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rother
Written by
nomoth
Published 21st Oct 2020
Author's Note
my pic/collage.
rother is the name of the river that runs through our town.
rother is the name of the river that runs through our town.
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Re. rother
21st Oct 2020 00:32am
Dear nomoth,
I haven't yet deciphered what exactly here has happened,
but the narrative debraided my brain in so many strayed yet tethered ends,
that I'm frayed and can't comprehend whether I sit or stand;
and for that I'm happy to be stranded in your discordant wasteland! :)
I haven't yet deciphered what exactly here has happened,
but the narrative debraided my brain in so many strayed yet tethered ends,
that I'm frayed and can't comprehend whether I sit or stand;
and for that I'm happy to be stranded in your discordant wasteland! :)
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Re: Re. rother
21st Oct 2020 11:04am
Re. rother
21st Oct 2020 1:40am
"I can not keep anything straight or under control or at least half forgiven"
great write dearest Nomoth
so full of rich layers and detail...
I can relate ❤
great write dearest Nomoth
so full of rich layers and detail...
I can relate ❤
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Re: Re. rother
21st Oct 2020 11:07am
Re. rother
21st Oct 2020 3:28am
I am trying to wrap my head around it, but I’m too mesmerized to make it happen. I will revisit this several more times, I’m sure. As always, a stunning visual.
P.s. I really like the layout of this piece. I’m digging your new avatar as well.
P.s. I really like the layout of this piece. I’m digging your new avatar as well.
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Re: Re. rother
21st Oct 2020 11:10am
Lol. Thank you so much,
especially for the RL which is encouraging, I know this maybe over abstracted, Was attempting hopefully a dream sequence of childhood town memories. I will add more themes I think.
Thanks again
especially for the RL which is encouraging, I know this maybe over abstracted, Was attempting hopefully a dream sequence of childhood town memories. I will add more themes I think.
Thanks again
Re. rother
You describe it so insightful and stimulating nicely composed brother...respect🙏
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Re: Re. rother
21st Oct 2020 11:12am
Thanks so much Stoney.
Always appreciate your presence.
No worries at all but i am a guy poet not a lady poetess.
again thank you fellow poet.
Always appreciate your presence.
No worries at all but i am a guy poet not a lady poetess.
again thank you fellow poet.
Re: Re. rother
21st Oct 2020 12:00pm
Respect return to you brother poet I like the rest enjoyed this stimulating spill respect 👊👊👊
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Re. rother
21st Oct 2020 3:47pm
not going into the details Nomoth.. this is stunning piece .. as seen in the abstract poetry & its layout picturization you present overall... in all nostalgic whirling~ whorling in deep depths .. that you do as you only do.. its magic mystic shaping up from the bits & pieces that your carefully scatter in your unique artistry taht is inimitable & neverseen in du or elsewhere i had been... Will share this in POM .. as this is yet another PURE MAGIC from your beautiful heartmindbodysoul dear !! Best & Congratzz & shine on as ev :)
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Re. rother
21st Oct 2020 8:55pm
Your gentle touch into details, violent rises and hushed descents. Your writing is music of infinite depth. It is a masterclass.
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Re. rother
22nd Oct 2020 10:54pm
Like those first few chords of Beethoven's 5th...one waits knowing the magic that follows...amazing ink N.
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
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Re. rother
23rd Oct 2020 9:55pm
It's only in childhood we seem to encounter tadpoles!? A topographical stream of memories and childhood itself. Respect. Much. Rob
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