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Feast
She favors wearing black
The color of her soul
She will nothing lack
While being in control
I am willing to submit
Learn how to obey
It is a thrill, I must admit
Being potential prey
She is my crimson queen
And darkness of my night
My body may be lean
But she feasts in deep delight.
The color of her soul
She will nothing lack
While being in control
I am willing to submit
Learn how to obey
It is a thrill, I must admit
Being potential prey
She is my crimson queen
And darkness of my night
My body may be lean
But she feasts in deep delight.
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22nd Dec 2019 11:53pm
Glad to read your sense of dark humour is alive and kicking Crow. All the best for the new year, Josh.
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My humor might be a bit twisted at times, but I try to get away with it. Thank you Josh. I wish you a fabulous new year.
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You talking about me...😁?Kidding. I like this poem Crowfly. Miss you while I was gone.
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23rd Dec 2019 3:56am
I've missed you too, Grace You're one of my favorites here. Thank you for the kind words!
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23rd Dec 2019 6:13am
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23rd Dec 2019 6:34am
It’s always good to see you & devoted Ninja when the pen strikes 12, my friend.🐾
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23rd Dec 2019 3:08pm
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23rd Dec 2019 4:03pm
Crowfly, mo chara daor! Another example of that uniquely remarkable , signature dark style, of yours! So surely such m u t u a l pleasures, and delights, to be experienced, in the surrender to this dark "Huntress"! ;
In my extended "hiatus" from DU, i have missed the enjoyment of your poetry.....and i am glad and grateful--indeed--to discover that you continue to honor us, here, with your creations!
Si'ocha'in a bheith leat Always,
Enchantress
In my extended "hiatus" from DU, i have missed the enjoyment of your poetry.....and i am glad and grateful--indeed--to discover that you continue to honor us, here, with your creations!
Si'ocha'in a bheith leat Always,
Enchantress
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24th Dec 2019 1:02am
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Anonymous
28th Jan 2020 3:34am
Hey Crow.......you’re so good at mixing moods from one stanza to the next......luv reading you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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