Corpus Flow

This is rich in fertile imagery. It reminds me of an old apple tree we once had; a beautiful snag long after her fruitful days.  

Two suggestions to improve the flow:  
First, it's should be its ( auto-correct strikes again ); secondly, the comma after squirrels is too disruptive, imho. It should flow more like the final two lines.  

While I personally dislike commas ending lines that already contain natural pauses, I also realize some seem a more natural placement then others.  

Beautiful work.

Thanks Ahavati, for the care put into your response.

Autocorrect tried to pounce again! The bastard.

Really appreciate your thoughts.

expression.

dark.

flowed, moved
then sunk in.

remnants of times
dark
leave behind matter
rich, dark.

You’re pushing this zenwards... hmmm could be my current mood resists the direction a little less than expected.

Cheers cf

#scarecrow living. I feel this one a little too much for my liking. The edge on it was sharp enough to cut.

I hear you Dys. The inspiration for this feels just as shitty.

Thanks for stoppin’ by...

Well at least the roots are drinking deep,
that is a good sign it is on the mend, so
soon the squirrels can have at it

...well now wait a  minute, that distant murk
has me a little alarmed...

So it should, dear reader. Tread carefully in that murk.

Thanks for noticing.

and where the frickin frick are the rest of the poems?!

Stark in message and yet rich in detail, terrific marriage, potent in the economy of it's imagery, which paints a vivid portrait and leaves the reader to fill in their personal interpretation. Effective technique. I often say, everything is a rorschach test. How people interpret the write says a lot about them.