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Black Lives Matter (4-5-4 Haiku)
Tears shed deep red
Now blood in their stead
‘One Nation’ dead.
R.
Now blood in their stead
‘One Nation’ dead.
R.
Written by
Rachelleundrgrd
Published 15th Jun 2020
Author's Note
The USA will never be great until and unless....
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Re. Black Lives Matter (4-5-4 Haiku)
15th Jun 2020 6:43pm
Amen, Rachelle! I can't imagine what it's like being discriminated against outside of being a woman in a male world. The first step is everyone accepting everyone, regardless of race, color, creed, or nationality as an equal voice in this country. THEN the first step toward Oneness has been taken.
Love this.
Love this.
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Re: Re. Black Lives Matter (4-5-4 Haiku)
16th Jun 2020 6:15pm
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15th Jun 2020 8:43pm
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16th Jun 2020 6:17pm
Re. Black Lives Matter (4-5-4 Haiku)
15th Jun 2020 8:45pm
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16th Jun 2020 6:17pm
Re. Black Lives Matter (4-5-4 Haiku)
15th Jun 2020 9:24pm
Powerful message Rachelle, it's delivered with wisdom and hope.
Nicely penned.
Nicely penned.
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Re: Re. Black Lives Matter (4-5-4 Haiku)
16th Jun 2020 6:19pm
Thank you for the kinda words, Wally! May that we get there someday soon! Rachelle
Re. Black Lives Matter (4-5-4 Haiku)
16th Jun 2020 4:23am
Re: Re. Black Lives Matter (4-5-4 Haiku)
16th Jun 2020 6:20pm
:)! I also hope I am right about the optimism I have that we can actually change!.. :). R.
Re. Black Lives Matter (4-5-4 Haiku)
16th Jun 2020 4:42pm
Hell yeah. A remarkably simple truth stemming from a complex problem. Beautiful and stark.
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16th Jun 2020 6:22pm
Re. Black Lives Matter (4-5-4 Haiku)
23rd Jun 2020 8:38pm
Ain't that the truth... 'united, we Stand - divided, we fall."
I don't have high hopes that we will be united anytime soon, as tensions seem to be steadily escalating, but hey... I have a smidgen of hope left. Anyway, nice writing, Rach <3
I don't have high hopes that we will be united anytime soon, as tensions seem to be steadily escalating, but hey... I have a smidgen of hope left. Anyway, nice writing, Rach <3
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Re: Re. Black Lives Matter (4-5-4 Haiku)
26th Jun 2020 4:17pm
It is hard, isn’t it? I try not to hope too much, and just do the work as if it is almost upon us. :). Thanks for the thought-provoking comment. R.
Re: Re. Black Lives Matter (4-5-4 Haiku)
26th Jun 2020 4:59pm
You're most welcome, R. Indeed it is. That is a good attitude to have too! Being too hopeful often leads to disappointment...
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