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Limericks, Nr.05 — Whenever
Whenever a reason is used
to tighten authority’s screws
it’s vital to question
the reason that’s given
exposing the clandestine clues
and sifting the various views
is tiresome, it gives you the blues
but’s gotta be done
though sure ain’t much fun
to pinpoint whatever’s the ruse
and midst all the don’ts and the do’s
we worry at home what’s to lose
but while we’re retracted
authorities acted:
a match has been lit to a fuse
it’s burning real fast, and the news
is ready to prompt us with cues,
uploads our psychology
new ideology,
shaping the options we choose
so stand back and calmly peruse
what’s painting political hues
and there at the back
the potions are stacked
to serve to the masses the brews.
to tighten authority’s screws
it’s vital to question
the reason that’s given
exposing the clandestine clues
and sifting the various views
is tiresome, it gives you the blues
but’s gotta be done
though sure ain’t much fun
to pinpoint whatever’s the ruse
and midst all the don’ts and the do’s
we worry at home what’s to lose
but while we’re retracted
authorities acted:
a match has been lit to a fuse
it’s burning real fast, and the news
is ready to prompt us with cues,
uploads our psychology
new ideology,
shaping the options we choose
so stand back and calmly peruse
what’s painting political hues
and there at the back
the potions are stacked
to serve to the masses the brews.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 12th Apr 2020
| Edited 10th Mar 2024
Author's Note
My NaPo day-12 posting. Wish I had something more uplifting to post on Easter Sunday.
Limericks, Nr.04 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/363577-a-stretched-limerick/
Limericks, Nr.06 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/408242-algorithmic-meat-machines/
(photo credit: viktor-talashuk-BvFNArgW7EQ-unsplash)
Limericks, Nr.04 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/363577-a-stretched-limerick/
Limericks, Nr.06 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/408242-algorithmic-meat-machines/
(photo credit: viktor-talashuk-BvFNArgW7EQ-unsplash)
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Re. WHENEVER
12th Apr 2020 3:23pm
I liked the song-songy limerick-type style used here. Very deep and thought provoking, while maintaining a witty, lightly playful tone.. I enjoyed this, Josh :)
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Re: Re. WHENEVER
17th Apr 2020 10:09pm
Thank you NB - glad I managed to strike the right balance. RL much appreciated too.
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17th Apr 2020 10:10pm
Re. WHENEVER
12th Apr 2020 6:10pm
Dear J,
I very much appreciate the message in this write. I think sometimes as of late, the climate for discussion is a bit hot. However, as long as we are able to question the directives put on the table and being forced upon a populace we should. H🌷
I very much appreciate the message in this write. I think sometimes as of late, the climate for discussion is a bit hot. However, as long as we are able to question the directives put on the table and being forced upon a populace we should. H🌷
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Re: Re. WHENEVER
17th Apr 2020 10:12pm
Thank you H, and for the RL too. The two corona threads have certainly been somewhat tempestuous and the shift in politics to forced outcomes without debate can be considered as scary - especially given European history at least. Stay well, blessings, Josh.
Re. WHENEVER
12th Apr 2020 6:57pm
Re: Re. WHENEVER
17th Apr 2020 10:14pm
Thank you Kumar - I'm really looking forward to using my 'way with words' on other topics but I seem unable to boot currents events out of my mind - and my work which usually takes my mind off things is hampered by lock-down. Got too much time to think :))
Re. WHENEVER
12th Apr 2020 9:25pm
Paint it black. I want to see the sun blotted out of the sky. Good write Josh.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. WHENEVER
17th Apr 2020 10:16pm
Thank you BK. I assure you I could paint it a hell of a lot blacker but I restrained myself :))
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13th Apr 2020 2:50am
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17th Apr 2020 10:17pm
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13th Apr 2020 10:04am
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17th Apr 2020 10:18pm
Thank you monkeyman. Really nice to hear from you. Hope you're doing o.k. Best regards, Josh.
Re. WHENEVER
17th Apr 2020 3:35pm
Excellent form and delivery Josh while speaks volumes of truth. Great entry for NaPoWriMo2020,
Hope you are doing well.
Hope you are doing well.
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Re: Re. WHENEVER
17th Apr 2020 10:20pm
Thank you Wallyroo, and for the RL. Am looking forward to a change of topic and sitting in a café to write something different - but that still looks some way off. Take care & your family too. Josh.
Re. WHENEVER
20th Apr 2020 10:13pm
What world will my children grow up in, if I do not at least speak up about something that feels very wrong to me.
Thank you Josh
Thank you Josh
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Re: Re. WHENEVER
21st Apr 2020 11:06am
Yes, and I've got grand-children now too - what world for them? I feel at least I've put my concerns on record. The "something that feels very wrong to me" is a sentiment I thought at first would be quite widely felt (especially among artists/poets), but now I'm not so sure. And thank you for the RL too. Best regards, Josh.
Re. WHENEVER
3rd May 2020 3:28am
I can't even make sense of what's happening, I'm so fluxommed. But your poem rhymes so well it makes it sound like a sailor's tale of timeless peril. I really liked your clever rhymes in Napo, I read all the entries each day. You have a great style :)
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Re: Re. WHENEVER
3rd May 2020 6:24pm
Thank you PR, you're very generous in your comments. I felt Covid kind of hijacked my NaPo concentration, finding myself drawn into the unfolding events like down some kind of rabbit-hole - and then obliged to work out my 'processing it' on-screen as it were - not my preferred option but since I approach NaPo without a plan and just write each day what comes, I had to go with it. All the best to you in these strange times, Josh.