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pauses.
It beats faithful, trusted still
while asking your name
between each paused beat
I haven't the courage gathered
to say aloud
the certainty of what my mind hides
hoping to just live always
within those pauses, between cherished beats
where we remain forever
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 1st Dec 2020
Author's Note
#NoPoo
© Blu2020
© Blu2020
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Re. pauses.
1st Dec 2020 11:55am
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1st Dec 2020 12:09pm
I agree, C
100%
I am glad you enjoyed it
🌹
Ty for your comment and the list add
xo
B
100%
I am glad you enjoyed it
🌹
Ty for your comment and the list add
xo
B
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Sep 2021 1:45am
1st Dec 2020 1:32pm
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Re: Re. pauses.
3rd Dec 2020 8:56am
Thank you soooo much, Wilber
I must have not received a notification for your lovely visit, apologies.
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I wholeheartedly agree... it's where we find our "Heart's desire" Ty for reading and I'm glad you stopped by.
💜
xoxo
B
I must have not received a notification for your lovely visit, apologies.
🌷
I wholeheartedly agree... it's where we find our "Heart's desire" Ty for reading and I'm glad you stopped by.
💜
xoxo
B
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
1st Dec 2020 3:16pm
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Re: Re. pauses.
1st Dec 2020 5:36pm
Awww, yeah you're right, that's a terrific way to see it that I hadn't thought of. Beautiful in and of itself. You are getting that poet back from within... and he's lovely.
Ty for sharing your thoughtful poetic insights,
they brought a smile.
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
B
Ty for sharing your thoughtful poetic insights,
they brought a smile.
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
B
Re. pauses.
1st Dec 2020 6:49pm
Re. pauses.
1st Dec 2020 8:03pm
Absolutely wonderful ... last line just brings the poem home ... lovely romantic write ...
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Thank you so much, LilD... I appreciate your kind words, the RL add and I'm so glad you enjoyed my little spill. It's always wonderful to see you!!
(and Jade! 🐶) I'm grateful for the visit...
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
-B
(and Jade! 🐶) I'm grateful for the visit...
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
-B
Re. pauses.
1st Dec 2020 10:17pm
.....your romantic poetry is enchanting "B''. Your poetic prowess is astonishing and I am continually amazed by how you continue to pen such beauty,
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1st Dec 2020 11:23pm
Re. pauses.
2nd Dec 2020 2:41am
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2nd Dec 2020 4:21am
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2nd Dec 2020 9:45pm
It's the pauses that give us music...words...poetry and love. Wonderful, Blue.
Amor Fati...Harry
Amor Fati...Harry
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2nd Dec 2020 10:19pm
such a beautiful thought...
it really is Harry!
💜 Ty for reading and your insights
xoxo
🌹🌹
B
it really is Harry!
💜 Ty for reading and your insights
xoxo
🌹🌹
B
Re. pauses.
3rd Dec 2020 9:45pm
I wrote this to friends yesterday,
I doubt there are many things more exquisite than being an artist, a rage of joy in it's creation, music of the all light pouring through me, where all things are power in the heart thrown wide, all loss, fear and pain are transformed from illusion to awakening. Art is an act of God.
I doubt there are many things more exquisite than being an artist, a rage of joy in it's creation, music of the all light pouring through me, where all things are power in the heart thrown wide, all loss, fear and pain are transformed from illusion to awakening. Art is an act of God.
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Daniel! How the F do I properly reply to your, your artfully insightful eloquence, in a manner by which I'm still me, yet not. You know what I mean... lol.
In a manner deserving..... so here goes....
There's nothing better, Daniel. Your observation may have been rhetorical and I can't wow you with a reply like yours (not that I am trying to wow or that I'd ever be able to... lol.. ) however I can do this.... and that's unequivocally agree.
There IS NOTHING BETTER than being able to do what an artist can do, if even with just a small amount of artistry. To create out of nothing, something tangible from pain, joy, disgust, desire, greed, happiness lust - just endless possible human emotion and to be able to funnel that emotional fuel into a release of distinct artistic purpose, that's impactful and perhaps resonating...
(even if just to one's self)
.... It's like being whispered to as a child when all was lost and crying with those little kid hiccups, Then all of a sudden that soothing feeling washed over (for those of us lucky enough)... that's what it's like.
So, yes... I agree my friend
💜
xoxo
Susan
In a manner deserving..... so here goes....
There's nothing better, Daniel. Your observation may have been rhetorical and I can't wow you with a reply like yours (not that I am trying to wow or that I'd ever be able to... lol.. ) however I can do this.... and that's unequivocally agree.
There IS NOTHING BETTER than being able to do what an artist can do, if even with just a small amount of artistry. To create out of nothing, something tangible from pain, joy, disgust, desire, greed, happiness lust - just endless possible human emotion and to be able to funnel that emotional fuel into a release of distinct artistic purpose, that's impactful and perhaps resonating...
(even if just to one's self)
.... It's like being whispered to as a child when all was lost and crying with those little kid hiccups, Then all of a sudden that soothing feeling washed over (for those of us lucky enough)... that's what it's like.
So, yes... I agree my friend
💜
xoxo
Susan
Re: Re. pauses.
4th Dec 2020 1:03am
Well and beautifully said Susan. Thank you for being here with us.
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Re. pauses.
3rd Dec 2020 10:23pm
You've captured those reflective moments in this. Very few take the time to pause and appreciate the love and passion we share for our spouse or significant other. It's almost like an out of body experience for a second, looking from the outside in and breathing a new fresh view.
Great verse Blue.
Great verse Blue.
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3rd Dec 2020 11:35pm
Thank you Wally!
Your thoughts are appreciated and I always learn a little bit with each comment of yours I read.
Love seeing you...
💜
xoxo
B
Your thoughts are appreciated and I always learn a little bit with each comment of yours I read.
Love seeing you...
💜
xoxo
B
Re. pauses.
4th Dec 2020 1:05am
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You're spoiling me.... ;)
Ty, so very much and please visit anytime
🌹
xo
B
Ty, so very much and please visit anytime
🌹
xo
B
Re. pauses.
5th Dec 2020 4:46am
Brava, Blue❣ this one made me ponder. The notion of living an alternate, kinda secret life between heartbeats. 🌹
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5th Dec 2020 6:55am
Your kindness is off the charts nice, tonight. I am at a loss for decent words and I'm just going to say that it's the fucking pauses that get all the juicy good bits of living ... that's where we as beings who create and love and fuck and all the parts of life we find most pleasurable, thrive... within those pauses... IMO...
💜
XOXO
B
💜
XOXO
B
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30th Dec 2020 2:41am
Re. pauses.
7th Aug 2022 1:17am
Awesome the moment on the edge of ecstasy the moment before the lips meet and the fireworks begin
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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7th Aug 2022 1:18am
💯 💯 💯 💯 💯
You nailed it
Thanks for reading.... I appreciate the comment, it wasn't necessary... you're very kind!
💋 💋 💋
You nailed it
Thanks for reading.... I appreciate the comment, it wasn't necessary... you're very kind!
💋 💋 💋