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Abducted
You invaded my space,
Taking over my world;
With astronomical impact,
You rocked me, girl.
You abducted my heart,
Probing into my brain;
And at the speed of light,
You drove me insane.
Taking over my world;
With astronomical impact,
You rocked me, girl.
You abducted my heart,
Probing into my brain;
And at the speed of light,
You drove me insane.
Published 3rd Sep 2020
Author's Note
A playful little poem about love :)
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3rd Sep 2020 9:11pm
3rd Sep 2020 9:18pm
They always seem to do this to you don’t they!! But we sure do love it don’t we!!
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
3rd Sep 2020 9:25pm
Brilliant! It's playful, cleverly constructed and a pleasure to read. I applaud you!
4th Sep 2020 2:14am
4th Sep 2020 3:42am
4th Sep 2020 3:58am
Dear NB,
This is absolutely charming and so sweet in its straight forward message. Thoroughly enjoyed the soft rhyme and meter. Nicely done! H🌷
This is absolutely charming and so sweet in its straight forward message. Thoroughly enjoyed the soft rhyme and meter. Nicely done! H🌷
4th Sep 2020 5:01am
New-be LTNS 😁 this was and is Cute and clever :)
👍🏻
Hope you are well you sound happy that makes me smile good man 🤗
Zazzles
👍🏻
Hope you are well you sound happy that makes me smile good man 🤗
Zazzles
4th Sep 2020 6:38am
Rock my world, rocks in my head, rock-n-rye, rock on...
Good, playful write NB.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Good, playful write NB.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
9th Sep 2020 11:33pm
On my 3rd marriage NB...we will put up with all suffering as long as we can find a little meaning. Very clever ink.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
10th Sep 2020 3:01pm
Woah you awesomely expressed the power, control and domination of love and you seem happy about it. Kudos!!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
15th Sep 2020 7:41pm
