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Too Long Gone

Too long gone
A personal, gaping void
So much to say
So many words
Drifting on the bitter smoke

His ill luck thrives
Seems here to stay
And catastrophes abound
The wind blowing him to breakage
The crack of rust resounds

He still whispers to the wind
"Enough. I will prevail.
I have wavered.  I have sinned.
But take heed:  I will not fail."
Written by crowfly
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