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the gift of a poet
a poet who fails to reach the heart of the reader is dead
no life flows through their soul anymore
flatlined verses amusing only to one's self are an empty void
a swirling vortex of loneliness
masturbating furiously to a porno queen
who will never return true lusts is dead poetry
I reached the stars when I moved you
connecting on another level
we spoke to the darkness and edged it back
you were my muse and I yours
we tangoed in artistic thought
two misfits of word and deed
whiling the day away seducing the muse
reaching in and transporting the masses to another dimension
our private thoughts their wonderland
a portal where feelings intertwine and dance
hopscotching through time into the next poet's mind
where they too have the power to move
this is the truest artistic expression there is
to get into another's mind and bend it
then born again into the body of their art living on eternally
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Re. the gift of a poet
16th May 2019 3:30pm
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16th May 2019 3:47pm
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16th May 2019 3:50pm
Re. the gift of a poet
16th May 2019 4:02pm
Beautifully spilled Brenda. It is not poetry if it fails to reach and move the heart of the reader.
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Re: Re. the gift of a poet
16th May 2019 4:04pm
thank you beautiful Summer for the love on this write it was inspired by my angry writes lately I realized wasn't reaching my readers this way...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
Re. the gift of a poet
16th May 2019 4:26pm
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16th May 2019 4:32pm
Re. the gift of a poet
16th May 2019 4:51pm
to get into another's mind and bend it
then born again into the body of their art living on eternally- that right there is the Bible of poetic temperance
then born again into the body of their art living on eternally- that right there is the Bible of poetic temperance
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Re: Re. the gift of a poet
16th May 2019 4:55pm
thank you dearest Tim this was kind of a note to self you know what I mean?
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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16th May 2019 5:24pm
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Re: Re. the gift of a poet
16th May 2019 5:47pm
thank you dearest HF for the love on this write... sometimes when I'm writing I hear a voice admonishing me to do right in this poem I was kind of writing what I was being told...
I deeply appreciate the love here...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate the love here...
love Brenda 🌹
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Re. the gift of a poet
16th May 2019 5:23pm
You're on fire. Kick ass. My collaboration with Yelluw is about the same, can't wait to show you it and the quote I chose for the opening. Truth bullet Brenda, but you can't kill the dead. They'll look, but not see. So it goes. Your write is a banner I stand behind. 🙏💖
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Re: Re. the gift of a poet
16th May 2019 5:48pm
thank you graciously dearest Daniel I'm positively beaming from your comment... I can't wait to see your collaboration...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
16th May 2019 7:11pm
The muse will suffer no abuse. She will strut right out the door and leave ya in a draft. And, man, that draft can get mighty cold. I almost always sit with my poetry until I know on every level it's not just an angry or spiteful moment. Those emotions pass but the damage once inflicted will always remain. Well spotted, lovely Dark Angel :-)
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Re: Re. the gift of a poet
16th May 2019 10:00pm
thank you beautiful Willow you're so right this poem was whispered to me by my inner voice... chastising me for my angry poems...I deeply appreciate your wisdom...
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. the gift of a poet
Anonymous
16th May 2019 8:17pm
You never cease to amaze my friend
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18th May 2019 2:53am
thank you graciously dearest Hunter for the love on this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. the gift of a poet
17th May 2019 3:09am
The fine line between titillation and depth. Moved by the expression in this.
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18th May 2019 2:54am
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18th May 2019 2:55am
thank you graciously beautiful Pandora I don't believe this is the case with you your inspiration is simply recharging it will some lovely one...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. the gift of a poet
17th May 2019 5:54am
Dang it all Brenda, I've been trying to write this poem for 40 years but you beat me to the punch!
I forgive you though, sooner or later it had to be done...
Much love and respect!
JJ
I forgive you though, sooner or later it had to be done...
Much love and respect!
JJ
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Re: Re. the gift of a poet
18th May 2019 2:56am
thank you graciously dearest JJ for the love on this write yeah the muse will whisper in another's ear it's happened to me so many times lol... I'm happy this spoke to you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. the gift of a poet
17th May 2019 9:59pm
So perfectly put, so right on. This sums up exactly when I write as for me a songwriter you said it just right. Thanks for writing the words I have always thouht when writing : ) Your pen writes such beatiful words.
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Re: Re. the gift of a poet
18th May 2019 2:57am
thank you graciously dearest Stan for the love on this write I'm happy it spoke to you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. the gift of a poet
20th May 2019 4:36am
aw this doesn't apply to you it was for me really I read your passionate poem your poetry is very much alive...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. the gift of a poet
20th May 2019 4:42am
I don't think so lot's don't write but for a poet to lose their passion and ability to convey connect is a problem ❤
Re. the gift of a poet
7th Jul 2019 7:08pm
I do not know you well however after reading your words I could never ever see you not connecting pulling everyone into your works, you have a gift that you share with us here and I hope long may it continue.
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Re: Re. the gift of a poet
7th Jul 2019 8:47pm
thank you dearest poet when I write sometimes it's like I'm channeling a voice that is a reminder to me how special the ability to reach is and not take it for granted...
I hate when I fail to touch people
as that is my main goal...
I'm happy I reached you...
love Brenda 💕
I hate when I fail to touch people
as that is my main goal...
I'm happy I reached you...
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. the gift of a poet
7th Jul 2019 8:49pm
Brenda you do s you touch so many others, and I don't see you as a person that would take anything for granted.
You are special and never forget that
You are special and never forget that
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7th Jul 2019 9:48pm
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7th Jul 2019 10:03pm
Brenda your heart your soul your mind, you are beautiful you touch people in so many different ways, people see different thoughts take different feelings from you words, that is beautiful amazing and you should never forget that
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