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reflections of a water sprite
a cranberry dawn bittersweet
rose in the skies in my quiet time
its beauty compelled me to break my silence
I was saddened in my reverie
pale compared with her glory
I dance on her waters
a sprite unnoticed by the passersby
the day herself took notice of me
Mother Nature's handiwork true and powerful
I was a creature of mischief
playing tricks on the mortal mind
there was a place for me in her heart
a proper time for all things
my stirring ushered in the sun's brilliance
but I was not the sun
I celebrate with Mother
but not Nature herself
the sky colors me blue
I am a reflection of the air
fashioned in the likeness of the stage--
the dawn dances upon
little one are we not all reflections?
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Re. reflections of a water sprite
13th Jun 2019 1:26pm
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13th Jun 2019 1:28pm
aw thank you graciously dearest Liam...you made my morning bright...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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13th Jun 2019 1:30pm
Re: Re. reflections of a water sprite
13th Jun 2019 1:32pm
aw sorry to hear that I hope she feels better soon ❤ and congratulations on the coming babe 🌹
Re. reflections of a water sprite
Anonymous
13th Jun 2019 1:42pm
Endearing and whimsical....take. A bow
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13th Jun 2019 1:55pm
Re. reflections of a water sprite
13th Jun 2019 2:03pm
The Sprite seemingly unnoticed is surely noticed and needed. Beauty in depths
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13th Jun 2019 2:05pm
Re. reflections of a water sprite
13th Jun 2019 2:15pm
Enchanting masterpiece. I could envision every line.
You're a very talented writer.
You're a very talented writer.
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13th Jun 2019 2:16pm
Re. reflections of a water sprite
13th Jun 2019 3:51pm
ethereal Beauty spilled here
with, for me, hints of poignancy or envy (as i said - i read hints....wee orts of)
nevertheless, very sensually created imagery for me
with, for me, hints of poignancy or envy (as i said - i read hints....wee orts of)
nevertheless, very sensually created imagery for me
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13th Jun 2019 3:53pm
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13th Jun 2019 6:46pm
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Re. reflections of a water sprite
13th Jun 2019 10:33pm
Nature infused brilliance. There's more beauty to behold, my thoughts are too scattered to convey the facets. I love it & you too!❤
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Re: Re. reflections of a water sprite
13th Jun 2019 10:43pm
thank you beautiful Pandora your love says it all for me lovely one...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. reflections of a water sprite
14th Jun 2019 00:34am
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14th Jun 2019 1:03am
Re. reflections of a water sprite
14th Jun 2019 7:16am
"a cranberry dawn bittersweet
rose in the skies in my quiet time
its beauty compelled me to break my silence'
This is a beautiful rite you are performing, Crims
love
Jeff
rose in the skies in my quiet time
its beauty compelled me to break my silence'
This is a beautiful rite you are performing, Crims
love
Jeff
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Re: Re. reflections of a water sprite
14th Jun 2019 6:56pm
aw thank you graciously dearest Jeff for such a beautiful comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. reflections of a water sprite
14th Jun 2019 4:54pm
You're many facets are all so wonderful Brenda, like a glittering gem, but your tenderness, vulnerability, resonates with me most powerfully. <3
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Re: Re. reflections of a water sprite
14th Jun 2019 6:57pm
thank you graciously dearest Daniel for showing love for my vulnerable side I have to silently wait for her to emerge...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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15th Jun 2019 3:48am
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15th Jun 2019 3:50am
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Re: Re. reflections of a water sprite
15th Jun 2019 4:07am
oh good I'm happy getting just the right picture for a poem isn't always easy I'm glad it worked for you ❤
Re. reflections of a water sprite
15th Jun 2019 2:55pm
Such a phenomenal piece Brenda I love this!! Beautiful lil ending 👏👏
"little one are we not all reflections? "
I do dig and I do believe so.
Wonderful write!
"little one are we not all reflections? "
I do dig and I do believe so.
Wonderful write!
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15th Jun 2019 3:02pm