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Blush of midnight sun
burned and bloomed
under her loving gaze
a statuesque Rembrandt
outlined shadows define
forms of lust, wagging tongue
her form, rose as ethereal goddess
lit by kiss and glittering stars
where every arch accentuated looms
strength within beauty supersedes all
under gold chains cradling naked breast
a feathered foot of slim demure
Their enrapt nature twist like snakes
writhing now by firelight
two tongues wrestle, lush and mighty
flames glow to pearl-set stomach
her round perfection tear-drop, enticing
moans escape revealing hidden hunger
bricks for foundations lust flicker on and off
shouldered by Samsons given strength
his eyes alive, wild like and allure
skin sizzles between their sight
sung as birds of ruby throated nature
touch becomes the only sense for complete
braised bodies accepting praise shimmers
wetted tongues devour lush landscapes
every fingerprint taken stealing home
a shaft of light devoured, a home of security, deliverance
as again the snakes writhe for quest of pearl
songs of heavens sigh take hold with release
burned and bloomed
under her loving gaze
a statuesque Rembrandt
outlined shadows define
forms of lust, wagging tongue
her form, rose as ethereal goddess
lit by kiss and glittering stars
where every arch accentuated looms
strength within beauty supersedes all
under gold chains cradling naked breast
a feathered foot of slim demure
Their enrapt nature twist like snakes
writhing now by firelight
two tongues wrestle, lush and mighty
flames glow to pearl-set stomach
her round perfection tear-drop, enticing
moans escape revealing hidden hunger
bricks for foundations lust flicker on and off
shouldered by Samsons given strength
his eyes alive, wild like and allure
skin sizzles between their sight
sung as birds of ruby throated nature
touch becomes the only sense for complete
braised bodies accepting praise shimmers
wetted tongues devour lush landscapes
every fingerprint taken stealing home
a shaft of light devoured, a home of security, deliverance
as again the snakes writhe for quest of pearl
songs of heavens sigh take hold with release
Published 27th Jun 2020
Author's Note
For Yummy101's Nudity In Words Comp.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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27th Jun 2020 4:24pm
30th Jun 2020 8:45pm
Thank You Girlie-Q!!!
I never Write these things but once in a while, so I'm happy You thought it worthy.
I never Write these things but once in a while, so I'm happy You thought it worthy.
27th Jun 2020 6:13pm
30th Jun 2020 8:46pm
27th Jun 2020 6:43pm
30th Jun 2020 8:47pm
27th Jun 2020 9:42pm
That's a mighty Pretty woman you have there. Venus to Helen ...twice Troy and more. Awesome write Soul.👍
30th Jun 2020 8:49pm
Awwww Thank You Grace!!!
You know I rarely Write these type
So I'm shaky of it.
I'm so glad You could catch the beauty I wished to convey!!!
You know I rarely Write these type
So I'm shaky of it.
I'm so glad You could catch the beauty I wished to convey!!!
27th Jun 2020 10:25pm
You leave me speechless, Gabe!! Damn, what a write! What a magical and sensuous masterpiece ❤️🙏
I was so happy to get back on here today and see that you had posted a poem. Keep up the great writing, my friend. It's gorgeous! It's always so good to read you :)
I was so happy to get back on here today and see that you had posted a poem. Keep up the great writing, my friend. It's gorgeous! It's always so good to read you :)
30th Jun 2020 8:51pm
Appreciate You NB!!!
I had my doubts going into the Write
I'm thankful the magical bit filtered thru.
Your visits and comments are always treasured!!!
I had my doubts going into the Write
I'm thankful the magical bit filtered thru.
Your visits and comments are always treasured!!!
28th Jun 2020 00:59am
Wow, exactly what NewBeginnings said since I cannot say it any better than that. Total greatness here.
30th Jun 2020 8:53pm
An Honour to have You visit Kristina!!!
Thank You for Your time and kind comment.
I am not very good at such writes...but at times I try
So I am glad You think it worthy!!!
Thank You for Your time and kind comment.
I am not very good at such writes...but at times I try
So I am glad You think it worthy!!!
30th Jun 2020 10:03pm
O.......my....MYYYYY!!!! breathing quickens to shortened inhalations....heart's rhythm misses a few beats, and the room has--somehow--become much too warm and stuffy---( even tho the air conditioning is working over-time this afternoon!)
My Friend, this is truly an uniquely and creatively crafted piece! The expression of the physical sensuality, allows readers to imagine the beauty of the scene, from his/her own perspective....a gentler, less explicit expression of the erotic connotation ! Tho....the passion is clearly present! I am especially fond of the 8th stanza.....the heightened state between the lovers expressed as "skin sizzling" and "sung as birds of ruby throat!!! ( the sound and feel of the thrum of a humming bird's wings......sooo delicately lovely!!! ( S I G H.........)
A Passionate Penning---To Be Certain !!! <3
My Friend, this is truly an uniquely and creatively crafted piece! The expression of the physical sensuality, allows readers to imagine the beauty of the scene, from his/her own perspective....a gentler, less explicit expression of the erotic connotation ! Tho....the passion is clearly present! I am especially fond of the 8th stanza.....the heightened state between the lovers expressed as "skin sizzling" and "sung as birds of ruby throat!!! ( the sound and feel of the thrum of a humming bird's wings......sooo delicately lovely!!! ( S I G H.........)
A Passionate Penning---To Be Certain !!! <3
30th Jun 2020 11:54pm
So Great to see You DE!!!
I am glad I was able to pull off the subtle
enough yet stay sensual enough
Thank You for the time and energy -and that RL-Honoured
Rare I write this area, so when You guys tell me such things...
I know I've done okay-Thank You!!!
I am glad I was able to pull off the subtle
enough yet stay sensual enough
Thank You for the time and energy -and that RL-Honoured
Rare I write this area, so when You guys tell me such things...
I know I've done okay-Thank You!!!
2nd Jul 2020 7:11pm
10th Jul 2020 4:28pm
Appreciate Your pop-in Kink!!!
I've never been too good at these type of Writes as You are Brother
So that means alot to me!!!
If I started Writing regular in this area, I'd probably come (cum) off cheesy.
I've never been too good at these type of Writes as You are Brother
So that means alot to me!!!
If I started Writing regular in this area, I'd probably come (cum) off cheesy.
10th Jul 2020 4:51pm
I have a feeling your cheesy would be Stilton and brie as opposed to my cheese whiz.
🙏
🙏
20th Jul 2020 3:13pm
This is absolutely amazing! I feel lucky for having been able to read it.
20th Jul 2020 4:51pm
20th Jul 2020 4:53pm
19th Aug 2020 2:00pm
ahem.
*fans self*
Well.
This was quite the read to start my day! This is exactly the kind of erotica I like to read. Something that makes my brain work for it and once it’s hooked...bless us! Well done. I’ll be back, I think!
*fans self*
Well.
This was quite the read to start my day! This is exactly the kind of erotica I like to read. Something that makes my brain work for it and once it’s hooked...bless us! Well done. I’ll be back, I think!
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