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Of Every Kind
When I was young I’d flitter through the sky,
And ransack all the stars of magic dust.
I’d walk lightheartedly ‘cross fields of rye,
Within my rucksack filled with wanderlust.
I was so young, the rebel in me rose,
To holler with a shout that shook the world.
I gazed straight up to God, “I want to know,”
And then the magic started to unfurl.
All thru’ the days & nights, my quicken’d step,
The rhapsody of knowledge filled my mind.
Thru’ jungle, swamp & forest rivulet,
Of bamboo, rattan, growth of every kind.
At last I felt redemption came to me,
The branches overhead were full of fruit.
They heavy hung like ripen rosary;
So hungry and so grateful, I fell mute.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 27th Aug 2019
Author's Note
For the letter “R”.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Of Every Kind
28th Aug 2019 2:53am
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28th Aug 2019 5:01pm
*coming up for a bit more air, trying to get better*
Omgosh, Kitty, such a wonderful shout-out, thank you!
tiger hugs
Jade🐾
Omgosh, Kitty, such a wonderful shout-out, thank you!
tiger hugs
Jade🐾
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28th Aug 2019 4:25am
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28th Aug 2019 5:04pm
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Why thank you, dear sister, for such cheerful words of enjoyment!
Jade🐾
Why thank you, dear sister, for such cheerful words of enjoyment!
Jade🐾
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28th Aug 2019 6:20am
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28th Aug 2019 5:07pm
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Thank you so much, Emily Rose, I’m very touched by this. x
Jade🐾
Thank you so much, Emily Rose, I’m very touched by this. x
Jade🐾
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28th Aug 2019 9:57am
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28th Aug 2019 5:13pm
*coming up for a bit more air, trying to get better*
Gosh, Poppy, thanks so very much. I’ve been very under the weather for days, but I’m trying to show signs of life.
Your enjoyment of my piece, and the honor of place on your RL is so very appreciated, thank you.
Gosh, Poppy, thanks so very much. I’ve been very under the weather for days, but I’m trying to show signs of life.
Your enjoyment of my piece, and the honor of place on your RL is so very appreciated, thank you.
Re. Of Every Kind
28th Aug 2019 2:59pm
Dear J-P,
Gorgeous write! Nothing more satisfying than the relief one gets after a lengthy search for whatever it may be, and the joy of being sated. You’ve written that beautifully! H🌷
Gorgeous write! Nothing more satisfying than the relief one gets after a lengthy search for whatever it may be, and the joy of being sated. You’ve written that beautifully! H🌷
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28th Aug 2019 5:24pm
*coming up for a bit more air, trying to get better*
My sincerest thanks to you, dear H, for your wonderful appreciation of my effort. I wish I could say more but I’m close to curling up.💤
Jade x
My sincerest thanks to you, dear H, for your wonderful appreciation of my effort. I wish I could say more but I’m close to curling up.💤
Jade x
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28th Aug 2019 4:23pm
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28th Aug 2019 5:17pm
*coming up for a bit more air, I’ve been ill, trying to get better*
Thank you, Timothy, and welcome to the Deep.
Thank you, Timothy, and welcome to the Deep.
Re. Of Every Kind
28th Aug 2019 4:25pm
Jade, this is beautiful and whimsical in your own signature style that leaves me in awe. I see you scrambled the list of the words and I guess there are no set rules on that which i wasn't quite sure when i entered mine. But regardless it was fun. Good luck in the comp. This certainly is wonderful, nice job!
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28th Aug 2019 4:54pm
Thank you dearly, Layla, for your generous words.
I’ve been down with illness but today I’m going to try to reply to comments left to me over the days ( tho’ already I’m going weak ).
I’m honored how you are taken by my effort, this means a lot. I’ve entered many of the alphabet comps and always used the words on the list in the order inspired.
And good luck to you!
I’ve been down with illness but today I’m going to try to reply to comments left to me over the days ( tho’ already I’m going weak ).
I’m honored how you are taken by my effort, this means a lot. I’ve entered many of the alphabet comps and always used the words on the list in the order inspired.
And good luck to you!
Re. Of Every Kind
28th Aug 2019 10:59pm
What an epic feel to this piece. It's so engaging from beginning to end.
Good luck in the comp Ms. Jade.
Good luck in the comp Ms. Jade.
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28th Aug 2019 11:46pm
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2nd Sep 2019 11:38am
Thank you so much, my tomcat, for everything. To hear your enjoyment of this piece grow over time was fascinating, and a thrill! <3
Tigger
Tigger
Re. Of Every Kind
30th Aug 2019 3:12pm
You are so good at these comps Jadey. This is beautiful writing, with a wild and celestial spirit. Rest up and get well soon.
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2nd Sep 2019 11:43am
Thank you, Daniel, you’re most kind, and I’m glad for your appreciation.
Aah yes I’m trying... the extreme heat & humidity is slowing me down.
Jade🙏🏻
Aah yes I’m trying... the extreme heat & humidity is slowing me down.
Jade🙏🏻
Re. Of Every Kind
30th Aug 2019 8:50pm
Outstanding miss jade for you always bring the a game every write a great writer you are
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2nd Sep 2019 11:46am