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Meeting
The time-dancer sang back and forth through the centuries
calling for his soul-mate, wondering - “surely she must be somewhere,
of all the many millions who live and live again”.
And then, in the crammed poetry section at the back of an old second-hand bookshop
he saw her - absorbed, turning the pages, lips moving silently, reading.
He browsed elsewhere for what seemed like ages; then cleared his throat -
“Errr … excuse me interrupting … may I …?”
“Oh … oh yes of course, I’ve been hogging the space, haven’t I …?”.
Stepping aside smiling, she beckoned him, “Please …”.
He picked a poetry book at random and began speed-reading.
She, long-time apprenticed to the muse’s match-maker
well versed in what to do, looked up increasingly from her intensity.
They edged closer, ’til somehow they touched.
“What took you so long …?” she inquired, whispering, eyes sparkling.
“It took time …” he replied “to learn my half … of our mating song”.
That night, as they lay naked on a bed of softening silken words …
confiding…, wrapping themselves around each other …
a nearby galaxy spun a joyful dance, barely in control.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 17th May 2019
| Edited 9th Mar 2024
Author's Note
(For T & S-D)
(photo credit: karl-callwood-2EzebqzathM-unsplash)
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Anonymous
17th May 2019 10:14pm
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17th May 2019 11:33pm
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17th May 2019 10:42pm
OMFG!! in a metaphoric way - this is nearly EXACTLY
how we became to be!
You, Sir, are ultra observant!
how we became to be!
You, Sir, are ultra observant!
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17th May 2019 11:37pm
Thank you, and for the RL too. I think I was just picking up the vibes and letting them filter through my soul - though the muse certainly had a hand in this one, prompting me no doubt from a superior vantage point. So glad you like it. Wasn't sure for a bit if it was o.k to post it. Then I thought "O.K, this is DUP - go for it". :))
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17th May 2019 11:16pm
Like Sky said, Wow indeed. This is serendipitous, their fates and the stars. That last stanza, "on a bed of softening silken words" is not only just torrid and sensual but it's beautiful as well. Bravo.
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17th May 2019 11:40pm
Thank you again Wallyroo - and for the RL (again, too). I wasn't sure with the last stanza I might be overstepping the mark a bit but you have confirmed I made the right decision to leave it in - so thank you for that.
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18th May 2019 2:45am
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18th May 2019 10:34am
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18th May 2019 3:54am
So beautifully spilled Josh you have captured the role of destiny in such meetings of two souls meant to meet in this life and an apt tribute to Sky and Tallen.
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18th May 2019 10:36am
Thank you Summer; I was trying to capture an 'essence' in the elements of destiny and humanity.
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18th May 2019 10:46am
Josh, do you believe that destiny governs our life that everything is pre ordained?
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18th May 2019 10:59am
Short answer, no. Destiny offers a certain broad structure and direction to our lives but we have free-will to choose how we deal with it. The fact that some greater God might know what choices we are going to make does not make life 'pre-ordained' (IMHO).
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18th May 2019 11:44am
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on destiny Josh. Reminds me of that line from Invictus you shared the other day " I am the master of my fate I am the captain of my soul".
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Anonymous
18th May 2019 1:00pm
This was splendid, Josh. Heeding the muse is a good vacation away from writing about news and currents events.
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18th May 2019 4:28pm
Thank you Johnny - I take it I struck the right balance. And yep, a muse's distraction from the news is no bad thing.
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Anonymous
18th May 2019 3:08pm
Oh, this totally reads like Tallen and Sky's song. Much enjoyed this little bookstore read. :-)
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18th May 2019 4:30pm
Thank you Willow. I had this image of going into one of the many bookshops in Hay-on-Wye (a village with 30+ bookshops) which we visited last year when in the U.K.
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25th May 2019 4:28am
This reminds me of my last trip to Barnes and Noble, where the poetry section was in the back corner and I was reading and a male employee asked if I needed help. Bookshops are magical, love this tale..
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25th May 2019 11:47am
Thank you; it's easy to get lost browsing in a bookshop corner. Glad you liked the tale.
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31st May 2019 00:21am
Bravo! I am a fatalist but I do not believe in some kind of destiny...existentially speaking each choice we make simply rules out all other possibilities in the next moment...but there is that Nietzschean feeling of the eternal recurrence. Love the ink Josh.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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31st May 2019 11:36am
Thanks Harry for visiting and commenting. Destiny & Free-Will is a fascinating subject. I agree each choice we make offers a new unique range of possibilities, but given certain inbuilt programmes and pre-dispositions in our minds, it seems to build our lives in a certain 'direction', sometimes interpreted as 'destiny'.