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My Girl
I'll name her melody, cause music is my remedy,
this life is a really wild ride,
And you're gonna be confused most of the time,
Clarity I can try to provide, though i dont have all the answers,
I can promise I'll always be by your side, till the day I die.
Never put up high walls to block everyone out,
but be cautious enough and aware of the demons that lurk about.
Dont let society tell you who to be,
You're not a competition to be judged,
Dont let any man/woman make you an ornament for show and tell,
You must know your self worth, I'll remind you every day,
It doesn't matter what you wanna do in life and who you choose to be,
Block out all the negative things they have to say.
So many things I can think of that ill wanna tell you...
But I'll be patient and wait till the time comes for me to want to have you here,
I just hope I'm a good enough parent,
Cause you'll always be my world,
...well this is only if I ever have a girl☺️😂
this life is a really wild ride,
And you're gonna be confused most of the time,
Clarity I can try to provide, though i dont have all the answers,
I can promise I'll always be by your side, till the day I die.
Never put up high walls to block everyone out,
but be cautious enough and aware of the demons that lurk about.
Dont let society tell you who to be,
You're not a competition to be judged,
Dont let any man/woman make you an ornament for show and tell,
You must know your self worth, I'll remind you every day,
It doesn't matter what you wanna do in life and who you choose to be,
Block out all the negative things they have to say.
So many things I can think of that ill wanna tell you...
But I'll be patient and wait till the time comes for me to want to have you here,
I just hope I'm a good enough parent,
Cause you'll always be my world,
...well this is only if I ever have a girl☺️😂
Published 9th Jan 2020
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9th Jan 2020 10:43pm
Aww, this is really beautiful and sweet. I loved that first line... completely relatable to me :)
Great writing, Jamela! Keep up the great work...<3
Great writing, Jamela! Keep up the great work...<3
9th Jan 2020 10:47pm
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10th Jan 2020 4:33am
10th Jan 2020 6:30am
Good poetic wish and advance advice for a daughter (until I read the last line I wondered if you had just had a baby LOL).
And if you have a boy?
Lovely poem, I enjoyed it thoroughly. I Hope you get blessed with the most beautiful and adorable baby girl♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Lovely poem, I enjoyed it thoroughly. I Hope you get blessed with the most beautiful and adorable baby girl♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
10th Jan 2020 9:07pm
11th Jan 2020 12:52pm
Such a beautiful read. As a father i have a daughter I felt every word. You have an amazing talent.
11th Jan 2020 1:06pm
beautifully composed with deep inspiration of motivation for dont let knowbody tell you who you can be real talk straight up...respect
11th Jan 2020 1:15pm
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