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usurp
within our shared
sacred hallows
your eyes fix,
and lock onto mine;
I follow,
as you usurp
my inner sorrow
with your
perfect embrace,
damn
your
steady grace;
and those fingers,
so strong
in their
gentle trace
of my
lonely
face,
one that's
far from
commonplace,
so say the words
from your lips
to replace
my insecurity's
disgrace;
we still,
when
speechlessness
settles
and
creates an
ease
between us,
that quiet
allows
loneliness
a chance
to fade - to degrade
as you
kiss away
such
vicious scars
of hate
and encase
my soul
in your perfect
musk'd floral
ginger'd
embrace
leaving us
both
silent,
emotionally
sated
f l o a t i n g
into
a
twined combined
devoting
Published 24th Oct 2020
Author's Note
.... within the ether....
©Blu2020
©Blu2020
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24th Oct 2020 8:27pm
24th Oct 2020 8:46pm
I never know just when I might...
Ty for reading, and your thoughts,
my lovely friend
I'm extremely grateful for the RL add
and your support, Ron
💜 💜
xoxo
🌹
B
Ty for reading, and your thoughts,
my lovely friend
I'm extremely grateful for the RL add
and your support, Ron
💜 💜
xoxo
🌹
B
Anonymous
- Edited 24th Dec 2020 7:45am
24th Oct 2020 9:22pm
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24th Oct 2020 9:30pm
It's a pipe dream.... lol
Ty for reading, Reggie.
I appreciate you, muchly
and I'm humbled for your generous
RL add, too.
💜 🌹💜🌹💜
xo
-Velv
Ty for reading, Reggie.
I appreciate you, muchly
and I'm humbled for your generous
RL add, too.
💜 🌹💜🌹💜
xo
-Velv
24th Oct 2020 9:37pm
24th Oct 2020 10:05pm
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Jan 2022 4:45am
24th Oct 2020 9:57pm
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24th Oct 2020 10:03pm
Thank you very much,
I'm grateful for the read
and your comments
💜
🌹 🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
I'm grateful for the read
and your comments
💜
🌹 🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
24th Oct 2020 10:16pm
Your longing is evident, Blue.
Good emotional presence.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Good emotional presence.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
24th Oct 2020 11:45pm
Thank you for reading
and your comments, bk
glad you like stopped by
xoxo
💜🌹💜
-B
and your comments, bk
glad you like stopped by
xoxo
💜🌹💜
-B
24th Oct 2020 10:23pm
24th Oct 2020 11:43pm
24th Oct 2020 11:54pm
You dont really need me to comment
Beautiful
A poet now recognised by others as so
Beautiful
A poet now recognised by others as so
24th Oct 2020 11:56pm
what I need and what I want....
haha
Ty for your lovely comments
and the RL add, AP
You made my night
🌹
xoxo
-B
haha
Ty for your lovely comments
and the RL add, AP
You made my night
🌹
xoxo
-B
25th Oct 2020 1:36am
Very beautiful poem, written by a strong beautiful women. Keep on writing.
25th Oct 2020 1:39am
25th Oct 2020 2:32am
25th Oct 2020 2:38am
🙏
Ty, so much, B
Your comments are gracious
and made my night improve with a smile.
I feel your warmth and I bask in it tonight.
I'm grateful for your RL add but more so
for your visit.
Have a gorgeous Sat night
🌹🌺🌹🌺
xo
-B
Ty, so much, B
Your comments are gracious
and made my night improve with a smile.
I feel your warmth and I bask in it tonight.
I'm grateful for your RL add but more so
for your visit.
Have a gorgeous Sat night
🌹🌺🌹🌺
xo
-B
25th Oct 2020 12:05pm
25th Oct 2020 1:14pm
25th Oct 2020 8:26pm
Blue... wonderfully written... of the pure heart... I have no doubt that when the likes of these rhymes hold such a beautifully rich and damn near perfect rhythm... the "ALL" cant help but synchronize to your strong wishes in some sort of capacity... I read this three times in a row lol... fantastic... 🔥⚘🌹
26th Oct 2020 00:18am
Eli,
Your comments truly made me smile and I found myself blushing, not out of embarrassment but out of sheer excitement. Heated by your compliment in a way that made me go back and reread my own write... lol I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm grateful for your visits, always.
Ty so much for the RL add and your truly truly beautiful thoughts. I'm humbled
💜 🌹💜🌹💜
xo
B
Your comments truly made me smile and I found myself blushing, not out of embarrassment but out of sheer excitement. Heated by your compliment in a way that made me go back and reread my own write... lol I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm grateful for your visits, always.
Ty so much for the RL add and your truly truly beautiful thoughts. I'm humbled
💜 🌹💜🌹💜
xo
B
26th Oct 2020 3:43pm
You are most welcome Blue.!. And the same can be said of your kind visits to my pages...🔥 you say you are humbled... and I feel you are deserving...
25th Oct 2020 10:03pm
26th Oct 2020 00:12am
Ohh Harry...
You're very kind,
Ty for reading and I'm glad
you enjoyed it
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
Ty for the RL add too ☺
You're very kind,
Ty for reading and I'm glad
you enjoyed it
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
Ty for the RL add too ☺
26th Oct 2020 7:33pm
The multiple meaning of such beautiful words keeps the mind imagining and desiring. Thanks for sharing, as always a perfect poem. Hugs and peace. oral xoxo
26th Oct 2020 11:14pm
Your words flow around me and I snuggle in...
Ty for sharing your thoughts I adore them
💜🌹💜
xo
B
Ty for sharing your thoughts I adore them
💜🌹💜
xo
B
Anonymous
28th Oct 2020 3:10am
I kinda hate myself when I envy such beautifully crafted fucking cypher, .. lyrical rhythm in the word play, .. and you killed the viciousness, .. 'bout half way down, .. I admire your talent Blue
wanna make a music video?
would you watch this one, .. please , .. see the middle verse in this song reminds me of your ( usurp )
hear https://youtu.be/qQoc7SrVXTQ?list=RDqQoc7SrVXTQ
wanna make a music video?
would you watch this one, .. please , .. see the middle verse in this song reminds me of your ( usurp )
hear https://youtu.be/qQoc7SrVXTQ?list=RDqQoc7SrVXTQ
28th Oct 2020 10:16am
You're very kind in your compliments
and RL add generosity, I'm grateful.
🙏
I listened to your song as well and see the similarities, briefly..
I know nothing about making a music video... lol
Thank you for the offer, I'm smiling from ear to ear that you enjoyed my little offering
Please visit anytime.... always welcomed
🖤💜🖤💜🖤
🌹
xoxo
B
and RL add generosity, I'm grateful.
🙏
I listened to your song as well and see the similarities, briefly..
I know nothing about making a music video... lol
Thank you for the offer, I'm smiling from ear to ear that you enjoyed my little offering
Please visit anytime.... always welcomed
🖤💜🖤💜🖤
🌹
xoxo
B
30th Jun 2022 8:37am
This poem is luv direct within the heart's ah face. The intuitive of this perfection of mind written of your type of grace. The flowers of the one u would be talking too of a just because. Blue lady u rock one hundred percent. This poem to me has no flaws. Eloquence of work this piece is.
30th Jun 2022 9:04am
Hey there, Birchel
Once again your kind words leave me uplifted and completely grateful. Thanks for diving in deep and retrieving this one! It was fun to read it again.
I'm so pleased that you find my work with the eyes that you do. I think that bringing a bit of happiness to another or contributing even a small amount to an emotion that improves or elevates a mood or mindset is an honor and high privilege.... one that I hold dear.
Thank you so very for your visits.
🌹 - B
Once again your kind words leave me uplifted and completely grateful. Thanks for diving in deep and retrieving this one! It was fun to read it again.
I'm so pleased that you find my work with the eyes that you do. I think that bringing a bit of happiness to another or contributing even a small amount to an emotion that improves or elevates a mood or mindset is an honor and high privilege.... one that I hold dear.
Thank you so very for your visits.
🌹 - B
30th Jun 2022 2:09pm
U are so welcome. I'm truly grateful that u are touched by my comments and feel I can pay a better tribute to .y own works by doing it to u.
