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El Greco!
Was not the name of this diner.
I don’t recall its name anymore.
It was torn down over twenty years ago.
Strangely-
given its prime real estate locale,
nothing has been built in its place.
What’s left are open space memories by those of us who frequented it in its hey day.
I remember its dark faux paneled walls. The fake Corinthian leather seats that made your thighs sweat in summer. Chipped linoleum table tops always sticky from who knows what.
If the cigarette smell didn’t offend you, the sour smell of drunken twenty-somethings choking down over cooked eggs and burned toast to sober up before heading home, would.
God, how I miss this place-
whose name I can’t remember.
The wee hours spent discussing a successful night bar hopping.
Intense conversations of potential relationships that would never happen.
Inevitably we couldn’t read the name that went with the scored number. Or, the lipstick used to write the digits bled and now it was anyone’s guess if it was a three or a five.
The old timers always sat at the counter stools nursing their coffee and pastry.
The college set always convened at the tables in the center- as if prepping for their future board room meetings.
The waitresses were as worn out as the filthy carpeting, but they enjoyed the hubbub of youthful energy despite dismal tips.
Good times, bad times,
tears or laughter-events that shaped who we eventually
became were all part of this diner.
Whose name I can’t...
SLEEPY TIME DINER!
I don’t recall its name anymore.
It was torn down over twenty years ago.
Strangely-
given its prime real estate locale,
nothing has been built in its place.
What’s left are open space memories by those of us who frequented it in its hey day.
I remember its dark faux paneled walls. The fake Corinthian leather seats that made your thighs sweat in summer. Chipped linoleum table tops always sticky from who knows what.
If the cigarette smell didn’t offend you, the sour smell of drunken twenty-somethings choking down over cooked eggs and burned toast to sober up before heading home, would.
God, how I miss this place-
whose name I can’t remember.
The wee hours spent discussing a successful night bar hopping.
Intense conversations of potential relationships that would never happen.
Inevitably we couldn’t read the name that went with the scored number. Or, the lipstick used to write the digits bled and now it was anyone’s guess if it was a three or a five.
The old timers always sat at the counter stools nursing their coffee and pastry.
The college set always convened at the tables in the center- as if prepping for their future board room meetings.
The waitresses were as worn out as the filthy carpeting, but they enjoyed the hubbub of youthful energy despite dismal tips.
Good times, bad times,
tears or laughter-events that shaped who we eventually
became were all part of this diner.
Whose name I can’t...
SLEEPY TIME DINER!
Author's Note
For Eerie’s Dive Diner Comp.
Sadly, no bonus points for me. This diner burnt to the ground 26 years ago. The memories will live on. It might take the entire length of the poem to recall its name...you get the gist.
Sadly, no bonus points for me. This diner burnt to the ground 26 years ago. The memories will live on. It might take the entire length of the poem to recall its name...you get the gist.
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Re. El Greco!
5th Jan 2021 8:51am
Lovely write and brought me back to a few diners as such ... Bless and love ... ..
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Re: Re. El Greco!
7th Jan 2021 3:20am
Dear F,
Thank you so much for your read and sharing your memory of just such a place. Funny enough, if I remember correctly I think it was a grease fire that took the place down.
Alas. Thank you again for your kind comment. H🌷
Thank you so much for your read and sharing your memory of just such a place. Funny enough, if I remember correctly I think it was a grease fire that took the place down.
Alas. Thank you again for your kind comment. H🌷
Re. El Greco!
5th Jan 2021 10:59am
Fantastic spill! Love the detail and story line. Good luck in the competition!
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Re: Re. El Greco!
7th Jan 2021 3:22am
Dear FM,
Thank you so much. I’m very pleased you could follow the story line. Sometimes my thoughts are all over the place and getting to the end in a logical manner can elude me. I so appreciate your sweet comments thank you again. H🌷
Thank you so much. I’m very pleased you could follow the story line. Sometimes my thoughts are all over the place and getting to the end in a logical manner can elude me. I so appreciate your sweet comments thank you again. H🌷
Re. El Greco!
5th Jan 2021 11:00am
Fantastic spill! Love the detail and story line. Good luck in the competition!
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Re. El Greco!
5th Jan 2021 2:11pm
Dearest H,
I loved this spill to pieces and I had the same kind of place that also changed hands a zillion times since my high school and college days. When I was one of those twenty somethings.. lol it was a dingy old Wags. It was an experience exactly like you described but I really wanted a pic of it and I didn't have one from 1989 - 1994 It's so unfortunate!! That place was my second home for years, with our own much used (oh the stories!) booth and everything... I still think that's where I developed the ability to drink copious amounts of coffee without negative effects... lol.. This poem you've written, captures my old memories and that diner love to a T. Good luck in the competition (yours is my fav!!) and I'm so glad you shared this with us!
Much love and coffee wishes,
🌹 🌹 🌹
☕
xo
B
I loved this spill to pieces and I had the same kind of place that also changed hands a zillion times since my high school and college days. When I was one of those twenty somethings.. lol it was a dingy old Wags. It was an experience exactly like you described but I really wanted a pic of it and I didn't have one from 1989 - 1994 It's so unfortunate!! That place was my second home for years, with our own much used (oh the stories!) booth and everything... I still think that's where I developed the ability to drink copious amounts of coffee without negative effects... lol.. This poem you've written, captures my old memories and that diner love to a T. Good luck in the competition (yours is my fav!!) and I'm so glad you shared this with us!
Much love and coffee wishes,
🌹 🌹 🌹
☕
xo
B
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Re: Re. El Greco!
7th Jan 2021 3:35am
Dear BV,
Thank you very much for the honor of RL.
It was such fun to read the comments and memories of your own diner experiences. It’s wonderful to relate similar stories. There was another diner I’d go to when I was away at school. I’m horrified to recall how many times we’d eat there knowing the place was closed several times by the board of health for health code violations! 🤢 I really don’t know how we survived some of the less than smart decisions we made🤔 I’m very flattered by your sweet compliments, they’ve made my day and I’m so very appreciative of your thoughtful and uplifting support.
Thank you. H🌷
Thank you very much for the honor of RL.
It was such fun to read the comments and memories of your own diner experiences. It’s wonderful to relate similar stories. There was another diner I’d go to when I was away at school. I’m horrified to recall how many times we’d eat there knowing the place was closed several times by the board of health for health code violations! 🤢 I really don’t know how we survived some of the less than smart decisions we made🤔 I’m very flattered by your sweet compliments, they’ve made my day and I’m so very appreciative of your thoughtful and uplifting support.
Thank you. H🌷
Re. El Greco!
5th Jan 2021 3:41pm
Re: Re. El Greco!
7th Jan 2021 3:40am
Dear N,
Thank you very much for the honor of RL.
No wonder I felt so smart! You were in my head helping me out!!! No joke- Please get back in there daily so I write better and don't keep making the same idiotic mistakes😊
Thank you so much for your sweet comments! H🌷
Thank you very much for the honor of RL.
No wonder I felt so smart! You were in my head helping me out!!! No joke- Please get back in there daily so I write better and don't keep making the same idiotic mistakes😊
Thank you so much for your sweet comments! H🌷
Re. El Greco!
5th Jan 2021 4:18pm
It was called Steak & Egg here ( used to be open 24 hours like Waffle House ), but it was more prevalent in the big cities than rural areas ). I actually thought about stops there before I wrote my piece, but opted for the earlier memories!
I LOVE your descriptions here and am sorry it closed down. I can so relate to that as well, lots of empty space prior to something else being built!
Well done and best of luck in the comp! This is a winner!
I LOVE your descriptions here and am sorry it closed down. I can so relate to that as well, lots of empty space prior to something else being built!
Well done and best of luck in the comp! This is a winner!
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Re: Re. El Greco!
7th Jan 2021 3:48am
Dear A,
Thank you very much for the RL.
I thought the connection in your write to something that helped keep a feeling of security, more or less, in the midst of such big change was superb. I wouldn’t have changed that direction for anything.
As for poor Sleepy Time, it was terribly sad when I got the news it had burned to the ground. It rather displaced a couple of generations of people who called it home and family. Thank you so much for your lovely compliments and support. I’m so grateful, thank you once more!
H🌷
Thank you very much for the RL.
I thought the connection in your write to something that helped keep a feeling of security, more or less, in the midst of such big change was superb. I wouldn’t have changed that direction for anything.
As for poor Sleepy Time, it was terribly sad when I got the news it had burned to the ground. It rather displaced a couple of generations of people who called it home and family. Thank you so much for your lovely compliments and support. I’m so grateful, thank you once more!
H🌷
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Re: Re. El Greco!
7th Jan 2021 3:50am
Dear WF,
Thank you very much for the honor of RL. I’m extremely flattered by that and your kind compliment. Thank you again. H🌷
Thank you very much for the honor of RL. I’m extremely flattered by that and your kind compliment. Thank you again. H🌷
Re. El Greco!
5th Jan 2021 11:27pm
Your writing is fantastic like always Honoria. I was easily immersed into your vivid imagery from beginning to end. Makes me want to find a Mom and Pop diner in the mountains somewhere. Best of luck in the competition!
"sticky from who knows what" lol love it...
"sticky from who knows what" lol love it...
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Re: Re. El Greco!
7th Jan 2021 3:56am
Dear K,
Thank you so much for the honor of RL.
As per you are too generous in your compliments. However, I’m just going to say thank you very much for your sweet comments. And should you find this mom and pop diner in the mountains it’ll probably be the best grub you ever eat. And if it isn’t just keep swilling the coffee😊. Thank you so much for your endless support and thoughtful insight. I’m flattered beyond measure. H🌷
Thank you so much for the honor of RL.
As per you are too generous in your compliments. However, I’m just going to say thank you very much for your sweet comments. And should you find this mom and pop diner in the mountains it’ll probably be the best grub you ever eat. And if it isn’t just keep swilling the coffee😊. Thank you so much for your endless support and thoughtful insight. I’m flattered beyond measure. H🌷
Re. El Greco!
6th Jan 2021 1:49pm
Re: Re. El Greco!
7th Jan 2021 4:02am
Dear DG,
Thank you very much for your read and sweet comments. I truly appreciate them. It was a place and time that can’t (and probably shouldn’t) be replicated😉.
Thank you again. H🌷
Thank you very much for your read and sweet comments. I truly appreciate them. It was a place and time that can’t (and probably shouldn’t) be replicated😉.
Thank you again. H🌷
Re. El Greco!
7th Jan 2021 1:48am
This was both sad and funny, sad that it's gone but funny because I have similar after-hours memories. Those patient waitresses were a dying breed. So were the payphones and trying to read a number off a crumpled napkin. Love the vivid memories you described, even if it took so long to remember it's name :)
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Re: Re. El Greco!
7th Jan 2021 4:10am
Dear PR,
Thank you so much for your read and wonderful comments. I really appreciate you sharing your memories and experiences at your diner.
Pay phones! Like the buggy whip I’ve almost forgotten about those too. Dirtiest contraptions this side of hell. When we had to use them we’d hold the receiver a foot away from our ears. Good times.
It literally took me to the end of this write for the dang name of the diner to roll forward in my brain! I kept pressing the space button willing it to materialize. Thankfully it did. I’m not sure how. Otherwise this ending would have been a cliff hanger. Thank you again for such thoughtful comments. I truly appreciate them.
H🌷
Thank you so much for your read and wonderful comments. I really appreciate you sharing your memories and experiences at your diner.
Pay phones! Like the buggy whip I’ve almost forgotten about those too. Dirtiest contraptions this side of hell. When we had to use them we’d hold the receiver a foot away from our ears. Good times.
It literally took me to the end of this write for the dang name of the diner to roll forward in my brain! I kept pressing the space button willing it to materialize. Thankfully it did. I’m not sure how. Otherwise this ending would have been a cliff hanger. Thank you again for such thoughtful comments. I truly appreciate them.
H🌷
Re. El Greco!
7th Jan 2021 7:45pm
The intimacy is in the details, you've captured that truth here, bringing memory to life before us in full proportion. I love the originality of this write, capturing nostalgia in such subtle dimensions. There is a feel of comfortable authority to the rendering as well that is refreshing, a surety of your presence in presenting this to us. Terrific work. 💖🎶🙏
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Re: Re. El Greco!
8th Jan 2021 8:50am
Dear Daniel,
Thank you so very much for the honor of RL.
I’m incredibly flattered by your gracious comments and intuition of this write. I hadn’t thought of this establishment in years and because of this comp I’ve recalled so many fond memories. It’s a pleasure for me to have shared a piece of my ancient history with you as I’m feeling as old as Methuselah 😏.
Thank you very much for wonderful insight. I’m beyond appreciative.
H🌷
Thank you so very much for the honor of RL.
I’m incredibly flattered by your gracious comments and intuition of this write. I hadn’t thought of this establishment in years and because of this comp I’ve recalled so many fond memories. It’s a pleasure for me to have shared a piece of my ancient history with you as I’m feeling as old as Methuselah 😏.
Thank you very much for wonderful insight. I’m beyond appreciative.
H🌷
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8th Jan 2021 4:35am
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Re: Re. El Greco!
8th Jan 2021 8:56am
LOLOLOLOL!
Dear RB!
Stop it! Now my stomach hurts!!! That was funny! Yoooouuuuu! You’re good. Bad! but good.
(Thank you for the compliment of RL)
Tattle tale!
H🌷
Dear RB!
Stop it! Now my stomach hurts!!! That was funny! Yoooouuuuu! You’re good. Bad! but good.
(Thank you for the compliment of RL)
Tattle tale!
H🌷
Re. El Greco!
8th Jan 2021 10:15pm
Great. You really bring it to life. It's good to see this diner as both a place of comfort and friendship as well as a place of broken hopes, a place visited not only by young people with so much to look forward to but also by those whose lives have become stuck in some way.
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Re: Re. El Greco!
11th Jan 2021 10:39am
Dear L,
Thank you for the honor of RL. You flatter me greatly.
I’m very touched and appreciative for your wonderful comments. I’m thrilled beyond measure how you’ve seen the hope and the dashed ideas of dreams, as well as, the friendships between young and old. A watering hole that felt like a place for safety by everyone. Thank you so much for these kind and thoughtful insights. I’m truly over the moon by them as they help me so much. H🌷
Thank you for the honor of RL. You flatter me greatly.
I’m very touched and appreciative for your wonderful comments. I’m thrilled beyond measure how you’ve seen the hope and the dashed ideas of dreams, as well as, the friendships between young and old. A watering hole that felt like a place for safety by everyone. Thank you so much for these kind and thoughtful insights. I’m truly over the moon by them as they help me so much. H🌷
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Re: Re. El Greco!
12th Jan 2021 6:49am
Dear BP,
I am thankful my memories have lasted longer than the diner because these days my memories are becoming more and more sketchy. Thank you very much for your lovely comment! H🌷
I am thankful my memories have lasted longer than the diner because these days my memories are becoming more and more sketchy. Thank you very much for your lovely comment! H🌷
Re. El Greco!
Anonymous
12th Jan 2021 3:48pm
Congrats on your Tropheee in Eerie's Diver Diner comp!
Like a truckstop waitress with a great story to tell as she pours the coffee, you always deliver and the ending of this was pure dessert.
Like a truckstop waitress with a great story to tell as she pours the coffee, you always deliver and the ending of this was pure dessert.
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Re: Re. El Greco!
13th Jan 2021 3:30am
Dear JB,
Thank you very much for the honor of RL.
Your comment was a delight to read, thank you so much. I am extremely flattered and grateful. Thank you once again. H🌷
Thank you very much for the honor of RL.
Your comment was a delight to read, thank you so much. I am extremely flattered and grateful. Thank you once again. H🌷
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Re: Re. El Greco!
17th Jan 2021 2:38pm
Dear R,
Thank you so much for the honor of RL. And thank you for such a gracious compliment. I really appreciate your insight regarding the story line. Thank you again.
H🌷
Thank you so much for the honor of RL. And thank you for such a gracious compliment. I really appreciate your insight regarding the story line. Thank you again.
H🌷
Re. El Greco!
18th Jan 2021 5:47pm
Hello nice to meet you Honoria🌹 ☺️
This lovely story / poem you’ve shared here with all of us, is quite captivating so vivid, I could see everything you wrote about here.
Well done enjoyed
Zazzles🤗
Write on✍️
Listed 👍🏻
This lovely story / poem you’ve shared here with all of us, is quite captivating so vivid, I could see everything you wrote about here.
Well done enjoyed
Zazzles🤗
Write on✍️
Listed 👍🏻
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Re: Re. El Greco!
19th Jan 2021 5:09am
Dear Z,
Hello! And thank you very much for the honor of RL.
I’m over the moon you could see this place as I’ve written it. Nothing’s built that way now a days. Alas, maybe it’s for the best. It’s given me wonderful memories when I think about it and I’m flattered by your lovely and gracious comments. Thank you once again. H🌷
Hello! And thank you very much for the honor of RL.
I’m over the moon you could see this place as I’ve written it. Nothing’s built that way now a days. Alas, maybe it’s for the best. It’s given me wonderful memories when I think about it and I’m flattered by your lovely and gracious comments. Thank you once again. H🌷
Re: Re. El Greco!
20th Jan 2021 1:22am
Wow you are such a soft and gentle soul, I am honored to make your acquaintance and I mean that sincerely♥️
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Re. El Greco!
2nd Feb 2021 3:03am
What's in a name? Great that we can still visit via your vivid recollections. Thanks :-)
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Re: Re. El Greco!
2nd Feb 2021 5:10am
Dear S,
What is in a name? Especially when it takes forever to remember it! That was a close call and I’m glad it came back to me before I submitted it. The place itself was a bedrock of milestones and good times. I really appreciate your comments and read. Thank you very much. H🌷
What is in a name? Especially when it takes forever to remember it! That was a close call and I’m glad it came back to me before I submitted it. The place itself was a bedrock of milestones and good times. I really appreciate your comments and read. Thank you very much. H🌷
Re. El Greco!
15th Mar 2021 11:04am
Engaging ... vivid ... rich in detail ... reminds me of a place I knew growing up ... great job H ...
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Re: Re. El Greco!
15th Mar 2021 11:12am
Dear L,
Thank you very much for these kind comments. I found it so interesting in everyone’s responses how we all seemed to have a diner dive past 😃 and another thank you for the RL add. Im super honored!
H🌷
Thank you very much for these kind comments. I found it so interesting in everyone’s responses how we all seemed to have a diner dive past 😃 and another thank you for the RL add. Im super honored!
H🌷