Penumbra

Well hello there, tank lady. 😋

I like that opening image of wearing the night waters like a cape. I think it lends a very personal image when it comes to embracing the world around her.

I wasn’t sure about the frequent use of the full stops at first. But on a couple of reads, I actually think it works better for this piece because it makes the reader stop and process each statement as an individual thought, and combining them all collectively as one journey I find really interesting to be part of.

Also I think the use of jet as a colour is criminally underused. So thank you for cheering me up by using it.

Smashing little comeback number. Thank you for sharing.

-M

What a beautiful poem. It's bulging with delicious and surreal imagery.  That ending though, amaranthine heart, what an absolutely delightful evocation of image and word.  

Celestial events are magical to me ( despite their scientific reasoning ).

That wasn't so hard was it?
Welcome back and excellent poetry
I will look foward to many more.

A wonderfully smashing  re~entrance .. exquisitely penned

I just hope somebody had the foresight to lay down a pile of bodies for you to walk over, and some dry -ice fog stuff

easy read, nice flow/ pace about it. had to wonder about persistently, I mean it's four syllables. that said, I dont think it's a hindrance


Iooked up the title, deep as fuck (very deep)

I shall leave it there, except to say, it's great to see you here

Penumbra... did you write a poem or was this your creative response whilst playing a game of Balderdash? You see, like the bumper sticker says, Poetry Happens... like magic!  
 
Jet hands... stain... ripples...  
   
Good!

I went away for a few days and see what happens-You FINALLY comeback to hang out with the cool crowd  :D

This is Written in such Beautiful style and manner - flows with ease
Greatness!!!

Hi Atakti

I appreciate the subtlety with which you illuminate the mastery and grace of a morpheme.

I had to look up "amaranthine." I had thought "amaranth" was a plant. I didn't know it also meant "undying."

Sincerely
Duncan