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Lingering thoughts in clouds
softness of fluffs
gathered in clouds
clinging on grass blades
trodden by indifference
heart beating echoing
rustles of dead leaves
disturbed by desperation
memories dulled by dusts
crawling back to den
curled on hard ground
floating in ameobic silence
willing to breath again
gathered in clouds
clinging on grass blades
trodden by indifference
heart beating echoing
rustles of dead leaves
disturbed by desperation
memories dulled by dusts
crawling back to den
curled on hard ground
floating in ameobic silence
willing to breath again
Published 19th Dec 2019
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19th Dec 2019 3:29am
Hello, beautiful flower! It’s so good to see you back... like one of those clouds drifting in.🌤
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19th Dec 2019 3:41am
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19th Dec 2019 7:38am
Incredible writing, Grace! On top of being wonderfully vivid and descriptive, the alliteration, specifically in the middle stanza really, was especially enjoyable to read. Really, you've done a beautiful job with this one - excellent!
19th Dec 2019 8:48am
19th Dec 2019 12:15pm
Breath of life-Breathe Deep Grace!!!
Emotional Writes make for Beautiful poetry-So glad to have You back in DU!!!
Emotional Writes make for Beautiful poetry-So glad to have You back in DU!!!
19th Dec 2019 3:34pm
19th Dec 2019 11:10pm
I can feel that 'soft floatiness' juxtaposed with some rough experience; recover well, Josh.
19th Dec 2019 11:19pm
Hi Josh. Thank you so much for reading this and for being here. I'm just glad to be back.
20th Dec 2019 5:17pm
There is a tenderness to the soft meter of this write. Ethereal as the clouds themselves. It is wonderful to see you Grace. 💕
21st Dec 2019 2:18am
Dear Daniel. I missed you. Thank you for reading me and commenting on this humble poem.😀
20th Dec 2019 5:23pm
You are in my thoughts and prayers, Grace. May your healing be swift and life fulfilled! xo
21st Dec 2019 2:20am
24th Dec 2019 7:52am
This poetry is magnificent... glory be..peace, & pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my website & poems 2 :).. thank you.
24th Dec 2019 8:49am
I will definitely check you out. Thanks for reading and commenting on my humble poem.
24th Dec 2019 9:14am
