waiting to cauterize.(a heart's bloody tale)

so very passionate and viseral
I love it beautiful Blue 🌹

Thank you, lovely B
I am so happy that you stopped by to take a look and leave you thoughts - that made me instantly smile. Yours is a true valued visit.. much love.  
💜🌹💜
xo
-B

You have such a gift, Blue!  Beautiful work 💜

Luna,
You've just made my day!! ~As a unofficial member of Daisy's 'Luna fan girl group'
( I just don't think I've told her yet!) ~ Your opinion is a welcomed ray of sunshine, warming me up on a rare cold FL day. Thank you for your kind words, the RL add and your support. I'm very grateful.
... much love
🌹💜🌹💜🌹
xoxo
B

Gifted artist

(blushes)
you.
(killing me with such a comment!)
My lovely friend...
Thank you for those far too kind words
so grateful (for you)
💜 you bunches
xoxo
B

ahhh, sometimes matters of the heart are terrifically bloody and gruesome. I love flowers (like, love love LOVE) they're a continual theme that I write about a lot, literally and metaphorically... however, sometimes, even if I wish everything was as pretty or smelled as sweet, life just isn't and doesn't. The bloody side is a part of my experience, for sure... that's just lil ol me.... lol
I love your thoughts and cherish your visits,Tim
... much love
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B

Yes ... Bless and love ... ..

🙏 🌹
Ty for reading and your thoughts
xo
B

I thank you very much for reading and your visit!
Those are terrifically kind words and I appreciate it them muchly.  
💜🌹💜
xo  
B

Now this powerful piece of poetry would have dear Mr. Shakespeare writhing with envy...superb, Blue.
Amor Fati...Harry

Ohh Harry, I giggle at your enormous kindness!!
That's an extremely nice compliment, but I'm not even remotely... I can't even... hahaha.
You really made my day. My unworthiness in that compliment being beside the point, it really was just awfully sweet of you. Thank you my friend.
I appreciate your visit, that giggle and the list add too.
I hope you and your family are doing well. ☺
💜
xoxo
B

LOL I am going very well, Blue...just about to walk to the beach and then for a little lunch and wine...maybe beer. Hope all is good in your neck of the woods my friend?
XO

.....another gem to add to your treasure trove of poetry riches. This compelling write gives fortitude and power to the vulnerable heart..... "Yes, even then,
vulnerable and bleeding
a heart beats"..........................  your searing metaphoric words are Powerful!

Your comments and poetic eye for detail make for truly wonderful feedback experiences and I thank you completely. I appreciate you for noticing certain words or lines I've taken pains to try and string together, that means a lot.
I'm happy you see you upon my page and look forward to more!
(grateful for your RL add too!)
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
B

Oh the sentiment matches the imageey! Yet again, you have captured feeling in your words, love. Bravo and keep us hungry!

Love your comments and it's wonderful seeing you! Always glad to keep you famished....
💜
xoxo
B

Very passionate.  You are bringing the passion out of me.  Keep on writing.

Thank you for reading, Francisco!
🌹

Such a powerful, passionate and heart-wrenching (literally) spill, Blue. Your writing has evolved so much since you became a member here. It's good to see you spreading your wings :)

Dear NB,
YOU are an unknowing welcomed 'accomplice' to any improvement you may see in me, or my writing. It's (absolutely) poets like yourself and others that I constantly read and become inspired by, that have directly impacted me so deeply, affording me the opportunity to learn and hone my writing. *I tip my hat to you...  
I appreciate you reading, the list add and your jaw dropping amazing comments.....  
Ty Ty Ty  
💜🌹💜
Much love and respect,  
Blue

I wrote this to friends the other night,

I doubt there are many things more exquisite than being an artist, a rage of joy in it's creation, music of the all light pouring through me, where all things are power in the heart thrown wide, all loss, fear and pain are transformed from illusion to awakening. Art is an act of God.

Thank you my dear friend
💜
lovely sentiments
and masterfully written.
xoxo
S

Stunning and captivating work Blue. It's sort of had a Frida Kahlo-esque aspect in the descriptive and vivid imagery (as the picture compliments as well).  We're drawn into the pain and emotion of it all, it's just spell binding.
Bravo.

Thank you for your astute and well written feedback, Wally. I am hoping that I'm improving and growing with every poem or piece of feedback I read or write.
Your artful thoughts made me consider my mindset... Ty for that.
and your visit.
🌹
xo
B

This piece is oozing with rich, poignant imagery...oh and EWWW 😍 The pic is frightening and is a perfect pairing with your words.

Hee hee hee.. I giggle 🤭 at your ewww... love can be bloody, that's for sure! Your comments are perfectly scrumptious. I searched high and low for a picture that was reflective of what I saw in my mind and that was the closest thing I could find...
Ty for being 'ewwwed' (I love it) lol.. and for your lovely visit!
💜
xoxo
B

Well your hunting paid off. Every time I see written or hear the word scrumptious I think of Chitty Chitty Bang Bang, my favorite boyhood movie that you're probably too young to have watched. I am glad you laughed at my EWWW...that was my intent😍

I saw Chitty Chitty Bang Bang at a drive in movie with my parents when I was a kid... sleeping bags and pillows in the back of my mom's station wagon... lmao  
Awesome.  
😂 😂 😂 😂  
xo  
B

What a cool memory❣❣ Can't remember the last drive-in movie I saw. I'm glad you had the Chitty Chitty Bang Bang experience 😍 I wrote an erotic follow up to Mary Poppins maybe I should do ChiBang next 👅💦.
Tooting my own horn now,
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/299387-chalk/

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/302844-drive-in/ (wrote a slightly naughtier version too)

In due time... hearts will begin to align... to beat and bleed for each other... 🌹❤🔥  of this I'm certain you are deserving...

hopeful and genuinely generous.
It's next to impossible to find a kinship of any kind when you're sequestered away...
Someday, or when I least expect it... perhaps.
Ty for reading and your list add, Eli
Ohh how I feel your thoughtfulness right through to my own heart. It's just a gift, really.
Thank you
💜
xoxo
B

A storm of heart is brewing just for you... I can feel it in my chest...⚘

Elias....
yes.
💜
xoxo

Anticipation. Need. Wanting, wanting, wanting so badly. Amazing visual. A heart exposed, so vulnerable, offering up everything  - and yet, kept waiting.
Jesus.

... not wanting you to be beholden to commenting on this... me, leaving the link... was just my fucked up way to try and bring about another day of unexpected Blue.... also, to reaffirm that I am sincerely atune and YOURS, is a lasting impact. I plan to remain within the general vicinity of your orbit, if you're allowing...  


....... and their origin story begins......
🌹

Yes! Yes! Yes!
Your stlye of writing is what I aspire to. My writing is brutal and straight ahead. I want it to be pretttier - more creative. But every time I try that it SUCKS!
Your writing is passionate, powerful and..................creative. I love it.
I think the thread that runs between us is the passion - the intensity - the broken humanity. Connecting with another human being is hard - almost non-existant. But vital.
I think this is how we connect.
But, please - tell me if I am wrong. If I am missing something powerful and meaningful.