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And Pain Becomes a Place
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And pain becomes a place to call your own
Where company is unapproachable.
To make it like your heart is made of stone,
Enrobed in sackcloth and invisible.
The longer Time pretends to have a say
And pain becomes a place to call your own,
You start to wonder why you even stay;
Unfortunate, your ghost is right at home.
You feel your chances for a life have flown,
You try to run but you can’t hide for long.
And pain becomes a place to call your own
Where all your worth is sold off for a song.
When death is but a number on a screen
And all along, you’re no one, home alone,
It’s day & night when hopes are never seen,
And pain becomes a place to call your own.
And pain becomes a place to call your own
Where company is unapproachable.
To make it like your heart is made of stone,
Enrobed in sackcloth and invisible.
The longer Time pretends to have a say
And pain becomes a place to call your own,
You start to wonder why you even stay;
Unfortunate, your ghost is right at home.
You feel your chances for a life have flown,
You try to run but you can’t hide for long.
And pain becomes a place to call your own
Where all your worth is sold off for a song.
When death is but a number on a screen
And all along, you’re no one, home alone,
It’s day & night when hopes are never seen,
And pain becomes a place to call your own.
Author's Note
Day 12 of 30
75 unique words of 132 total.
With permission by calamitygin, authoress of “Enduring”:
“And pain becomes a place ....
of worthwhile suffering".
75 unique words of 132 total.
With permission by calamitygin, authoress of “Enduring”:
“And pain becomes a place ....
of worthwhile suffering".
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Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
12th Apr 2020 4:02pm
I know this feeling from the bottom of my heart, poetess. Beautiful rhymes in this touching spill... ❤️
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Re: Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
12th Apr 2020 4:22pm
My grateful thanks to you, my NB friend. And yes, it’s a universal thing as the world rotates on its axis in spite a pandemic.
Jade➰
Jade➰
Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
12th Apr 2020 4:14pm
Can totally relate with this piece of spoken words I know this feeling all to well myself..respect dear poetess
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Re: Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
12th Apr 2020 4:32pm
“all too well”...
Dear Stoney, I thank you, as I embrace how this affects you, with much respect.
Jade➰
Dear Stoney, I thank you, as I embrace how this affects you, with much respect.
Jade➰
Re: Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
12th Apr 2020 7:08pm
Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
12th Apr 2020 4:27pm
Re: Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
12th Apr 2020 4:37pm
Thanks so much, Jenny; an honor.
And Easter tidings as well to you.
Jadey➰
And Easter tidings as well to you.
Jadey➰
Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
12th Apr 2020 4:53pm
This is so heartfelt and raw. I had to reread it a few times to make sure I was grasping the poem in its entirety. Nice write as always x
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Re: Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
12th Apr 2020 5:15pm
Why thank you, dear Emily. The thoroughness from your read & reread is very much appreciated. Take care, and be well.
Jade➰
Jade➰
Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
12th Apr 2020 5:21pm
Re: Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
Thank you, sister of the Pen. And yes, it appears others understand through experience. The difference this time around is that we’re being surround by a virulent agent with an unknown sell-by date.
God help us.
Jade➰
God help us.
Jade➰
Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
12th Apr 2020 5:25pm
Re: Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
12th Apr 2020 5:52pm
Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
13th Apr 2020 3:01pm
Pain can come in so many different forms.. it tears at you at so many levels. It reduces your world view to the moment and isolates you from others. You remain solitary and disconnected. Very well done! T.
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Re: Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
13th Apr 2020 6:16pm
Thank you, T, as everything you say is truth, and the reality we know here in real time.
Be safe & well,
Jade🐾
Be safe & well,
Jade🐾
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Re: Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
13th Apr 2020 6:22pm
Thank you so much, my friend. In fact, I can’t thank you enough for your touching words, and the honor.🙏🏻
Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
13th Apr 2020 10:02pm
Dear JP,
I can only repeat all the previous comments, and they used all the good words so I can’t even sound fancy!
This piece is so touching it hurt. I am left speechless and that is not an easy accomplishment. Stunning write. Still trying to catch my breath. H🌷
I can only repeat all the previous comments, and they used all the good words so I can’t even sound fancy!
This piece is so touching it hurt. I am left speechless and that is not an easy accomplishment. Stunning write. Still trying to catch my breath. H🌷
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Re: Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
Oh dear H, what can I say?
You found the words, and I’m light-headed...
Thank you for this & the honor.
Jade🐾
You found the words, and I’m light-headed...
Thank you for this & the honor.
Jade🐾
Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
17th Apr 2020 3:39pm
"When death is but a number on a screen
And all along, you’re no one, home alone,"
These two lines bear so much weight and truth all around the world when he hear and read the stories. Those in power just talk of numbers like it's some mere stock without any sense of compassion or humanity.
Well done.
And all along, you’re no one, home alone,"
These two lines bear so much weight and truth all around the world when he hear and read the stories. Those in power just talk of numbers like it's some mere stock without any sense of compassion or humanity.
Well done.
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Re: Re. And Pain Becomes a Place
17th Apr 2020 5:02pm
Thank you so much for this, Wally - the honor & the part of the piece you’ve highlighted - that summarizes the simplest of Truths about this pandemic event.
Continued wellbeing & safety, dear.
Continued wellbeing & safety, dear.