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Re: Re. Empathy
3rd Jun 2020 5:10am
Awww, thank you, Nikki :)
I had this poem written about a week ago, but thought it needed another verse or something... I finally decided it was quite concise and needed no more words. Today, it clicked for me - what I needed was a nice visual to accompany it!
I appreciate you stopping by my page again to read and show your love and support...
Much love,
-NewB
I had this poem written about a week ago, but thought it needed another verse or something... I finally decided it was quite concise and needed no more words. Today, it clicked for me - what I needed was a nice visual to accompany it!
I appreciate you stopping by my page again to read and show your love and support...
Much love,
-NewB
Re: Re. Empathy
3rd Jun 2020 1:00pm
I never go back and change anything,
If the poem cant stand in the 5 minutes it took me to write it, then I delete it for good. Love the image. ❤
If the poem cant stand in the 5 minutes it took me to write it, then I delete it for good. Love the image. ❤
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Re: Re. Empathy
14th Jun 2020 1:49pm
Oh, wow... That's interesting. I just save them as drafts. Some day when I return, I'll finish in one sitting ;)
Thanks again, Nikki 🌹
Thanks again, Nikki 🌹
Re: Re. Empathy
3rd Jun 2020 5:32am
Thank you, brokentitanium, you're very sweet... I am weeping for the world I really appreciate your readership and support, as always :)
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3rd Jun 2020 4:43am
Re: Re. Empathy
3rd Jun 2020 5:34am
Thanks, Francisco! I appreciate those kind, but interesting choice of words lol
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3rd Jun 2020 6:45am
Re: Re. Empathy
3rd Jun 2020 4:20pm
I will certainly try, Summer ❤️
Thank you for the good wishes, and for your kindness and friendship... I'm glad you liked the poem!
Thank you for the good wishes, and for your kindness and friendship... I'm glad you liked the poem!
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3rd Jun 2020 7:39am
Re: Re. Empathy
5th Jun 2020 7:51am
I would like to think that most of us do carry this burden; but, at times, I am quite cynical. Thanks so much for stopping by again, slipalong! I appreciate your readership and support 🙏
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3rd Jun 2020 12:07pm
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10th Jun 2020 9:30am
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4th Jun 2020 00:33am
Re: Re. Empathy
14th Jun 2020 3:48am
Thanks so much, Poetic_Strength... I am glad that you think so! You are very sweet ❤️.
Thank you for your kind words and continued support.. it means a lot to me.
Thank you for your kind words and continued support.. it means a lot to me.
Re. Empathy
4th Jun 2020 6:27am
Short ... crisp ... powerful ... says everything that needs to be said ... so glad you trusted the poem ...
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Re: Re. Empathy
14th Jun 2020 3:51am
Awww, LilDragonFly ❤️
That means so much coming from a wonderful poetess such as yourself... Thank you so much for your gleaming review and RL entry! 🙏😊
That means so much coming from a wonderful poetess such as yourself... Thank you so much for your gleaming review and RL entry! 🙏😊
Re. Empathy
4th Jun 2020 10:24am
Why are we humans so selfish... Why just we can't live in love, peace and harmony...
Beautiful ink...
Beautiful ink...
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Re: Re. Empathy
14th Jun 2020 1:55pm
I think it's in the genes...
I wish for a world that is united in love, but sometimes I feel that is an unrealistic dream. Here's to better days!!
You are so very sweet, InDreamz... You are always so supportive of my writing - thank you much for stopping by to spread the love! Your kind words mean a lot to me ❤️
I wish for a world that is united in love, but sometimes I feel that is an unrealistic dream. Here's to better days!!
You are so very sweet, InDreamz... You are always so supportive of my writing - thank you much for stopping by to spread the love! Your kind words mean a lot to me ❤️
Re. Empathy
4th Jun 2020 11:01pm
Re: Re. Empathy
14th Jun 2020 1:57pm
I'm glad that this one resonated with you... Fellow empathetic human ❤️
Thanks so much for your readership and support, poetess!
Thanks so much for your readership and support, poetess!
Re. Empathy
6th Jun 2020 5:15am
Dear NB,
There isn’t a word in this piece that is wasted. From start to finish it encompasses the aches of the human spirit. Beautiful write. H🌷
There isn’t a word in this piece that is wasted. From start to finish it encompasses the aches of the human spirit. Beautiful write. H🌷
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2020 3:41am
Oh lovely! Luv it. <3
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Re. Empathy
27th Jun 2020 8:53pm