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detected pangs of an incandescent insomniac.
Sleep is but a featherlite gentle kiss on my lips
there, teetering on the cusp of awake
swirling with an (un)recognizable pang
nothing real to allow a muster,
not even a will enough to want or care;
a bitterness,
remains—
as thoughts persist,
in all the gradient grandeur of but one reality
and my own harsh burdens to carry,
So heavy
Heavy and duly just.
within all of my(this) incriminating darkness
Published 18th Dec 2020
| Edited 19th Dec 2020
Author's Note
©Blu2020
12/18/2020~#NoPoo
pic: From the HUMAN LIGHT series
by Lukaszwodynski via Deviant Art
12/18/2020~#NoPoo
pic: From the HUMAN LIGHT series
by Lukaszwodynski via Deviant Art
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18th Dec 2020 11:26pm
18th Dec 2020 11:40pm
Wow, A... that's an incredible compliment!
Ty for reading and that mind blowing sentiment
🖤🌹🖤
xo
B
Ty for reading and that mind blowing sentiment
🖤🌹🖤
xo
B
18th Dec 2020 11:44pm
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19th Dec 2020 00:37am
BV.... this sleepless gem is an awakening to the dark torturous insomnia that we all have experienced. Blue this is pure poetry. ''Sleep is but a featherlite gentle kiss on my lips
there, teetering on the cusp of awake ''........ what a beautiful preamble to the struggles of sleepless nights! I love this. Fantastic!
there, teetering on the cusp of awake ''........ what a beautiful preamble to the struggles of sleepless nights! I love this. Fantastic!
19th Dec 2020 2:21am
I'm always struck by your attention to detail, nothing is missed within your reading, that's certain. I am very grateful for your RL add and the quotes of me back to me.... just surreal.. lol
You overwhelm me and it's not unappreciated...
I'm all smiles, that you felt it resonate.
💜
xoxo
B
You overwhelm me and it's not unappreciated...
I'm all smiles, that you felt it resonate.
💜
xoxo
B
19th Dec 2020 00:46am
19th Dec 2020 1:44am
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19th Dec 2020 2:01am
Your comments are blush worthy, and I thank you very much for stopping by to read. Leaving your thoughts and insights are truly the icing.... as far as agreeing with Adagio, I'm not sure about that deduction as I'm always a bridesmaid in that area..... hahaha
You're always welcomed
Much love and respect,
💜
xoxo
B
You're always welcomed
Much love and respect,
💜
xoxo
B
19th Dec 2020 2:33am
Well written, both eloquent and organic, full of emotion, but control in the pace and voice. Proportional excellence.
19th Dec 2020 1:10pm
Ty so much, Daniel
I appreciate you reading, the list add and your thoughtfulness. I never feel like I'm doing it correctly (for lack of a better descriptor) until I see your face on my page...
Much love and respect,
🌹 🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
I appreciate you reading, the list add and your thoughtfulness. I never feel like I'm doing it correctly (for lack of a better descriptor) until I see your face on my page...
Much love and respect,
🌹 🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
22nd Dec 2020 6:12pm
lol *Hugs* I don't always say something if I feel it'll be redundant and sometimes I miss days of writes when I'm off doing other things. 😘💖🙏
19th Dec 2020 2:47am
Damn such a spectacular spill bluevelvete 👏👏 echoing everyone else
so fucking excellent!!
so fucking excellent!!
19th Dec 2020 1:17pm
19th Dec 2020 4:05am
I think you have no just deserves! You deserve happiness everyone is always wrong ! Lol
But seriously, You are an incredible vivacious beautiful woman, and anyone that has the privilege to have your attention and affection should be so damn lucky! I love you Bluebonnet
Blueberry shake ! Don’t let them hurt you, if they hurt you you don’t need them🤗
Loves you sis
Jackie 😘❤️🤗
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But seriously, You are an incredible vivacious beautiful woman, and anyone that has the privilege to have your attention and affection should be so damn lucky! I love you Bluebonnet
Blueberry shake ! Don’t let them hurt you, if they hurt you you don’t need them🤗
Loves you sis
Jackie 😘❤️🤗
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19th Dec 2020 4:07am
Rise above let’s have a party on the phone and have a few and write some stuff 😘
Check inbox
Check inbox
Ohh dammit... I was exhausted (because of no sleep when I actually need to be sleeping) and fell asleep watching the season finale of The Mandalorian... I'm a super geek and happily admit it! I WILL take a raincheck, absolutely 100%.
Your thoughts and comments have my morning on a much much better trajectory and I'm so very happy and smiling and smiling some more!!!
Zazzles and all your sparkling ✨
Ty muchly for the list add and all you do to make me feel human again 🙏 ~my soul sister~
... we'll definitely talk soon!
💜🌹💜🌹💜
Your thoughts and comments have my morning on a much much better trajectory and I'm so very happy and smiling and smiling some more!!!
Zazzles and all your sparkling ✨
Ty muchly for the list add and all you do to make me feel human again 🙏 ~my soul sister~
... we'll definitely talk soon!
💜🌹💜🌹💜
19th Dec 2020 4:14am
19th Dec 2020 1:33pm
20th Dec 2020 1:52am
Beautiful poetry miss blue 🎄... plain and simple beautiful poetry... weighted thoughts of a heartfelt genuine real life soul... lightening its load a little... word by word...🌻
19th Dec 2020 1:30pm
Eli.... My golden ray of sunshine from afar....
I just want you to know that I do wait with bated, to see your avatar... I love reading your thoughts ~ and I'm so glad you enjoyed my little spill.
What a brilliant feeling to know that there's a beautiful hopeful kinship of two.... Ty for becoming such a light and lovely friend.. I'm appreciative of all you do and offer.
Much love and respect
🌹 🌹
xoxo
S
I just want you to know that I do wait with bated, to see your avatar... I love reading your thoughts ~ and I'm so glad you enjoyed my little spill.
What a brilliant feeling to know that there's a beautiful hopeful kinship of two.... Ty for becoming such a light and lovely friend.. I'm appreciative of all you do and offer.
Much love and respect
🌹 🌹
xoxo
S
19th Dec 2020 7:39pm
Awe thank you blue 🌷It's really an rarity to find a like mind... and I do appreciate yours so....☀️
19th Dec 2020 8:29am
19th Dec 2020 1:24pm
Yess, FeNyX, that was my fav, too!
Ty so much for reading and your thoughtful insight.
💜
xoxo
B
Ty so much for reading and your thoughtful insight.
💜
xoxo
B
19th Dec 2020 9:02am
Ok beautiful again youve smashed one out the park, truly a fantastic piece, just mind blowing awesome. I know I've said this soooo many times but GIRL YOU GOT SKILLLLZZZ and today you were right at the top of your game
Love and light and a bow of reverence
Ron xx
Love and light and a bow of reverence
Ron xx
19th Dec 2020 1:06pm
NO ONE makes my smile wider!
I can feel your encouragement and honest thoughts of support like a warm fuzzy blanket wrapped around me on this cold (for FL) Saturday morning. Thank you so much for all your generosity, Ron. Saying 'I appreciate you' isn't even close to the words I just can't seem to find to convey my unyielding gratitude. You're a beautiful soul and I am so fucking lucky to have you in my corner.
Much love and undying respect,
🌹 🌹 🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
I can feel your encouragement and honest thoughts of support like a warm fuzzy blanket wrapped around me on this cold (for FL) Saturday morning. Thank you so much for all your generosity, Ron. Saying 'I appreciate you' isn't even close to the words I just can't seem to find to convey my unyielding gratitude. You're a beautiful soul and I am so fucking lucky to have you in my corner.
Much love and undying respect,
🌹 🌹 🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
19th Dec 2020 9:09am
Oh the thoughts to come alive at the late hour and the verse you produced.
Truly wonderful.
Truly wonderful.
19th Dec 2020 1:01pm
Wonderful, is you taking the time to read and comment... I'm so very appreciative
Ty Wally, for everything
🌹🙏🌹
x
B
Ty Wally, for everything
🌹🙏🌹
x
B
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