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dear Wally
he is quietly observant
reading the poets he admires
leaving thoughtful comments
then as quietly as he arrived he departs us
I have a confession part of my heart sinks when he leaves
I long for more of him
I glow when I hear from him
metaphorically speaking
so passionate with the pen
he collects his thoughts from the soul
his victories and defeats
brings them to life on the page
he is a real man I can believe in
dearest Wally, you shine
in my eyes a hero
I look forward to seeing your avatar on screen
I take comfort in your presence
in essence you're noticed among the great ones
the du halls sacred
a guardian I look up to
pen to heart...love Crimsin
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 26th Nov 2020
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Re. dear Wally
26th Nov 2020 2:18am
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26th Nov 2020 3:10am
good evening beautiful Vati thank you graciously I think it's a wonderful idea ❤
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26th Nov 2020 3:52pm
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26th Nov 2020 3:57pm
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26th Nov 2020 3:59pm
Re. dear Wally
26th Nov 2020 5:19am
Dear B,
Agreed. A gentleman as well as a poet. You’re beautiful ode is a stellar stand out but that makes perfect sense since you are as well. Thoughtful, kind and lovely write. H🌷
Agreed. A gentleman as well as a poet. You’re beautiful ode is a stellar stand out but that makes perfect sense since you are as well. Thoughtful, kind and lovely write. H🌷
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2nd Dec 2020 2:49pm
thank you beautiful Honoria for the love on this write he is a beautiful soul... I deeply appreciate your thoughts forgive my late response 💕
Re. dear Wally
26th Nov 2020 10:37am
Absolutely beautiful a fantastic piece I hope Wally is feeling like the cat who got the cream.
Lovely
Love and light
Ron x
Lovely
Love and light
Ron x
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2nd Dec 2020 2:51pm
good morning dearest Ron thank you he is a wonderful soul as you yourself are... I deeply appreciate the love on this write forgive my tardiness in response ❤
Re. dear Wally
Anonymous
26th Nov 2020 12:24pm
Wally is indeed a gentleman and a scholar. You chose wisely, Brenda. Good luck in the compy!
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2nd Dec 2020 3:07pm
thank you graciously dearest Johnny yeah Wally is a great poet please forgive my late response I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤
Re. dear Wally
26th Nov 2020 2:28pm
I love Wally
I don’t say that about men often
Truly a voice of reason in a complicated world, a man nonetheless with passion and needs
Here Here
A Salute to Wally and dear Crimsin for bringing him into focus
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I don’t say that about men often
Truly a voice of reason in a complicated world, a man nonetheless with passion and needs
Here Here
A Salute to Wally and dear Crimsin for bringing him into focus
Like
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2nd Dec 2020 3:09pm
good morning dearest Poet please forgive the lateness of this response thank you my friend for helping me show Wally love... I'm having difficulty connecting with people lately I hope that's passed I deeply appreciate you 🌹
Re. dear Wally
27th Nov 2020 8:18am
I must say, I feel humbled and honored by this piece Brenda. Everyday (or nearly everyday) when I log on to DUP I'm always excited to read what all of you here are expressing. I keep a separate worksheet (yes, I'm a nerd that way) to help me keep track of everyone who follows me so I can give them the courtesy to read and comment, (aside from those of you who I follow religiously). I am amazed by the talent and variety of styles all of you have here. DUP is my getaway, my daily dose of escape where I draw inspiration.
Brenda, I am awestricken by your verses. Too many times I've found myself lost in the weaving of your work, it's passionate and sincere, ranging from the physical to the spiritual and everything in between. I make it my mission to read as much as I can but tonight I'm thankful for your rendition. (It's been a great week).
I believe the camaraderie everyone has built here gives us more hope and optimism for the future despite these difficult times.
I hope that you had a great Thanksgiving and that you are keeping safe. Thank you and God Bless.
(Oh, and Good Luck in the comp, in my book, this is a winner).
Brenda, I am awestricken by your verses. Too many times I've found myself lost in the weaving of your work, it's passionate and sincere, ranging from the physical to the spiritual and everything in between. I make it my mission to read as much as I can but tonight I'm thankful for your rendition. (It's been a great week).
I believe the camaraderie everyone has built here gives us more hope and optimism for the future despite these difficult times.
I hope that you had a great Thanksgiving and that you are keeping safe. Thank you and God Bless.
(Oh, and Good Luck in the comp, in my book, this is a winner).
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2nd Dec 2020 3:12pm
good morning dearest Wally first please forgive the lateness of this reply I'm so out of it lately... I'm so happy you enjoyed this little tribute to the man and poet you are... as for being a nerd no you're just conscientious and care for people feelings that's beautiful... me I used to be on top of things here but I'm slipping lately feeling a little disconnected hopefully it will pass... I cherish your thoughts my friend ❤
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Anonymous
1st Dec 2020 00:35am
Awe Crim........I agree with every word.......Wally is a master of poets and devoted friend to so many here.......luv this.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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2nd Dec 2020 3:13pm
hey there beautiful Flower thank you for helping me in giving Wally some love 💕