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Loving Words

You make me smile,
like a cool summer's day;
Like the laughter of children
as they frolic and play

You make me laugh,
with your delectable witticism;
Such a dazzling smile could
Erase any trace of my cynicism

You make me feel ,
with your tender caress;
your radiant heart
never fails to impress

When you are joyful
There's a light in your eyes
That could brighten the world
As the sun in the sky...

But when you are down
The whole world feels your pain,
Like a little black cloud
That brings in the rain

Oh, and when you are weary
and your smile is amiss,
When you're in need of a hug
Or long for a kiss...

just call my name and I'll be there
to show you I love you;
I still care
Written by NewBeginnings
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Author's Note
I couldn't come up with a good title for this one, so I finally just settled on loving words because of the dual meaning :)
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