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a lifelong gasp in bloom.
i lay
coveted
and covered
euphoric heart's desire-
'O herculean desire
that steals my breath;
i gladly gasp in bloom
my whole world
of these always and forever dreams—
how I gleam
to transcend and glow
with pounding chest;
a scented crest
tears undying, flow
as this true loves yearling,
My love, lavender
sweet field of true,
pure purple beauty
bursting forth
from nature's hand,
~whispers a release
of her certainty
in royal majesty
i pause,
in a wholely ardent still
laying forevermore
spellbound
and cradled
within nature's
breathless surround
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 10th Nov 2020
| Edited 21st Mar 2021
Author's Note
For Val's DU Word of the Week. Enter with Enthusiasm forum.
This week's word = Lavender
*This is a bucket list of life long want.
The lavender fields of the Pacific Northwest & France ....
©Blu2020
This week's word = Lavender
*This is a bucket list of life long want.
The lavender fields of the Pacific Northwest & France ....
©Blu2020
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 1:56am
Re: Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 2:04am
Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 2:50am
Laying down in the flowers with your man by your side is cool. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 4:31am
Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 4:17am
Re: Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 4:30am
Love the new avatar!
Ty, Jackie
I'm grateful for for the RL add and your lovely comments. Ahhh, the smell of lavender wafts...
💜
xo
B
Ty, Jackie
I'm grateful for for the RL add and your lovely comments. Ahhh, the smell of lavender wafts...
💜
xo
B
Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 8:02am
Again this is poetry
You say there us a bar
I know there’s no bar
If there was
This wouldn’t bevwtitten
You say there us a bar
I know there’s no bar
If there was
This wouldn’t bevwtitten
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Re: Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 8:56am
You set the bar, my lovely AP.
I yammer and scribble about flowers... big big
difference.. lol
You are generous in your comments and I'm grateful (always) for your RL add.
Your visits mean a lot to me, Ty for stopping by and reading
🙏 🌹 💜
xoxo
B
I yammer and scribble about flowers... big big
difference.. lol
You are generous in your comments and I'm grateful (always) for your RL add.
Your visits mean a lot to me, Ty for stopping by and reading
🙏 🌹 💜
xoxo
B
Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 9:11am
Your poetry just blows me away, you.paint the most amazing pictures with your words but this was truly awesome
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 1:28pm
Good morning! in running late and overslept as I was up intermittently last night... so Ty Ty Ty for such a kind (waaaay too kind) comment. I'm appreciative and utterly grateful for you and your visit. I also Ty for the RL add as well.
-so amazed you enjoyed it!
🌹 🌹 🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
-so amazed you enjoyed it!
🌹 🌹 🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
Re: Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 1:28pm
Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 5:55pm
This is so beautiful. I love lavender. The color, the smell. You paint a lovely scene.
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Re: Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 6:40pm
Ty so much Eerie. ☺
Me too! I'm a sucker for flowers in general but there's something about lavender.... It's smell, color, therapeutic properties, etc.. I have ALWAYS just thought it's so ethereally beautiful. My best friend is moving from Brooklyn to a very small town in Washington state, probably in a few months. I'm extremely excited about visiting, because there's a lavender field (my dream!) not far from where she's decided to move to...
-what serendipity!!
Ty for reading and your lovely comments!
(check out one of the many farms... can you imagine!!??... I would just be in heaven! )
💜
B
https://purplehazelavender.com/
Me too! I'm a sucker for flowers in general but there's something about lavender.... It's smell, color, therapeutic properties, etc.. I have ALWAYS just thought it's so ethereally beautiful. My best friend is moving from Brooklyn to a very small town in Washington state, probably in a few months. I'm extremely excited about visiting, because there's a lavender field (my dream!) not far from where she's decided to move to...
-what serendipity!!
Ty for reading and your lovely comments!
(check out one of the many farms... can you imagine!!??... I would just be in heaven! )
💜
B
https://purplehazelavender.com/
Re: Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 7:13pm
Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 10:29pm
Re: Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
10th Nov 2020 10:41pm
You know it's all my brain's chemistry....
I must ooze dopamine while thinking of my want of want...especially flowers (for some reason)
I appreciate you reading and your astute comments, always.
I've enjoyed your informative writings, too..
In fact, I've greatly enjoyed them.
Ty for sharing.
🙏
🌹
xo
B
I must ooze dopamine while thinking of my want of want...especially flowers (for some reason)
I appreciate you reading and your astute comments, always.
I've enjoyed your informative writings, too..
In fact, I've greatly enjoyed them.
Ty for sharing.
🙏
🌹
xo
B
Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
11th Nov 2020 8:48pm
It's a very palpable piece Blue. Between the smell and the colors, it's really quite transcending to say the least.
Beautiful work.
Beautiful work.
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Re: Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
11th Nov 2020 8:55pm
Hi, Wally
I really appreciate that comment, as this spill meant a lot to me. Flowers might seem like they're a trivial subject matter, but I have this deep seated love for them, beginning from childhood. The lavender fields are of special importance. So I'm extremely pleased with your enthusiasm and enjoyment.
Ty so much for sharing your thoughts
🌹
xo
B
I really appreciate that comment, as this spill meant a lot to me. Flowers might seem like they're a trivial subject matter, but I have this deep seated love for them, beginning from childhood. The lavender fields are of special importance. So I'm extremely pleased with your enthusiasm and enjoyment.
Ty so much for sharing your thoughts
🌹
xo
B
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2nd Dec 2020 11:28pm
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Re: Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
2nd Dec 2020 11:35pm
Oh my, what lovely comments, Tim.
This might seem like a floofy puff piece but it's meaningful to me in several ways and I'm moved that it resonated with you. T'was a instant smile, reading your comments... Ty for sharing, the list add and your supportive (and lovely) thoughts
💜🌹💜
xo
-S
This might seem like a floofy puff piece but it's meaningful to me in several ways and I'm moved that it resonated with you. T'was a instant smile, reading your comments... Ty for sharing, the list add and your supportive (and lovely) thoughts
💜🌹💜
xo
-S
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3rd Dec 2020 00:10am
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Re: Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
3rd Dec 2020 1:29am
You're very awesome comments are much appreciated and I thank you for reading!
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
Re. a lifelong gasp in bloom.
22nd Oct 2022 5:49am
Bluevelvet,
There's an ah sweet to this ah poem, that, within it's air just ah soothe' and ah calmed mine. And, u ah talk like u are in conversation with someone and.......all because u enjoy their ah company. This is ah sweet too....and......this ah poem is ah granduer. The flow of this ah poetry's ah wind into my eye's heartbeats there of was so ah super influentially inspiring to my ah stay ah within. Blue u write ah poetry so invigorating, that, I just ah have to A+ U from my ah grade of stand point. And though an old one, thank u ah heavily for ah sharing this ah poem with thee.👁️🧅🥦🥝🍐🍇🍜👄👍🤛🤜🌈👅💋🍑🤎🤍👄
There's an ah sweet to this ah poem, that, within it's air just ah soothe' and ah calmed mine. And, u ah talk like u are in conversation with someone and.......all because u enjoy their ah company. This is ah sweet too....and......this ah poem is ah granduer. The flow of this ah poetry's ah wind into my eye's heartbeats there of was so ah super influentially inspiring to my ah stay ah within. Blue u write ah poetry so invigorating, that, I just ah have to A+ U from my ah grade of stand point. And though an old one, thank u ah heavily for ah sharing this ah poem with thee.👁️🧅🥦🥝🍐🍇🍜👄👍🤛🤜🌈👅💋🍑🤎🤍👄
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