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Ordinary Me
I’ve never had much of a social life,
But she’s always been quite the socialite;
And even though I’ve been so polite,
She’s always shown me no requite.
She’s perched atop a mountain peak,
While I’m 20,000 leagues, under the sea;
Dotting every i, crossing every T,
She never seems to miss a beat.
She’s so perfectly pristine—
I, the servant, and she the queen;
And, though, I’d give her my everything...
I’ve never really had a thing.
All I have to give, is this gift of words,
And a heart that’s filled with chirping birds,
A vocabulary rich with working verbs...
But, it's a song that she’s already heard.
Yet, I sit beneath her windowsill,
With my trusty ink and feather-quill,
And serenade her nightly, still;
My heart, to her, I'll forever spill.
But she’s always been quite the socialite;
And even though I’ve been so polite,
She’s always shown me no requite.
She’s perched atop a mountain peak,
While I’m 20,000 leagues, under the sea;
Dotting every i, crossing every T,
She never seems to miss a beat.
She’s so perfectly pristine—
I, the servant, and she the queen;
And, though, I’d give her my everything...
I’ve never really had a thing.
All I have to give, is this gift of words,
And a heart that’s filled with chirping birds,
A vocabulary rich with working verbs...
But, it's a song that she’s already heard.
Yet, I sit beneath her windowsill,
With my trusty ink and feather-quill,
And serenade her nightly, still;
My heart, to her, I'll forever spill.
Author's Note
Ever felt that someone is out of your league?
Inspired by my own feelings, and a song that I really like:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lHhDfbBdK1A
Also, I threw a book reference in there ;)
And... this was probably also subconsciously inspired by Romeo and Juliet!
Inspired by my own feelings, and a song that I really like:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lHhDfbBdK1A
Also, I threw a book reference in there ;)
And... this was probably also subconsciously inspired by Romeo and Juliet!
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Re. Ordinary Me
17th Apr 2020 11:30pm
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18th Apr 2020 00:24am
Thank you, Jen... I just finished writing this. The song in the description is one I have always related to. Growing up, I was really shy, and my self-esteem and social skills were pretty poor, so I often had crushes over the years who were 'out of my league'.
Anyway... glad you liked it, and thanks for stopping by!
Anyway... glad you liked it, and thanks for stopping by!
Re. Ordinary Me
17th Apr 2020 11:36pm
Re: Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 00:43am
Thank you, 13. I take a lot of time to make sure things sound as smooth as possible, but I am always open to criticisms (even if I am stubborn to them). I hope that shows. I appreciate your continued readership and support, friend :)
Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 00:04am
dearest NB I love the feeling behind the write
along with the flow beautiful ❤
along with the flow beautiful ❤
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18th Apr 2020 00:45am
Thank you very much, sweet crimsin, for those kind words. I'm glad you can feel me here... and I'm flattered by your RL entry. I appreciate you! :)
Re: Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 00:45am
Awww, thanks so much for stopping by again, Eerie. Your kind words are much appreciated! :)
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18th Apr 2020 00:46am
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Re: Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 2:08am
Awww, I'm so glad that you liked this so much, socks :)
Perhaps you'll stop by to dance with me some another time!
Your readership and support is much appreciated! <3
Perhaps you'll stop by to dance with me some another time!
Your readership and support is much appreciated! <3
Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 1:38am
Re: Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 2:11am
That's a really kind compliment, Poetic_Strength,
You have always been really sweet to me... as always, your kindness and support are much appreciated :)
...and I am flattered by the RL entry add ❤️
You have always been really sweet to me... as always, your kindness and support are much appreciated :)
...and I am flattered by the RL entry add ❤️
Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 2:19am
This is an extraordinary write- I will definitely be rereading for some much needed inspiration x
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Re: Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 3:16am
Thank you so much, Emily Rose :)
I'm so glad to be able to provide inspiration! Your continued support is deeply appreciated... and I'm honored by your RL entry add <3
I'm so glad to be able to provide inspiration! Your continued support is deeply appreciated... and I'm honored by your RL entry add <3
Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 3:06am
Re: Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 4:18am
Thank you, Damon! Your readership and support is most appreciated :)
Also, I am honored by the RL!
Also, I am honored by the RL!
Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 4:41am
We beautiful poem, you are making gooey and mushy inside. Remember always be yourself. Keep on writing.
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Dear NB,
The exquisite pain of unrequited love, I think one if the most agonizing emotions a human can endure. I loved the gentle rhyming and meter of this piece but the story behind it of feeling like there’s no possible way to be noticed...oh! How well I know this feeling. This delectable work was an arrow through my heart in understanding. Beautifully expressed, awesomely crafted. H🌷
The exquisite pain of unrequited love, I think one if the most agonizing emotions a human can endure. I loved the gentle rhyming and meter of this piece but the story behind it of feeling like there’s no possible way to be noticed...oh! How well I know this feeling. This delectable work was an arrow through my heart in understanding. Beautifully expressed, awesomely crafted. H🌷
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Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 9:43am
Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 10:45am
Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 11:38am
Nice, remember your never less or more than anyone, all equal but different,
Really good writing.
Really good writing.
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Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 11:39am
This is lovely NB. Many can relate to this sweet spill . I love the imagery.<3
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Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 11:51am
Yes, I've been prone to these hopeless crushes all my life! You've captured it quite beautifully.
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Re. Ordinary Me
18th Apr 2020 1:08pm
Your author notes speaks volumes and yes I have encountered someone who I felt was out my reach only to discover it was my own way of thinking without even trying that I wasn't her type yet years later our path cross we were together for 7 years until she passed away sometimes we short change ourselves out of what could be a good and beautiful thing respect brother poet
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Re. Ordinary Me
22nd Apr 2020 11:23am
I think most people have felt this way at some point in their life. Our minds like to torment us at times. I got the better of mine to some extent but it still trips me up at times, when I am not looking.
Lovely piece. :)
Lovely piece. :)
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Re. Ordinary Me
24th Apr 2020 7:20am
I love this. I had never heard the song before, I love where music can lead a person. I did a similar thing with a poem called Rice I wrote after listening to a Damien Rice song Accidental Babies. I don't know how anyone would learn to cope with heartbreak without music. Thank you for making a person feel less alone.
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Re. Ordinary Me
4th May 2020 5:17am