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FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
Real woman
real body
ostensibly owned
property of none.
except herself
soul ownership
Big, inquisitive, kind
empathetic, sapphire eyes
Maggie Gyllenhaal mouth
to her, first endowed
mischievous, playful smile
eminently kissable lips
Penchant for fine footwear
stilettos but not porno
expensive, leather
each toe respected
too rich for my type (P)oet blood
Designer business frocks
hang on Botticelli goddess shoulders
fabric left purposely unkempt, unpressed
mere disposable wrapping
enshrouding a curvaceous masterpiece
Breasts, voluptuous and proud
escape ephemeral lingerie
the tight grip of bondage-wear
twins but fraternal
each globe unique perfection
attentive, fuschia nipples
alluring promontories
mid dark pink areola seas
Mysterious transformation
when playing submissive
mid length, blonde hair
pulled back in a severe ponytail
naked, kneeling, palms down
pressing carpet poised
like a Westminster contestant
awaiting master's commands
This lovely lady has stories to tell
real body
ostensibly owned
property of none.
except herself
soul ownership
Big, inquisitive, kind
empathetic, sapphire eyes
Maggie Gyllenhaal mouth
to her, first endowed
mischievous, playful smile
eminently kissable lips
Penchant for fine footwear
stilettos but not porno
expensive, leather
each toe respected
too rich for my type (P)oet blood
Designer business frocks
hang on Botticelli goddess shoulders
fabric left purposely unkempt, unpressed
mere disposable wrapping
enshrouding a curvaceous masterpiece
Breasts, voluptuous and proud
escape ephemeral lingerie
the tight grip of bondage-wear
twins but fraternal
each globe unique perfection
attentive, fuschia nipples
alluring promontories
mid dark pink areola seas
Mysterious transformation
when playing submissive
mid length, blonde hair
pulled back in a severe ponytail
naked, kneeling, palms down
pressing carpet poised
like a Westminster contestant
awaiting master's commands
This lovely lady has stories to tell
Author's Note
Abiding by the premise that all things beautiful deserve poetic description, I wrote this piece as a tribute to an anonymous goddess muse found woven in the web.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
2nd Oct 2019 7:12am
Lovely tribute, tastefully described woman from head to toe. Favourite verse the description of the breasts.
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Re: Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
2nd Oct 2019 8:01am
Thank you Solomon! I did enjoy writing that stanza. The "areola sea" phrase I've used once before but I can't remember in which poem.
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Anonymous
2nd Oct 2019 11:59am
Must be quite the inspiration. You could make a calendar type series and do a "Muse of the Month".

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Re: Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
2nd Oct 2019 5:10pm
Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
2nd Oct 2019 12:09pm
you have the same gentle, sensual touch with capturing a woman's essence as ruben did... each curve a celebration...
this is gorgeous writing
this is gorgeous writing
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Re: Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
2nd Oct 2019 5:13pm
Thank you so much, Katja! Your comment gave me thrilling tingles. Did the "Westminster contestant" line work? Wait I think I misspelled it...supposed to be Westminster. DOH!
Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
2nd Oct 2019 12:33pm
Beautiful write, I've often seen myself like this while standing before the mirror....daydreaming with my eyes closed.
You have the gift, my friend...flaunt it!
You have the gift, my friend...flaunt it!
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Re: Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
2nd Oct 2019 5:25pm
Teri, I am certain you are just as beautiful. I appreciate your words of encouragement.
Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
2nd Oct 2019 12:55pm
That muse certainly have inspired you to give ode homage to al the women in the world, the ones you've known and unknown.
You sold me by mentioning maggie's name :)
Niecely done GW.
You sold me by mentioning maggie's name :)
Niecely done GW.
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Re: Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
2nd Oct 2019 5:28pm
Thank you, Layla! I was hoping the piece would have a more universal message and I am glad that you pick up on that. I have always enjoyed Maggie's authenticity and her lack of inhibition.
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Anonymous
2nd Oct 2019 1:38pm
You painted her image so eloquently! It made the last stanza all that much more powerful. Very nice! :-)

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Re: Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
2nd Oct 2019 5:31pm
Thank you so much it means so much more coming from a Goddess of eloquence. I am glad that I could capture her essence so well.
Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
2nd Oct 2019 2:18pm
This is as lovely as it is tasteful Gahddess. All men should revere women as such.
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Re: Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
2nd Oct 2019 5:33pm
Thank you, Ahavati! I agree and I know the world would be a much better, kinder place if women had more say in its administration.
Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
4th Oct 2019 2:37pm
Admiration, how often it happens, for Amazons of all type it is greatness held high.
Quite a tasty Write Gahddess, apologies that I'm not around much, trying to peek in from time to time again, Hope all is well, happy to see You here My Friend!!!
Quite a tasty Write Gahddess, apologies that I'm not around much, trying to peek in from time to time again, Hope all is well, happy to see You here My Friend!!!
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Re: Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
4th Oct 2019 5:12pm
Thank you so much, Sir Soul! I'm glad you do peek in from time-to-time...we need your solid wisdom. I appreciate your encouraging comment. Take care.
Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
14th Oct 2019 6:08am
This is absolutely beautiful & such an eloquent & sentimental tribute. Its amazing how a soul can connect so easily with another without even being aware. I've always been honored & humbled when given knowledge. Seeing myself turned into a piece of writing was one of the most incredible gifts ever. I reveal my muse crushes, rubbing it all in their face, lacking restraint. Lol.😅 Me wonders if perhaps one day, you'll tell her...hmm
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Re: Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
14th Oct 2019 4:06pm
Thank you so much, Pandora! I appreciate very much your comments. They always lift me up, Make me happy! You and I share a love for the beauty of the human form, intimacy, romance, and sensuality. We know what fundementaly makes the world go around. I actually shared the poem with the subject...she really enjoyed the piece, thank goodness!
Re: Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
15th Oct 2019 3:00am
I'm honored you feel that way, it is a very mutual feeling though. We're similar, as you've said before, so of course , and I'm so grateful! 💜🙏 I'm beyond stoked that you revealed it & she was happy with it. Yay! I have a pestering kitty to love on, and then I'll return to search your page again. The real kind of kitty ...as in species, that is! Ha...😄
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Re: Re. FREE WILL DOMESTICANT
15th Oct 2019 3:07am
Thanks for the clarification while at the same time stoking my fire 😘 What the hell give'um both love, they're equally deserving 😉