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(in)finitude
1.
your wide mind~ bird
from a dead-end (he)art..
skyrockets high..
seeds barren earth-
afloat a sunken bubble
in your lumpy vacuum
2.
that day, he brimmed life...
yet knew.. 'feels
around Yama's Rope'
how he nods to last goatish blink-
for Love...
kills me infinite
3.
dusts i rise, disintegrous..
clubbing back to One
humming Zygote
back to dusts. and, so on..
death is a myth-
ageless soul
Published 13th Sep 2020
Author's Note
#79 3ERULGCT. Robonoid xx
Shared for 'Goodbyes Like.." Comp . , Three Entries, Each one of 31 syllable Count .
pic: web
Shared for 'Goodbyes Like.." Comp . , Three Entries, Each one of 31 syllable Count .
pic: web
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13th Sep 2020 6:01pm
I just melted into an existential puddle of Love here. This poem, with all its perfect wording and space is absolutely beautiful, Uma. xo
13th Sep 2020 6:06pm
Always inspiring are you heartfelt reads & comments dear A.. loved the depths you felt & express here.. means a lot adored Poetess! Light & Love Ev xx
13th Sep 2020 6:07pm
13th Sep 2020 6:09pm
Anonymous
13th Sep 2020 6:42pm
This comp passed me by. Much luck. 3 awesome (confessional) twist of your pen. I very impressed by your minimalist musings xxx
13th Sep 2020 7:16pm
You took the comp in a very uniquely Uma direction. Amidst the bittersweet sense of loss there is that universal connection, of transcendence, a kind of reductionist sense in your final section, where the nihlistic gives way to the infinite. Beautiful work, wonderful to contemplate.
13th Sep 2020 8:35pm
No one else can write with your existential sensitivity, uma.
Well done.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Well done.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
13th Sep 2020 11:36pm
We are all so often blind to the interconnectedness and interdependence of it all...a beautiful poem, uma.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
Anonymous
14th Sep 2020 8:33pm
sublime balance and unification of division bringing, lightening huge vista.
POM nominated. loved this so much
POM nominated. loved this so much
20th Sep 2020 8:43am
