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a sacred tao of unimagined to known. (+Spoken Word)
hands grasp fabric tightly
clenched, arched and aching
an ardent cry of fucking splendor,
with an echoing in fullest fervor
eyes squeezed tight,
a taste of acrid-like iron
rests upon reddened swollen lips
the smallest drop of blood,
escapes the wound
of the bite mark on a muscled shoulder
alabaster amalgamates with vanilla honey
and culminates into all that is quintessential;
a phenomenon of imagined legend
transfigures into beautiful but simple,
golden, blissful transcendence ~
dreams, once impossibly longed for,
now, reality-morphed
to the admitted precious of all known.
Author's Note
©Blu2020
How my dreams are dreamt and bits of heart's desired truth....
How my dreams are dreamt and bits of heart's desired truth....
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
Anonymous
29th Dec 2020 10:50pm
wow, your emboldened bit is fantastic
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Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
29th Dec 2020 11:02pm
Now I'm wow'ed... Thank you for reading and listening. Your comment is incredibly kind and I appreciate the list add
🌹
xo
🌹
xo
Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
Anonymous
30th Dec 2020 1:43am
But you're awesome!!!
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Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
29th Dec 2020 11:25pm
A++++ and beyond, such magic from the amazing use of words.Hug and kisses, Oral
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Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 00:35am
Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
29th Dec 2020 11:38pm
good afternoon beautiful Blue your command of the language
paired with your dreams is pure sexy bliss
I enjoyed this thoroughly 💕
paired with your dreams is pure sexy bliss
I enjoyed this thoroughly 💕
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Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 00:34am
Your comments mean the world, B. Thank you deeply for listening. I am not very confident in my spoken word and I am trying my best to not remove this recording... lol. I can't get better unless I practice, so....kind of a catch 22... ;)
I am so appreciative of the list add and all your thoughtfulness.
hugs,
🌹
xo
I am so appreciative of the list add and all your thoughtfulness.
hugs,
🌹
xo
Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
29th Dec 2020 11:42pm
Pure sex, sorry that's not very poetic or eloquent but your command of words, the vivid pics you plant are amazing
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
29th Dec 2020 11:44pm
Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 00:40am
I fucking needed THIS... I AM humbled by your comments, I truly am, but I was about to delete this recoding because I thought it was boring, midwestern,typical and just blah.. I am so lucky to have you in my corner, to see it from your (yes I know you're biased!!.. lol ) eyes... even so, you reminded me.. fuck it! Someone out there will like my blah-ness... lmao
Ty Ty Ty!
🙏 🌹 💜
xo
B
Ty Ty Ty!
🙏 🌹 💜
xo
B
Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 1:24pm
Darling, there is nothing boring, Midwestern or blah about you or your writing.
This particular piece is spoken perfectly.
This particular piece is spoken perfectly.
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Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 1:26pm
Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 1:25am
Blue your alluring voice and tone is pure seduction with this exquisite write. This poem and reading is executed with shear elegance..............soooo enticing !!!! .... to quote an Amazing DUP superstr (B) , ''Pure Sexy Bliss'' !!!
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Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 4:25am
lol... Thank you, FF!... You are too kind.
I need work on my spoken word, but I'll get there!I appreciate you listening and your thoughtful comments, the list add and all your support
🌹
xo
I need work on my spoken word, but I'll get there!I appreciate you listening and your thoughtful comments, the list add and all your support
🌹
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Aug 2023 5:45pm
30th Dec 2020 4:05am
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Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 1:37pm
It's a good day in the DU when I'm commenting on comments. Lol Spunkhippie is a new one. I die.
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Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 5:09pm
hahaha..
I'm giggling reading this.. yeah, Sarge is a crack whip with the one offs...
I die all the time at the brilliance and creativity thrown at Weg (raconteur) .. lmao
-I am glad you stopped by to comment,
As Spunkhippie now enters our lexicon as a new favorite!!!
Lmfao
I'm giggling reading this.. yeah, Sarge is a crack whip with the one offs...
I die all the time at the brilliance and creativity thrown at Weg (raconteur) .. lmao
-I am glad you stopped by to comment,
As Spunkhippie now enters our lexicon as a new favorite!!!
Lmfao
Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 12:24pm
Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 1:14pm
Thank you , FeNyX
You're very thoughtful and I appreciate your visit and kind words
Much love,
🌹
xo
You're very thoughtful and I appreciate your visit and kind words
Much love,
🌹
xo
Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 3:28pm
Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 4:18pm
Lmfao...
ok ok!
You have me convinced (almost)
I'm so glad you listened, though...
💜
Ty very much
🌹
xo
ok ok!
You have me convinced (almost)
I'm so glad you listened, though...
💜
Ty very much
🌹
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Sep 2021 1:45am
30th Dec 2020 6:24pm
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Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
Awww, Ty, Wilber!
I'm extremely appreciative
💜
xoxo
grateful for the list add as well..
I'm extremely appreciative
💜
xoxo
grateful for the list add as well..
Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 9:33pm
Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
30th Dec 2020 9:44pm
I am utterly thankful for that, Wally.
Spoken word is my least favorite... lol
I am do appreciative of the list add
🌹
Happy New Year
🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎊
xoxo
Spoken word is my least favorite... lol
I am do appreciative of the list add
🌹
Happy New Year
🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎊
xoxo
Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
31st Dec 2020 7:39pm
The tone and fervor of Your voice gave me electrical fuzzies to the cloaked aura of my being
and only added to the rich words of this spill --
Wow
and only added to the rich words of this spill --
Wow
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Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
31st Dec 2020 7:42pm
Lol... Ohh Tallen you are very sweet.
You need to listen to one I updated last night then....
💜
I hope you like it
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/406238-the-vivid-nature-of-exigent-fucking-a/
You need to listen to one I updated last night then....
💜
I hope you like it
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/406238-the-vivid-nature-of-exigent-fucking-a/
Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
31st Dec 2020 9:17pm
Wow
Wow
Holy Cow!
You make this action (and pining) sound superbly intellectual
yet succinctly but cloaked in sultry wanton universal existence!!
You DO have a way (or KNOW a [the] way.
Wow
Holy Cow!
You make this action (and pining) sound superbly intellectual
yet succinctly but cloaked in sultry wanton universal existence!!
You DO have a way (or KNOW a [the] way.
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Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
2nd Jan 2021 10:14pm
Your titles are phenomenal. lol The audio lends terrific sensuality to the details.
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Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
2nd Jan 2021 11:07pm
Thank you, Daniel.
Titling is almost as much for me as writing poetry... lol
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Still working on my delivery
Happy New Year 🎉
xo
Susan
Titling is almost as much for me as writing poetry... lol
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Still working on my delivery
Happy New Year 🎉
xo
Susan
Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
3rd Jan 2021 8:44pm
🌹💙 And this is where I just listen......... to understand and properly digest these beautiful words spoken... in delicate voice... poetically elegant verse... conveyed in a splendid array of sonnet lucidity... captivating Miss Blue...
An enchanted Elias 🔥💎
An enchanted Elias 🔥💎
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Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
3rd Jan 2021 10:38pm
I cannot expect to receive lovelier sentiments, Eli
You left me speechless...
💜.
Ty so much
🌹
xo
You left me speechless...
💜.
Ty so much
🌹
xo
Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
7th Jan 2021 7:29am
Damn, how did I miss this? Bravissima, S. I got turned on by the rich language and your reading style is like silk. Beautifully romantic and erotic.😘🌹
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Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
7th Jan 2021 7:32am
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
7th Feb 2021 4:37pm
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Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
7th Feb 2021 5:06pm
It's one of my favorite (probably without the audio, tho) little writes... I can't quite articulate why... it just is. Ty for listening... I'm so glad you enjoyed.
🌹
xo
🌹
xo
Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
21st May 2021 7:39pm
Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
21st May 2021 8:13pm
Thank you very much, I appreciate you stopping by and leaving your thoughts. So glad you enjoyed it.
🌹-B
🌹-B
Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
6th Sep 2022 8:04pm
Delicate as Chuang Tzu's butterfly dream that drop of blood was a centrifugal force whose song took me into a Japanese woman duet with her koto man. The universe shattered and was reborn through kimono echoes of the eternal recurrence. Each timbre of your words was a tonality of love and hunger that knows no denouement. Your story is a force of nature that cannot end for it is forever in its beauty. I love every ambient note here because your swollen lips are the gates to paradise.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
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Re: Re. a sacred tao of unimagined to known. *reading
6th Sep 2022 9:28pm
I do so welcome you with my reddened, tender and slightly swollen lips; a gentle mouthed kiss evoking all the deep punctuated warmth of that ambience...and the immense reality of my ignited desire.
What pleasure, my lovely poet.
Thank you for being here.
🌹 - 💋
-S
What pleasure, my lovely poet.
Thank you for being here.
🌹 - 💋
-S