The vivid nature of exigent fucking. (A fantastical tale) [+Reading]

It’s a nice but rare feeling, when the whole world seems to melt away and it is just you are your lover: king and queen of all reality. But you have taken it one step further and there is no external reality. Just you and your lover.

Great writing! Loved it!

Thank you, N_I
I'm daydreaming with a bit of a selfish steak, I think ... but it's what came... (no pun intended.. lol)
Glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate you stopping by to read and leave your thoughtful insights.
Happy Holidays to you and yours,
X
-B

Damn!!! ... Bless and love ... ..

That made me smile, dearest FeNyX..... lol
Ty for reading, my friend
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xo

Favourite lines:

We are naked, covered in crescent moon sweat,
breaths mingled,
feeding each other
pure stark life

Thank you, Solomon
You're awesome in your taste, that's my favorite, too.
I appreciate you and your lovely comments
Happy Holidays
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B

Raw, real and so beautiful just like the poetess I adore
Great job beautiful lady
Love and light
Ron xx

The adoration is mutual.. Ty, my lovely friend
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xoxo
B

Good morning, Wilber
Ty for reading and your thoughtful comments
I'm happy you liked it!
I appreciate you
💜
xoxo
B

Wow❣ Wow❣ Wow❣ Bravissima, Blue!!! The descriptive phrases in this piece are powerfully vivid.  "herculean prurience" indeed.
These are the passages that brought the big time tingles,
"We are naked, covered in crescent moon sweat,"
Descriptions of sweat or scent make it real.

"My cunt repeats your name in panted screams"
This evoked such a delicious image 👅💦

"Explosions of bodies and minds, atomize"
Now that's some powerful fucking🦄🌋🌋😍

Finally the title fits perfectly...a poem that brought me sensual sustenance...I'm full😘

Dear B,  
You do me such an honor with your thoughtful feedback. I love to see what resonates and your lovely comments made my day as I bask in that knowledge. Thank you so much for reading, the list add and being as excited after reading my poem as I was writing it. You made me smile big, this afternoon...  
Much love,  
🌹  
xo  
B

A big smile from you is a precious reward😍

Awww... what a nice thing to say ;). xoxo

Happy new year 🎉 🎉 🎉
hug* 🤗

I love this passage, "a done deal in a joint mental acumen  "😘

Me too...it's a connection in more than just the physical....Sometimes that's even more erotic.
💜
xoxo

Most definitely

BV this explicit and vivid write is a stirring erotic work of art....... the desire to Drink every word of this euphoric spill is an experience of pure satisfaction... ''Intoxicating" !!!!!

Cheers!
🍷*tink*🍷
Thank you, FF
I am appreciative
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xo
B

Oh, the lucky recipient... I can dream...great erotic write, one of your best, which is saying a lot. Hugs and peace. oral

Thank you, Oral
That's some serious high praise... wow.
Glad you enjoyed it
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xo

Tim,
I can't even begin to convey the amount of thank you's this 'best comment I've evert received', should itself, receive. You've taken my breath away here....I will PM you with the proper reply , and for now, I will 🙇‍♀️ bow and say, Thank you very much.
All my love,
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B

We are animal spirits in heart and we have to let our wild side adventure.  Keep on writing.

You're very astute. Ty Francisco!
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Let me catch my breath...
Damn...
With a title like that I knew I was getting in on this rollercoaster and I forgot to put the safety bar on.
Excellent work Blue. I've said it before, there is nothing like raw and vivid writes to make the reader drop their popcorn (or skittles),
Bravo.

Lol... Thank you for reading and taking the ride of my write, Wally.. I'm appreciative of your visit and your thoughtful insights, too... You do make me giggle!... 😂
Ty so much
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xo

Lovely

Ty.
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vivid indeed...I see the picture

Me too.
It's quite a vision...

Wow what a rush!
I’m not really good with erotic comments
*Blush *
Loves you 🤗
Jackie oxoxox🤗❤️

Hee hee hee...
I know I know
Not your cup of tea, but I THANK YOU so much for reading /listening as I am trying to improve my spoken word delivery / confidence.
You're truly lovely for even delving past the adult warning! lol... Awww!
love you, sister!!
☺
xoxo 💋

The video is spectacular your voice is adorable 🤗
I figured it would be 😘 thanks for sharing your intimate thoughts and feelings 👍🏻
Jackie xo

You're incredibly sweet and I utterly appreciate the RL add 🙏
Ty very much
Happy New Year 🎉 🎉 🎉
xoxo
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Geez! Amazing. I don't usually have much to say about erotica, but wow. I especially love the feeling of victory... union... afterglow. Explosions and wild animals and connections of blue and hazel... that's my kind o' fucking! It's intensity, but without the anger & hatred & shame that turns me off about most erotica. Beautiful. Bravo!

You totally just made my night, k.!! I never think my little poems are really all that worthy of reading or ANY attention (yes, horribly low self esteem) and with that that feeling comes (unfortunate) constant doubting of myself. SO, when you're were nice enough to take your time and listen /read when you might not have usually AND then find yourself enjoying what I have offered... it's just mind blown 🤯
Its everything!! I hope that's not weird sounding. I just mean, to know that I can resonate with someone who might not have thought as much, is like my Stanley Cup! lol... you did me a great honor and I'm delighted, smiling from ear to ear and deeply appreciative. Ty for the RL add and all your supportive kindness.
Much love and respect,
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xo
-B

A huntress... Mmmm... I like the sound of that!  
lol. I have no more words to convey my thank you  
You're incredibly awesome Danny and I am glad we met each other tonight :)  
Much love from across the pond  
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xo
B

Christ Blue... Great words, great read.  I really like this.

hahaha... I LIKE that response...
Ty for listening
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xo

hahaha... I forgot that I never responded to Claude's amazing comments but I think think they're better left on their pen to enjoy.... 😉

Yes, the added heat and amount of sheer dirty yumminess that cunt brings to the table is a little bit of awesome. It's a favorite word of mine that I've actually written a poem about so yes, I concur 1000% with your thoughts there .... lol.

I'm glad you enjoyed reading / listening. This is one of my favorite pieces (erotic or otherwise) I think it so so accurately reflects me and my passion...

Intoxicating and more than just fucking.... it's like a sacred experience almost... a deep driven need....

Anyway... glad to read you liked!
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I appreciate the killer comments :)
xoxo  
-B

it's fucking beyond me why or how autocorrect inserts a 'not' there.... grrrrrrrr... it's happened before... and how 😳 embarrassing.... haha 😂  
Whoops 🤭
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Damm technology!
Hee hee hee hee

I fixed it

This is beyond the golden horizon of poetic passion. It takes me further than the origin of the universe. It is the beginning of all humanity where stars are born through lovemaking of the highest order. When I beheld your words while your voice seduced me into an atomized duality the dream became real in a flash of holy contact high and at that moment all was the bliss of the sun burning a delicious path through my very manhood. This is the poem I dream of writing. This is the totality of the poet's aspiration. This is life itself.

XoXo
John

You definitely know how to leave me all warm and smiling!! lol... Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me on this piece.  

It's been awhile since I've read it or listened, so thank you for that, too. I'll admit, it's still one of my favorites! I am swept away with you into the cosmos where this piece was whispered into creation, my dear poet.

I a deeply thankful you feel the intensity like I do and definitely did when I first wrote this poem. It's heady atmosphere and sheer heft of emotional need and want only seems to have increased with time...like the pressure of time ultimately creating a diamond. Hopefully one day this will sparkle as brilliant... Today I'm truly humbled and overjoyed that you discovered it for yourself and that it moved you as it did.

What an amazing experience and beautiful treat.
Thank you, John.

From soul to soul, indeed ;)  
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-Susan