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Her Siren Song
Shipwrecked
On your rocks
I crumpled
On your shore
As the night burned on
Your eyes
Gave no warning
How my heart
Would crash
Was it Inevitable
Siren
You knew my fate
A strange kind of love
The drowning feeling
Feels so right
It was
Your beautiful song
That steered me
Across dangerous waters
Into your arms
On your rocks
I crumpled
On your shore
As the night burned on
Your eyes
Gave no warning
How my heart
Would crash
Was it Inevitable
Siren
You knew my fate
A strange kind of love
The drowning feeling
Feels so right
It was
Your beautiful song
That steered me
Across dangerous waters
Into your arms
Published 15th Oct 2020
| Edited 25th Oct 2020
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15th Oct 2020 7:25pm
Beautiful imagery and I love the flow from line to line, your words had me floating upon your emotional waves 🌊
Ty for sharing, AP
I am feeling this one deep today.
💜
xoxo
B
Ty for sharing, AP
I am feeling this one deep today.
💜
xoxo
B
15th Oct 2020 7:27pm
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
15th Oct 2020 9:42pm
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20th Oct 2020 5:10pm
Excellent depiction and emotion. Men have conquered and gone to great distances when they hear it.
Awesome piece.
Awesome piece.
28th Oct 2020 11:23pm
Anonymous
7th Dec 2020 7:19pm
Magnificently done captures all emotion
