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You Inspired Something in Me
I write fucked up sex poems
Your story inspired me
To pull away from the negative
My darkness is a permanent stain
Humanity doesn't need him
I'm trying
Your story inspired me
To pull away from the negative
My darkness is a permanent stain
Humanity doesn't need him
I'm trying
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Re. You Inspired Something in Me
12th May 2020 1:35pm
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12th May 2020 1:37pm
Re. You Inspired Something in Me
12th May 2020 1:36pm
this is beautiful dearest Poet
I think it's worthwhile...
great write and beautiful artistry ❤
I think it's worthwhile...
great write and beautiful artistry ❤
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12th May 2020 1:38pm
Re. You Inspired Something in Me
12th May 2020 1:56pm
You are a mostly positive force in this world in my eyes... but it's always good to be self-aware of our shortcomings. Thanks for sharing your thoughts...
Best wishes,
-NewB
Best wishes,
-NewB
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Re: Re. You Inspired Something in Me
12th May 2020 2:10pm
Thanks NB
I had bern feeling this way for awhile but didn't know how to pivot.
The change feels good !!
I had bern feeling this way for awhile but didn't know how to pivot.
The change feels good !!
Re. You Inspired Something in Me
You, and humanity both need darkness. It’s serves a purpose. It’s about balance, responsibility, self awareness,wholeness. I would argue that your writing sex poem is the very thing that allows you to understand, connect, and intimately manage the darkness within you. After all, repressed darkness bleeds out into our lives and often those close to us, with little awareness and great consequence. Never run from darkness, channel it. With that said, it may also have become an area of comfort, growth happens when we push our selfs to a point of discomfort. So, step outside that comfort zone! Keep trying. Do both! It’s all about balance, my friend. Be a bit light and darkness in this world .
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12th May 2020 2:38pm
Darkness has always been my comfort so wholesomeness 24/7 would be a challenge and unwanted. This new mindset Is something that has been stirring in me for awhile. How to merge all the forces within me.
One day at a time as the story goes .....
Thank you for your thoughtful comment !
One day at a time as the story goes .....
Thank you for your thoughtful comment !
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12th May 2020 2:44pm
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12th May 2020 2:55pm
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12th May 2020 2:57pm
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12th May 2020 3:00pm
Re. You Inspired Something in Me
12th May 2020 3:12pm
Wow, Julia said it so well!! I still struggle with the balance.
I've been asked to do one of those annoying "share your favourite books" things on facebook, and my pick for today is Learning to Walk in the Dark by Barbara Brown Taylor. Perhaps a little too theological for some, but it's been an important book for me. Funny your poem should pop up just when I'm thinking about that!
As always, I dig the art. Don't banish those black spots.
I love seeing you inspired, my friend. ❤
I've been asked to do one of those annoying "share your favourite books" things on facebook, and my pick for today is Learning to Walk in the Dark by Barbara Brown Taylor. Perhaps a little too theological for some, but it's been an important book for me. Funny your poem should pop up just when I'm thinking about that!
As always, I dig the art. Don't banish those black spots.
I love seeing you inspired, my friend. ❤
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Re: Re. You Inspired Something in Me
12th May 2020 3:15pm
There always has to be SOME BLACK to juxtapose the brighter colors
Ironically in my new thought process I was thinking about doing a update poem to Fuck Beige, maybe Fuck Beige 2
Stay tuned !!
Thx for the art support as always
X
Ironically in my new thought process I was thinking about doing a update poem to Fuck Beige, maybe Fuck Beige 2
Stay tuned !!
Thx for the art support as always
X
Re: Re. You Inspired Something in Me
12th May 2020 3:20pm
One of my kids wore all beige the other day. Thought of you immediately and I had to bite my tongue not to swear at him! It's pretty clear I don't choose his clothes. 😆
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Re: Re. You Inspired Something in Me
I’m fair skinned and if I wore too much beige I would melt into the void. Can’t allow that !!
Actually I try to avoid all beige
Your kids will grow up and merge left I’m sure !
Actually I try to avoid all beige
Your kids will grow up and merge left I’m sure !
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This is lovely PS. Reflects the other side of you as a poet and artist, soft and gentle side that you hide from the glare of lights. Nothing wrong with darkness we all have that inside us and I think darkness serves a purpose in our life. It is a place to hide, a refuge for our pain. But it should not overwhelm the light inside us. They must be balanced. 🙂
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Re: Re. You Inspired Something in Me
12th May 2020 4:15pm
Thank you Summer
I appreciate you
You often show that balance in your writing and you are an inspiration as well.
I think I’m only 1/4 deviant so I might be okay ....
👍✊👏
I appreciate you
You often show that balance in your writing and you are an inspiration as well.
I think I’m only 1/4 deviant so I might be okay ....
👍✊👏
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12th May 2020 4:18pm
Re. You Inspired Something in Me
13th May 2020 7:09am
Dear P,
I like that you try. In the end we are who we are and that’s what makes us so loveable. Self reflection and moreover self awareness makes us all the more interesting. Love the painting. H🌷
I like that you try. In the end we are who we are and that’s what makes us so loveable. Self reflection and moreover self awareness makes us all the more interesting. Love the painting. H🌷
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Re. You Inspired Something in Me
13th May 2020 12:41pm
Thanks H
I try to clean up very now and again but I always get pulled ack in because I'm a criminal at heart, Bukowski like and nerd to run free.
I spent a lot of time in detention when I was in high school
I guess it shows
😁
I try to clean up very now and again but I always get pulled ack in because I'm a criminal at heart, Bukowski like and nerd to run free.
I spent a lot of time in detention when I was in high school
I guess it shows
😁
Re. You Inspired Something in Me
13th May 2020 8:58pm
I like that this is honest, vulnerable and raw. No fucks given, just as poetry and art is meant to be expressed.
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13th May 2020 9:01pm
I made some amends in the few days and am now moving through the brush ...
Thx W
Thx W