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Mermaid Waves
The sea-
it beckons me
speaks to my soul
whispers of
it's secret mysteries
so far down below
I have never
seen a mermaid
although I've no doubt
that they exist
among the dolphins
the octopi and fish
There's something
so alluring about the tales
that I've been told
of mermaids luring men
to their deaths
both young and old
it beckons me
speaks to my soul
whispers of
it's secret mysteries
so far down below
I have never
seen a mermaid
although I've no doubt
that they exist
among the dolphins
the octopi and fish
There's something
so alluring about the tales
that I've been told
of mermaids luring men
to their deaths
both young and old
Written by
faithmairee
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
Published 16th Aug 2020
| Edited 17th Aug 2020
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Re. Mermaids Waves
16th Aug 2020 7:10pm
I've heard of mermaids's tale too as a kid. Sometimes old folks tell us that we will be turned into mermaids if we stay in the water for hours. Lovely poem Faith. 🙏🌹
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16th Aug 2020 7:13pm
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16th Aug 2020 8:15pm
Nice poeting here dear Faith ... I too find mermaids fascinating ... Loreleis of the sea ...
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Thank you, dear Poetess! I have always been fascinated with them. Whenever I went swimming as a kid, I always pretended I was a mermaid. I have written a few more poems about them. There's "Mermaid Dreams" and "A Mermaids Tale." Thank you for your lovely comments.
Re. Mermaids Waves
17th Aug 2020 6:12am
I'm with the other commentators, so beautifully penned! a dream of a poem
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17th Aug 2020 8:49am
Re. Mermaid Waves
17th Aug 2020 2:14pm
Yes, the Sirin nymphs are real and have lured many sailors to their doom. Thanks for bringing this old myth back to the spotlight. Peace. oral
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Re: Re. Mermaid Waves
18th Aug 2020 4:37pm
You're very welcome! I have a beach towel that says, "Be a mermaid...make waves...lol.
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Re. Mermaid Waves
18th Aug 2020 4:40pm
Thanks for your lovely comments! Yes, illusive is a perfect word to describe a mermaid. I'm so fascinated by them that I must have been one in a past life...lol!
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