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courage
though the
skies are
dark with
arrows
keep kicking
sand in the
face of God
laughing
laughing
laughing
until the
wind no
longer
remembers
your name
Published 16th Dec 2019
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16th Dec 2019 1:55am
This reminds me of Caddyshack; the Bishop's epic golf game. . .it also reminded me of the tenacity of 300 ( probably the darkened sky with arrows ). At any rate, it's totally relatable and what makes a good poem ( and obviously movie ).
16th Dec 2019 2:40am
Now all i will think about is Chevy Chase, Bill Murray and that dammed gopher...lol.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
16th Dec 2019 2:41am
17th Dec 2019 1:30am
I was reading a book by Osho on Daoism this morning and in it he says that if happiness is dependent on an external source then it is not true happiness...your poem says the very same thing to me...great write Kitty.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
17th Dec 2019 1:36am
17th Dec 2019 6:39pm
Dear BK,
I love the last line. It’s epic to me. I look forward to being forgotten (I know that’s weird most folks want to be remembered) the way you’ve phrased that is really lovely! H🌷
I love the last line. It’s epic to me. I look forward to being forgotten (I know that’s weird most folks want to be remembered) the way you’ve phrased that is really lovely! H🌷
17th Dec 2019 7:05pm
