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Fate
She was promised
A nice future
For her name was Destiny.
Fate had something else
In mind
For she had a cruel streak
And her name was then
Written in blood
In eternal infamy.
A nice future
For her name was Destiny.
Fate had something else
In mind
For she had a cruel streak
And her name was then
Written in blood
In eternal infamy.
Published 20th Nov 2020
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20th Nov 2020 4:40am
Very, very good. I wasn't expecting your poem to end the way it did! Nice twist!
27th Nov 2020 6:10am
Raises the question whether are names help direct our paths, or the decisions we make.
Sounds like Destiny's path was not a pleasant one.
Big like on this one.
Sounds like Destiny's path was not a pleasant one.
Big like on this one.
