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~bluebirds of a sunshowering Congo's evergreen balcony
Author's Note
#78 #ERULGCT Robonoid x A lil viz on an eternally etched beauteous brimming ev memories of birds of starkly hues of Nature, of equatorial Congo..where i was for couple of years..truly a wondrous bit of heaven .Shared for 'Brief But Beautiful' comp.Light & Love ev xx
*minor typo errs: At S4L2, kindly read 'bazaary' in place of 'bzzaary'. Also S4L7, read it as 'throaty' in place of 'throsty'. thanks:)
*minor typo errs: At S4L2, kindly read 'bazaary' in place of 'bzzaary'. Also S4L7, read it as 'throaty' in place of 'throsty'. thanks:)
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Re. ~bluebirds of a sunshowering Congo's evergreen balcony
12th Sep 2020 10:41pm
Phew. What a beautiful poem merely from observing birds over a cup of tea. Everyone should be so mindful as to pay attention to the natural beauty surrounding them lives. And the image is stunning as well.
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12th Sep 2020 10:48pm
sometimes or almost all times.. bits n pieces of nature..around or within..are jyz enough to feel fully whole n connected with the cosmos dwar A..aww you feel know all my beautiful wise One.. cherish your words n warmth n love ev my friend n adored poetess ev 💖🙏🔥
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12th Sep 2020 10:49pm
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13th Sep 2020 6:09pm
I love the fullness of dimensions one encounters in your writings. The simultaneousness is all I can think to say about it. There is this sense of the cosmos, which is enormous, glorious and encompassing, but there is also the magnification of detail which is Zen in an entirely intimate way. There is powerful energy and more delicate energy. It creates in the mind's eye a very beautiful spacious journey, through which one moves, both as the bird and as the observer, drinking tea, all things joined in a sense of spirit. It is a beautiful experience. 💖🙏
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13th Sep 2020 6:13pm
Awwe Dearest Adored Daniel.. you make me wordless .. in your poetry your presence your reads & spirited feedback touching soul... Hope all is well at your end.. & in shinig form as ev friend.. Light & Love from this part of world D 💖🙏
Re. ~bluebirds of a sunshowering Congo's evergreen balcony
13th Sep 2020 6:38pm
Totally agree with comments^ You consume the reader in the minutiae of everyday living, which are so often overlooked & taken for granted (myself included). Congo vibrantly shrills onto the page. Love me x
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Re. ~bluebirds of a sunshowering Congo's evergreen balcony
13th Sep 2020 11:33pm
I do love birds...and frogs and snails for some strange unknown reason...a truly beautiful poem, uma...tweet...tweet.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re. ~bluebirds of a sunshowering Congo's evergreen balcony
20th Sep 2020 8:40am
Your work was meant to be sipped like tea,
each bit a complete miniature tree
every drop so many seeds to crops
each bit a complete miniature tree
every drop so many seeds to crops
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