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a face more beautiful than God
I want to run someplace
so far away that no one can
recall the look of my face or
the sound of my name
to be free to run someplace
where the only sound is the
heart of the wind beating
under the wings of the eagle
and the red tail
to be free to be the lone
wolf hunting beneath an
icy winter moon painted
white with frost
to be free of the nagging
expectations of others
to be free to live by one's
own will, convictions and
courage
freedom is the only gift
with a face more beautiful
than God
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Re. a face more beautiful than God
7th Jan 2020 4:48am
This has to be a ubiquitous feeling to the honest of heart. You absolved, with whatever powers have been vested in me, of your guilt for loving freedom. ❤️
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Inspiring ink.
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Re: Re. a face more beautiful than God
7th Jan 2020 10:59am
Re. a face more beautiful than God
Anonymous
7th Jan 2020 10:03am
I enjoy the end stanza because I see God through us and everything as having an infinite number of unique faces. Too me that is freedom of expression personified. A powerful poem couched in non specifics that allows the reader great range of imagination to roam.
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Re: Re. a face more beautiful than God
7th Jan 2020 12:51pm
Non specifics-my random thoughts lol. Always good to hear you Mr Blaze
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. a face more beautiful than God
7th Jan 2020 12:54pm
Re: Re. a face more beautiful than God
7th Jan 2020 1:00pm
Thank you Brenda. I always enjoy hearing from you and reading your work.
big furry hugs,
buddhakitty.
big furry hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. a face more beautiful than God
7th Jan 2020 2:27pm
Thank you so much Ben. The kind words are deeply appreciated. I will attempt to keep up the flow.
warm regards,
buddhakitty.
warm regards,
buddhakitty.
Re. a face more beautiful than God
7th Jan 2020 3:02pm
Re. a face more beautiful than God
7th Jan 2020 7:37pm
Re. a face more beautiful than God
7th Jan 2020 8:29pm
Contrary to my parents drilling me with " 'I want' doesn''t get", I really hope the "I want" in this poem definitely 'gets'.
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Re. a face more beautiful than God
23rd Sep 2020 1:07pm
I so completely resonate with this.
"to be free of the nagging
expectations of others"
Some days I wonder if the things I am doing are for myself, or for other people...
Great piece to ponder.
"to be free of the nagging
expectations of others"
Some days I wonder if the things I am doing are for myself, or for other people...
Great piece to ponder.
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Re: Re. a face more beautiful than God
23rd Sep 2020 1:55pm
I think we all ask ourselves that question at times, Eerie.
Thank you for the kind words.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you for the kind words.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. a face more beautiful than God
29th Dec 2020 1:42pm
Oh, I want this too! Beautiful expression. Those darn expectations.... including my own, which whisper in rather familiar voices.
Bravo
Bravo
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Re: Re. a face more beautiful than God
29th Dec 2020 4:41pm
Yes. We must beware of those expectations and where they can lead us emotionally, especially when those expectations come from others with an agenda.
Thank you for the read.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you for the read.
hugs,
buddhakitty.