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Re. within a fortune of space
29th May 2020 12:25pm
Re. within a fortune of space
29th May 2020 12:36pm
Great poem, great entry for the comp. I love the oblique references to the theme of 'risk'.
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Re. within a fortune of space
29th May 2020 12:43pm
Re. within a fortune of space
29th May 2020 12:55pm
Re. within a fortune of space
29th May 2020 2:31pm
Re. within a fortune of space
29th May 2020 2:42pm
Re. within a fortune of space
29th May 2020 5:49pm
Re. within a fortune of space
Anonymous
29th May 2020 7:24pm
Fell into this (poor pun intended). That first line is fuckin' stunning. Take a bow my friend. Rob
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Re. within a fortune of space
1st Jun 2020 1:10pm
very humanistic take on risk in those opening lines ...n that, the core & senses.. which are aware n in consensus of the tenses... & strengthens in a divine magnificence.. an ultimate resolute truth & reality... stunning work nomoth.. best in comp:)
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Re. within a fortune of space
5th Jun 2020 6:24am
You are certainly a master of aesthetics... loved the cryptic beauty here coupled with the splendid visual display. Your poems and visuals are so uniquely you :)
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Re. within a fortune of space
8th Jun 2020 9:40pm
Your writing is straight fire. Each of your lines packs such a punch, and the visuals add much. Sorry to gush! Great stuff.
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