X
-B
Thank you for reading and your thoughtful comments. It's one of the saddest feelings I had writing, this poem was. Even with all the heartache and yearn I tend to spill....
I'm appreciative of the well wishes
Much love and respect,
🌹
X
-B