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Blooming Wings
Lost and only just surviving
tired and broken; hardly thriving
Reaching for something to change how I feel
finding no comfort; unable to heal
Out of darkness I have grown
blooming wings all on my own
Learning to trust and accepting fear
ghosts of the past no longer appear
Dismissing judgement from convicting eyes
with resilience I will always rise
Out of darkness I have grown
attempting flight all on my own
Embracing a life that was always mine
I am found where my soul can shine
Out of darkness I have grown
mastering flight all on my own
tired and broken; hardly thriving
Reaching for something to change how I feel
finding no comfort; unable to heal
Out of darkness I have grown
blooming wings all on my own
Learning to trust and accepting fear
ghosts of the past no longer appear
Dismissing judgement from convicting eyes
with resilience I will always rise
Out of darkness I have grown
attempting flight all on my own
Embracing a life that was always mine
I am found where my soul can shine
Out of darkness I have grown
mastering flight all on my own
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Re. Blooming Wings
1st Jan 2021 2:48pm
Beautiful and thought provoking poem for the new year. Thanks. Hugs and peace, Oral
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1st Jan 2021 2:52pm
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1st Jan 2021 2:57pm
good morning beautiful Mel this is a very inspiring poem
I have a lot of issues and fear the very thing you've accomplished
flying on my own... I take heart reading this 💕
I have a lot of issues and fear the very thing you've accomplished
flying on my own... I take heart reading this 💕
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1st Jan 2021 3:04pm
Thank you lovely Brenda. Don't let the poem fool you...sometimes I fly right into a tree! lol. But there is no success without failure.
"When you come to the edge of all the light you know and are about to step into the darkness of the unknown, remember faith is knowing one of two things will happen...either there will be something solid to stand on or you will be taught to fly."
-Patrick Overton
Much love to you.
"When you come to the edge of all the light you know and are about to step into the darkness of the unknown, remember faith is knowing one of two things will happen...either there will be something solid to stand on or you will be taught to fly."
-Patrick Overton
Much love to you.
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1st Jan 2021 4:03pm
Wonderful to see you back, Mel! I am so happy you are healing and rising above the pain and suffering that you have recently endured. Much love and happiness for a blessed New Year, my friend! xo
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1st Jan 2021 5:26pm
Thank you Ahavati. Was feeling inspired by the new year to come. The RL is such an honour. Happy New Year to you and yours. Very much love. Xx
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Anonymous
1st Jan 2021 5:17pm
Your writing is taking off as well! There's a remarkable difference from when you first began posting to DUP. Glad to see you still at it, Mel.
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1st Jan 2021 5:33pm
Thank you JB. I believe my growth in writing is very much due to the feedback I receive here (particularly a few). Wishing you a very happy new year my friend. Xx
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6th Feb 2021 5:15pm
Bravo! The power of self-determination, which we all need. Thanks. Hugs and peace, oral
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