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You have been doing it for years
Your thirteen different usernames
five different memberships
easy money and hard life
where you simply purchase
almost everything
Playboy-snuff-sex
even love
so what
You have been doing it for years
You love to squirt your juice
for a stranger as long as she
twitches-moans-bites-licks
and the webcam is the new eye
thru which you tend to see
them smiling-moving-lifting
the eye for the eye-
the looking glass-
the telescope
so what
You have been doing it for years
You have rubbed your prostrate
tasted your smegma
cleaned the tip with glycerine
when demanded and you have had them
pinch their light pink nipples
follow the way to the treasure
insert rubber-steel-whatnot inside
rub their clitoris-squirm-shudder
while sending you kisses(:X)
post a transfer thru paypal
And one time you were called
pervert-sick fuck-creep
so what
You have been doing it for years
When you get bored of watching
Japanese snuff where underage girls
get raped-for hours-by hordes of men
their nasal screams and real tears giving
you the high which pure heroin has failed to
so what
You have been doing it for years
Until you begin to have feelings
for someone-too real-surreal
even for-someone-like-you
She cries for hours in front of
the webcam-shows the marks
cuts-bruises-fresh-old wounds
She opens herself fully and
shows her core to you-that lies
deep inside-deeper than everything
every single hole and curve of her
and then you invite her over
the same day you break down
after she tells you that
she's an o r p h a n
and then you see her one day
with her family-peppy-pious
Pretty mother-tall brother-large father
And you think of the mascara
that had run down her cheeks
and how she had placed your
hand on her right breast
that was throbbing with
her tiny heart beats-rapid
and in between her legs
and how she had pushed your head
and how you had pushed your member
grinding-grunting-glorious
And now all of that looks bad
From where you stand-still
two kiosks form the perspective
and they read collectively-your PoV
'charity-case'
so what
You would be doing it for years.
Published 27th Jan 2012
| Edited 28th Jan 2012
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27th Jan 2012 11:40pm
28th Jan 2012 11:46pm
Grace
Thank you for the read
and the wonderful analogy.
You said just.:)
Sumeet
Thank you for the read
and the wonderful analogy.
You said just.:)
Sumeet
28th Jan 2012 12:40pm
28th Jan 2012 11:47pm
Anando
Thank you for the read
and the wonderful comment.
Trying to break ground and
push limits. Glad you enjoyed.
S'
Thank you for the read
and the wonderful comment.
Trying to break ground and
push limits. Glad you enjoyed.
S'
30th Jan 2012 00:12am
This was an outstanding view into the mind of the sex addict and his own personal convictions!
30th Jan 2012 6:22am
Firebyrd
I am so glad to have you
here. Glad you saw it so
well.
Thank you for the read,
S'
I am so glad to have you
here. Glad you saw it so
well.
Thank you for the read,
S'
Anonymous
31st Jan 2012 2:02pm
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31st Jan 2012 9:21pm
Anonymous
2nd Feb 2012 2:16pm
The poem was well written...but the comments underneath were even more interesting....I think of WHORES as SEX WORKERS...which is the FEMINIST PERSPECTIVE....Many of the prostitutes in countries where WOMEN are NOT wanted...are young girls...sold into PROSTITUTION...They may NOT have CHOSEN this life...so I do not agree that a whore is a whore....But I do agree that this is THE PERCEPTION of the WRITER and SOME of his READERS.
2nd Feb 2012 11:06pm
Somelikeithot
Thank you for the read.
Well there seems to be some
sort of a gulf here. And I
agree wholeheartedly with
you.
Write on,
S'
Thank you for the read.
Well there seems to be some
sort of a gulf here. And I
agree wholeheartedly with
you.
Write on,
S'
14th Feb 2012 12:04pm
Hey somelikeithot..
I do agree with your view.
We should not judge people by their occupation
as we don't know how they got into the job like 'PROSTITUTION'.
Its very easy to comment and give views but its very difficult to understand.
Like there is a very common proverb:
"Always put yourself in other people's shoes. If you feel that it hurts you, it probably hurts the person too."
:)
Peace
I do agree with your view.
We should not judge people by their occupation
as we don't know how they got into the job like 'PROSTITUTION'.
Its very easy to comment and give views but its very difficult to understand.
Like there is a very common proverb:
"Always put yourself in other people's shoes. If you feel that it hurts you, it probably hurts the person too."
:)
Peace
14th Feb 2012 11:51am
Yeah..
I agree with your each and every word
it all make sense to me.
I am glad the way it ends..
Its real.
:)
I agree with your each and every word
it all make sense to me.
I am glad the way it ends..
Its real.
:)
15th Feb 2012 1:09am
slumbeauty9
Thank you for the read.
I am glad you saw 'it'
and it made sense to you.
Light,
S'
Thank you for the read.
I am glad you saw 'it'
and it made sense to you.
Light,
S'
