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E 35
Summer fades
It tested us
A few more ice cream cones
Then winter
It tested us
A few more ice cream cones
Then winter
Published 23rd Aug 2019
Author's Note
This summer tested our mettle. Not sure we passed the test.
Might understand redemption a little better but I was never really good at conceding. The mess just comes back in a different format.
I'll be your mentor if you ask, time to give back .....
Might understand redemption a little better but I was never really good at conceding. The mess just comes back in a different format.
I'll be your mentor if you ask, time to give back .....
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23rd Aug 2019 12:25pm
Winter in my eyes, winter in my shoes, winter in the breathe, winter in my soul.
Good write PoetSpeak .
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Good write PoetSpeak .
hugs,
buddhakitty.
23rd Aug 2019 12:27pm
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23rd Aug 2019 2:07pm
It seems a little early but this morning there were leaves starting to change and acorns all over the ground on my walk to the bus this morning. Maybe it's just my emotions imagining things...Lovely movement here
23rd Aug 2019 2:51pm
Blistering heat all week and today cool and a little rainy. Autumn just around the corner , then dreaded winter
Your perceptions are correct luv
Your perceptions are correct luv
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23rd Aug 2019 5:23pm
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23rd Aug 2019 7:46pm
23rd Aug 2019 9:37pm
grass stains, dandelions, mosquito bites and blueberries... so much summer in this delightful eye candy!
23rd Aug 2019 10:35pm
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24th Aug 2019 10:30pm
LOL @ hrshykss. To me it looks like a streamer waving leaving traces as the summer begins to fade.
25th Aug 2019 1:39am
4th Sep 2019 4:23am
I thought of fruitstripe gum when I saw this and a sugar high, the high wearing off as summer ends..
4th Sep 2019 11:51am
