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Come The Strawberry Harvest
It was right there on the tip of his tongue
kissing lemon with some little tart
a stone pathway, pushcart town
awaiting strawberry festival
juicy and succulent drips mix in pitcher
cool of ice lavished with suckle
so sweet She is dribbling my chin
this my friend, tis a wonderful lil town
local oxen trot with goods
waves from wares drawing interest
sky blue crockery, clay-fired cups
sown sights, given sounds from local artists
evening combs and lanterns glow
smiles produce glint with laughter
soft is this way for country-fried towns
where hands once again touch, respect, love
Published 6th May 2020
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6th May 2020 1:00am
dearest Soul I enjoyed every moment of this bliss
so beautifully detailed yum ❤
so beautifully detailed yum ❤
6th May 2020 1:03am
Awwww You are so kind Dear Brenda!!!
Twas the way a few of these local towns did it...how I hope it comes back soon!!!
Twas the way a few of these local towns did it...how I hope it comes back soon!!!
6th May 2020 1:00am
6th May 2020 1:06am
I'm always happy to see You here Hash!!!
We will have it again my Friend...these little towns are right at the eastern Panhandle of WV ...Maryland,PA, Virginia ...all together with same subtle vibe...We will open again-Faith My Friend
We will have it again my Friend...these little towns are right at the eastern Panhandle of WV ...Maryland,PA, Virginia ...all together with same subtle vibe...We will open again-Faith My Friend
6th May 2020 1:26am
This is just beautiful poetry. So rich in imagery, detail, and emotion. It indulged all the senses. Great writing.
6th May 2020 1:29am
Thank You for such high praise LD!!!
Honoured!!!
How I treasure such sleepy peaceful towns.
Appreciate You stopping by to visit my Writes
Honoured!!!
How I treasure such sleepy peaceful towns.
Appreciate You stopping by to visit my Writes
6th May 2020 1:51am
I love it, the imagery is wonderful. I can smell the funnel cakes. I miss the days of going to local festivals. <3
6th May 2020 1:56am
Man isn't that true...I miss it so.
Honored to have Your visit and RL
Thank You ever much!!!
Honored to have Your visit and RL
Thank You ever much!!!
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Jun 2022 2:45am
6th May 2020 5:21am
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6th May 2020 7:23am
Love to You BB!!!
Simplicity , how well that hand touching hand a hold in hugs...
Such things should never been brought complicated.
Ecstatic to have You here Buddy
Thank You for the RL Honor!!!
Be Good To Yourself!!!
Simplicity , how well that hand touching hand a hold in hugs...
Such things should never been brought complicated.
Ecstatic to have You here Buddy
Thank You for the RL Honor!!!
Be Good To Yourself!!!
6th May 2020 6:40pm
Such lovely imagery, Gabriel. Grateful for artists like you so skillful in crafting words to paint pictures of the beautiful experiences that make life worth living.
7th May 2020 10:21am
You're too good to me Tony!!!
Thankful for You my Friend, we need that good energy Bad Brother.
These little towns, as a teen seemed to bore me to no end.
Then came early 20's and with every age...the magic of them grew to become absolute NEED.
Now in this removal from normalcy and good whether moves in...
Nostalgia rides high.
Thank You Always for You Tony!!!
Thankful for You my Friend, we need that good energy Bad Brother.
These little towns, as a teen seemed to bore me to no end.
Then came early 20's and with every age...the magic of them grew to become absolute NEED.
Now in this removal from normalcy and good whether moves in...
Nostalgia rides high.
Thank You Always for You Tony!!!
6th May 2020 7:07pm
This is full of happy vibe Soul. Rich and colorful imagery. And the way you painted it with your pen brings the festival to life in my mind. The sounds and sights are alive in this spill. 🌹🙏
7th May 2020 10:24am
Awwww Thank You for visiting Summer, I'm so glad I could convey the energy.
We need such happiness around us at times.
The real convergence of artisans, foods and people --sharing life.
We need such happiness around us at times.
The real convergence of artisans, foods and people --sharing life.
6th May 2020 8:59pm
Ahhhhhhh.......the strawberry festival! Such a true, traditional wellcome to the early Summer season! And...O...how Your pen guides your readers, directly into the midst of this one...i can a c t u a l l y taste the ripe strawberry juice.. picture the vendors selling their hand-made crafts/wares...people casually walking--fingers intertwined--as Day gradually gives way to Evening! This is a true celebration of life's simpler enjoyments!
A Poem of Pure Pleasure....Mo chara seoda!
A Poem of Pure Pleasure....Mo chara seoda!
7th May 2020 10:28am
Hey DE Always great to see You back in DU!!!
I'm glad You felt a connect to this, we need our little town magic back.
The magic of it all pervades ones mood and health, giving in, giving out.
Sights, smells and sounds waft along, tis beauty at it's best.
Thank You always for Your kindness!!!
I'm glad You felt a connect to this, we need our little town magic back.
The magic of it all pervades ones mood and health, giving in, giving out.
Sights, smells and sounds waft along, tis beauty at it's best.
Thank You always for Your kindness!!!
7th May 2020 5:09am
this fabulous place is my new home. never to leave....love this and you.<3
7th May 2020 10:30am
Love to You ML!!!
The stuff that little towns easily give ...magic that!!!
It makes my day whenever I see You rolling through town.
You are part of the magic here Kidd-O!!!
I shall see You soon!!!
The stuff that little towns easily give ...magic that!!!
It makes my day whenever I see You rolling through town.
You are part of the magic here Kidd-O!!!
I shall see You soon!!!
8th May 2020 9:25pm
I'm glad to leave off my reading here. This write is so warm and earthy and intimate. The flow of one thought into another is seamlessly harmonious as music. I love the touch of details and how it moves along, painting this full dimensional portrait, emanating a nuance of emotions. Your spirit is beautiful and it flows through your writing. Mine is still too mired in ego methinks, but you can see me trying lol.
8th May 2020 9:39pm
You're very kind Daniel as Always!!!
No Bro You've got a firm grip on Your ego, What You present of Yourself connects to warmth...can't fake that shite!!!
Your takeaway from this means much to me and glad it resonated!!!
No Bro You've got a firm grip on Your ego, What You present of Yourself connects to warmth...can't fake that shite!!!
Your takeaway from this means much to me and glad it resonated!!!
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
9th May 2020 00:19am
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9th May 2020 11:24am
9th May 2020 1:18pm
Sexy and erotic.
Now i wish blueberries had that connotation but strawberries for some reason win every time...maybe because they own that light (heartedness) color of red..not to be confused with (cherry) red.
But the poem is superb, i must say it's got one of the best flow (unflawed) ease dripping from the tongue sweetness.
Now i wish blueberries had that connotation but strawberries for some reason win every time...maybe because they own that light (heartedness) color of red..not to be confused with (cherry) red.
But the poem is superb, i must say it's got one of the best flow (unflawed) ease dripping from the tongue sweetness.
9th May 2020 1:30pm
Appreciate You commenting the flow...
The energy to that was important to me with that one.
The breath and all that.
Yes indeed something about those strawberries and bit of sugar.
The energy to that was important to me with that one.
The breath and all that.
Yes indeed something about those strawberries and bit of sugar.
10th May 2020 1:22am
You really captured this so beautifully. I will definitely be reading more. :)
10th May 2020 2:44am
13th May 2020 5:46pm
Beautiful refreshing imagery you bring in the scenic place , life& emotions..in all lively vibes & sensations & colours... soulful poetics you flow as ev Soul..Shine on :)
13th May 2020 6:06pm
So happy to see You here Uma, I hope this breathes a moment of peace to You from me.
Hugs to You-You are light
Hugs to You-You are light
20th Jul 2020 5:07pm
"...kissing lemon with some little tart..."
I think that's my favorite line, but it's great all through.
I think that's my favorite line, but it's great all through.
20th Jul 2020 5:18pm
