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A 'simple' Kiss
Lips are half-open... In anticipation
In an exciting call they tremble a little
Hidden in them is the beginning of desire
And the promise of all rewards...
And the impulse slows down for a moment,
Hiding the trembling and the slight fluttering
of the eyelids
In the indomitable sweet movement,
Your Kiss is born in the darkness...
And at this moment, exploding in rapture,
As if hundreds of billions of stars,
Burning with fire in a frantic attraction,
Pulsating, blood rushes in the veins!
And the heart in acceleration of the inflow
Rings in the chest, breaking a suspire,
Bodies burn in the flame of vice...
And everything is nothing
There is only You and I
In an exciting call they tremble a little
Hidden in them is the beginning of desire
And the promise of all rewards...
And the impulse slows down for a moment,
Hiding the trembling and the slight fluttering
of the eyelids
In the indomitable sweet movement,
Your Kiss is born in the darkness...
And at this moment, exploding in rapture,
As if hundreds of billions of stars,
Burning with fire in a frantic attraction,
Pulsating, blood rushes in the veins!
And the heart in acceleration of the inflow
Rings in the chest, breaking a suspire,
Bodies burn in the flame of vice...
And everything is nothing
There is only You and I
Author's Note
A simple kiss... doesn't exist. Xx
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3rd Jan 2021 9:44pm
Re. A 'simple' Kiss
3rd Jan 2021 9:47pm
All passion starts with THE KISS and that would inflame anyone's passion
Awesome write Awesome visuals
Thank you
Love and light
Ron xx
Awesome write Awesome visuals
Thank you
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. A 'simple' Kiss
3rd Jan 2021 9:50pm
THE KISS is definitely one of my happy places and I really need those right now. I am glad you were able to immerse into this one like me Ron. 💖Xx
Re. A 'simple' Kiss
3rd Jan 2021 11:44pm
YES! Amazing applause for the magic of kissing. Hugs and kisses. Peace, oral
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Re: Re. A 'simple' Kiss
4th Jan 2021 00:29am
If I can applause from the master Kissologist then I am very happy about that Oral. 💖Xx
Re: Re. A 'simple' Kiss
4th Jan 2021 00:35am
You are an A++ kisser and more. Thanks for sharing. Look forward to reading more kissing poems. Peace. Oral
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4th Jan 2021 00:59am
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4th Jan 2021 00:12am
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4th Jan 2021 00:33am
Re. A 'simple' Kiss
4th Jan 2021 00:40am
KX , this is magical write portraying the rousing connection of a wanting kiss igniting that fire that we all long for..... It is a powerful descriptive poetic portrayal of that memorable moment of that first last kiss that we all truly desire. I love this poem. Bravo!!!
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4th Jan 2021 1:08am
I am really happy if I was able to somewhat capture that magical moment of an intimate kiss leading into that intensity of things to follow. Also, I am really glad you felt it was RL worthy. :) 💖Xx
Re. A 'simple' Kiss
4th Jan 2021 00:45am
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I am glad you agree (among lovers) and I feel like all kisses are special in one way or another. :) 💖Xx
Re. A 'simple' Kiss
4th Jan 2021 4:52am
perfect grammar at the end is a kiss for minds as well...I enjoyed this fluttering of heart...
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Re: Re. A 'simple' Kiss
4th Jan 2021 2:45pm
I like that a lot BC, yes a kiss for the minds is a beautiful thing. I am glad you enjoyed it. 💖Xx
Re. A 'simple' Kiss
4th Jan 2021 2:25pm
Here in Your spill
a simple kiss is neither simple nor Impassionate
However, i believe when lovers say, Good-byes, a kiss may be simply. . .simple (got me remembering, again)
Gorgeous spill
a simple kiss is neither simple nor Impassionate
However, i believe when lovers say, Good-byes, a kiss may be simply. . .simple (got me remembering, again)
Gorgeous spill
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Re: Re. A 'simple' Kiss
4th Jan 2021 2:49pm
Oh yes, I knew the note would get some discussion going regarding simple kisses. ;) Regardless, I stand my ground that even a good bye kiss is special for me. A kiss from my Mom always makes me feel special no matter what. I could not ask for anything better than gorgeous so I am happy. 💖Xx
Re. A 'simple' Kiss
Bravissima, Kristina❣❣ I really like this piece. The opening passage is very sensual. Your powers of description make the experience tres vivid. Romantic and sensual my favorite combination ❤
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4th Jan 2021 5:08pm
Tres vivid sounds good to me. ;) Romantic and sensual is always a winner in my book too. 💖Xx
Re. A 'simple' Kiss
5th Jan 2021 00:15am
Loved, loved, loved the passion and anticipation, so descriptive and true to the emotion that goes into it.
Excellent verse. Bravo!
Excellent verse. Bravo!
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5th Jan 2021 00:29am
Oh my, three 'loved's, you spoil me Wallyroo. I am really happy you felt the passion and anticipation. 💖Xx
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5th Jan 2021 1:28am
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5th Jan 2021 1:33am
Thanks Daniel, then mission accomplished I think. Trying to capture the passion with a light touch that still sends tingles down the spine. :) 💖Xx
Re. A 'simple' Kiss
5th Jan 2021 7:05pm
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5th Jan 2021 7:12pm
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5th Jan 2021 7:18pm
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5th Jan 2021 7:25pm
Oh lepperochan, if the guardian who keeps all the lunatics, like me, at bay does not deserve a kiss then I don't who does. Come out of the shadows every once in a while please. As much as I love the shadows it can get lonely there... 💖Xx
Re. A 'simple' Kiss
5th Jan 2021 10:30pm
There is much complexity in simplicity.
That first light touch between the lips, like a feather, closes the passion circuit. The spark from the electricity igniting deep desires and that light touch is now a much more compressed union.
Love how you expressed the light, almost insecure flutter, that goes by the wayside as the emotions and passion take over. All systems go! A self-contained bubble.
That first light touch between the lips, like a feather, closes the passion circuit. The spark from the electricity igniting deep desires and that light touch is now a much more compressed union.
Love how you expressed the light, almost insecure flutter, that goes by the wayside as the emotions and passion take over. All systems go! A self-contained bubble.
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5th Jan 2021 11:08pm
Indeed there is, at least when it involves people. :)
Oh definitely, I love the 'passion circuit' - great description. Lovely.
And you got it perfectly, like I knew you would. ;) 💖Xx
Oh definitely, I love the 'passion circuit' - great description. Lovely.
And you got it perfectly, like I knew you would. ;) 💖Xx
Re. A 'simple' Kiss
7th Jan 2021 4:46am
Dear K,
There is such a sense of romance and wistful thinking for me in your write. The whole time I’m reading this I’m thinking Mr. Darcy and Pride and Prejudice. No sooner I have this thought my mind threw me back to my first kiss. It was so awful...well I’ll save that for another time. With practice things got better as time went on. What you’ve written is a wonderful piece artfully backed with love and the enthusiasm and hope love brings and that’s as it should be. H🌷
There is such a sense of romance and wistful thinking for me in your write. The whole time I’m reading this I’m thinking Mr. Darcy and Pride and Prejudice. No sooner I have this thought my mind threw me back to my first kiss. It was so awful...well I’ll save that for another time. With practice things got better as time went on. What you’ve written is a wonderful piece artfully backed with love and the enthusiasm and hope love brings and that’s as it should be. H🌷
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7th Jan 2021 12:24pm
I look forward to a write on that first kiss. ;) First kisses can definitely be really awkward. The silver lining is all the practice to make it better. I think you have summarized things so beautifully as you always do. Thanks for the lovely comment, Honoria. 💖Xx
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17th Jan 2021 00:27am
That is the greatest compliment because I could not hope for better than to transport you to such a beautiful memory. Thank you for the comment and sharing your thoughts, I appreciate it so much. 💖Xx
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Re: Re. A 'simple' Kiss
7th Feb 2021 4:01pm
Ah yes! to eliminate the boundaries is always my goal. ;) I am really happy you found it interesting. 💖Xx
Re. A 'simple' Kiss
18th Apr 2023 9:09pm
So much identity in the re-read
You know when the poetess is magical and luscious. Racing home to ecstasy...
You know when the poetess is magical and luscious. Racing home to ecstasy...
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Re: Re. A 'simple' Kiss
18th Apr 2023 9:21pm
Ah yes, so much identity goes into my poems. ;) Always magical and luscious! So kissable. ;) And always ready for ecstasy. 💖Xx