mason bees decorating the lids

Wonderful write ... great flow ... nice line breaks ... last line is haunting ...

Thank you so much Lil.

You paint a really beautiful and haunting picture. The visual is really nice as well. The slip of a spirit makes it.

Thanks Eerie, so appreciated.

' The slip of a spirit makes it.' love it - meaning the distorted photo?

Yes, the distorted photo. I really like what you did there.

Exquisite. The net curtains evoke so many memories. You prob know what I going to write next? Lol. Would truly look stunning collected in a book. Respect. Rob

Hauntingly intimate. Gorgeous detail. It left me with a resonant ache of love and loss.

Damn, dude. I need to give this another read, but the first impression is really intense. Even though there are aspects that I don't immediately understand, the whole thing just drips with emotion.

Masterous! Noire always thought you were mysterious,
how correct she was and still is, evidently.



Charles

agrees with Daniel... intimate descripts... mositly drippy sticky sensual ... that infuses .. as love as memories in presence absence whatever.. the title summates these in such raw wanton beauty.. & therein in your words, there is the deepenoing delicate eternal purity .. of Love. Wondrously engaging depths of our language nomoth! write on suchmore classiks...

Exquisit, nomoth.

Beautiful ink N...memories create the self.
🙏 Harry

"the mole by your mouth" made me woodchuck'le, as I picture it as an actual mole.

Ha! the intention was kind of half there. was thinking about a mole digging down for words and then coming back up...a weird metaphor but i left it like that.

excellent

thank you so much