her pov and a bit of written submission.

Certainly has the temperature ... Bless and love ... ..

lol... yes, it is a little bit hotter...
Ty dear FeNyX
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Delicious piece. Blue💖 Your vivid, intensely seductive imagery produced tingles in me, head-to-toe.  What a delicious passage, "it's pink pretty tight ring"
Orgasmic word play, indeed❣❣

no worries, GW  
xo

I am so sorry, Blue🙏 I rememver thinking should I use your name in the comment and I thought no better not. My heart sank when I read your response. That's whaf happens when I commfemt way past my bedtime.

Thank you for correcting, no problem.
X

Can I get that spanking now...nope I don't deserve such pleasure now😥💖
.I'll go cut the switch 😯😛

I suppose that I could try being a 'switch' and offer to spank, yet my true heart's desire would always lie in being spanked myself. However, If I'm completely honest, there is a tiny kernel of desire at the idea of a ONE time role reversal. I do have a fantasy of being the one in charge and fucking another, using various types of options...... heh heh heh... It's totally true.
It's something I know a Dom would never be into... so I usually don't apply thought pressure there. It's just a flight of fancy, yet it's there..
Pulsing. Creeping in..... at times.
😈
I'm not such a naughty Blue!
(yet gloriously honest!)
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I actually have never been into the BDSM thing but now that I merit a good whoop'n I'm sorta warm'n to the ixea 😁💖

You should definitely try role reversal.
When we first connected we both expressed interest in BDSM but then she told me her preference was Dom so I gladly accepted the role of slave but she still wants the one of the first of our encounters for me to be the DOM.
Then I will have to borrow from this work for guidance in that role.
I'll le you know how it goes

Just brilliant, every emotion every desire and wanton need, fantastic piece
Love and light and racing heart
Ron xx

Ty
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xoxo

Delightfully naughty.

My goal met, then.
Ty
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xo

BV, this is an Arousing CHEEKY write that I find myself immersed in with every Stroke (of your pen)....lol. I can feel the heat from visions of red on the spanked bottom surrounding the beautifully descriptive pink pretty tight ring......  Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrfect erotic poetry my Kitten!!!

My desires overwhelm me at times...
Resulting in written spills that probably should remain behind closed doors to become outted for public consumption....
I guess there's something to be said for that, too. hmm 🤔
I'm appreciative for the RL add, your all too kind comments and your thoughtful insights
🙏 🌹 💜
xo

I confess! You drew me into the magic. Wow! Hugs and kisses. Peace, oral

This was written month ago, when I had serious motivations to write such yummy naughtiness. I only now felt a sense of "why not!" and I cleaned it up a bit, rewrote the end and voila!
I'm glad you enjoyed it, O
It's close to my heart....
xo

I confess! You drew me into the magic. Wow! Hugs and kisses. Peace, oral

Keep going all night long.  Keep on writing.

A required reading for all Kittens. Well done and made the room much more steamy.

♨️ ♨️ ♨️ ♨️
Ty for reading and your comments
Rawr 🐾
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xoxo

Dayum. Let me just shine that trophy up for you Ms. Blue.
Cheese us that was hot and titillating. And ready for round two right away?
That's all I'm going to say, I am through.

lol... Hee hee hee..
THIS, (these types of spills) is the direct result of a quarantine life and being single for longer now, without ANY dating, than I ever have in my whole dating life... stir crazy??!!?.. YEAH, yeah I am.. ugggh.
hahaha 😂 😂.  
Omg, am I ready for the vaccinations!!,  
Ty for making me giggle, Wally  
I'm still chuckling... Hee hee hee hee hee  
xoxo  
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I'm embarrassed for myself...and I'm alone...😁🤣.  You got any books...or???  No, seriously when you find someone articulate so well it feels hypnotic and psychic.  I think that's where obsession (I mean just general obsession with everything, whatever) is born.  I'm always on that line telling myself...we all feel this way.   Anyway, you are a brilliant writer.

*A Judgement and embarrassment free zone*🚨  

Like a friend of mine says "This is a safe space"...
No worries or shame about feeling embarrassed not at all. ;)... I'm grateful for your lovely comments and interest in reading. It's extremely heady for me to read of such a connected resonance, that I truly thank you for sharing
Much love and respect,  
💜  
xoxo  
-Blue

😊 I expected that sweet sincere reply.  Thank you.  💜💜💜.  Much much love and respect to you.  XO

;)  
lol, There's times I need to calm my inner self and just explicitly fuck..... (truth!)  
hahaha.  
That's just me...  
Ty for reading and enjoying the imagery
💜  
xoxo

Oh BV!  This is so great, and drips with honesty.  I aspire to write like you!

Ohh... wow very sweet. Thank you so much.
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xoxo
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Very visual and erotic hot... 👿

Ty very much
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xo

This is a super tight piece and the picture really compliments the write. Great job Lady

I love your "super tight"... makes my night.
Ty, Me
Glad you enjoyed it.
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xo

I have been reading your poetry for a couple of weeks and have now joined DUP to try and get better as your poetry moves both me and my girlfriend.
She asked me to write screenplays and I have just written two with a BDSM theme but she liked the second one better which surprised me. It is very similar to this poem but has a slightly harder edge so I am glad to have seen and read this. Thank you for your fantastic work.
Richard

Ambiensse,
Wow, this is quite a comment and thoughtful admittance. I thank you deeply with my surprised appreciation. I'm humbled that I was able to resonate with you and your girlfriend, allowing you to find your inspiration. It's indeed, high praise.
Your decision to join us here within the DU is so very welcomed and I wish you much enjoyment in reading all the varied the poets here. They're some superb writers of all sorts to wet your palate.
So with that, again.. Welcome Aboard and have fun
(Good luck with your screenplay!)
🌹
xo
B

Many thanks for your reply and and your welcome.
Richard

You had my cock in your cat's cradle with these sumptuous erotic verses. This was a pure aphrodisiac for the body and soul. Pure as 100-proof white lightning shared in a makeshift bedroom on a wild afternoon where your poem is my obsession. God this is a paradise for all that is or ever was.

XoXo
John

lol.... You're so very kind and I can sometimes see the allure that I imagined was much more when I wrote it.. lol ... but I mostly cringe at how badly I now feel that this stepping stone poem is written and constructed. I can't help but almost want to rewrite it, yet I also know its a snapshot in my personal timeline if growth. (as embarrassing as it is!) I deeply appreciate you finding the heat and excitement of pure satisfaction that I think I hoped to convey....I can't remember!!
I do still love the brazen and unabashed nature.... I was definitely a pistol!! haha 😂

You leave me breathless my dear,
A thousand thank you's for taking a look back.

I'll have to maybe search for some of my erotic favorites that I think you might have missed, which I believe you'll also very much enjoy?!?!
Hmmm.... That's sounding like a fantastic idea.
Hopefully there are still a few left!!  ;p

💙💙💙💙
-Susan

Would love to read some of your poet's choices in your Versography.  You really have given me much to drink in among your juicy poems. Love you and your delicious creations.

XoXo
John

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/432244-renewal-in-leather-and-lace/


https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/436106-butterfly/


https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/441913-aching-the-language-the-art-of-oration/



https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/433445-valuable-lessons-learned-from-ghosts-of/


just a few!!
no rush or worries...
Only thought you'd enjoy!!

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Can't wait, my friend. Just got in from the coffee shop and will get a bite to eat. But my anticipation of your offerings exceeds mere edibles.

XoXoXo
John